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11 November 2004, 12:20 PM
dont try do it! :D

11 November 2004, 12:58 PM
markovicd- i will TRY hehehehehe :thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 02:10 PM (

well i think this face is done... now i'm going to next modelage.. Armor and body!!!

Thanks Guys!!!

11 November 2004, 02:34 PM
Great model ! and the shaders are awesome !:applause:
I love that kind of mood...

The sketches are cool too but maybe they lack a sense of grandeur. Maybe because you focused on the main character...

Anyway, congrats and good luck !

11 November 2004, 07:25 PM
fala patrick

cara... ta ficando muito da hora!!!

great composition, modeling and texturing... you are one of my favorite!

good luck!! :buttrock:

11 November 2004, 09:31 PM
Great face :thumbsup:

I´m getting a little scard of looking at it :)


11 November 2004, 10:45 PM
To be honest i'll not say that i like that face alone, but this is just a personal opinion. Your last concept is very great and illustrates very well your intentions and the face in that context will be great..Keep on dude!!:thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 11:08 PM
hey nice work on the face buddy... but i wud like to point out some problems.. ur texture is kinda got streached aroud the nose and upper lip area... the brows looks flat, guess you might want to work more on the eyes... beside of those... ur modeling really rocks... i really like the feel of the face in the last update... keep it up buddy... good luck :thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 09:31 AM
:thumbsup: You surely captured not only a moment in that face but a feeling too! :thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 07:29 PM
hey te texture is good but is too much bloody and dark

11 November 2004, 08:49 PM (

just the modeling of helmet for she.. i'm back soon to reply all!! ok
Thanks and sorry for the slowly hehe
C ya!

11 November 2004, 08:52 PM
Hello man!!

Sorry to take a long time to answer.

The model is really great and the expression is showing how scary she is.

About the texture its well done but i think it would be better with the final model to have a better notion with the colors and details.

Keep the great work!!

11 November 2004, 08:58 PM

I just posted right now.

As i said,with the environment,the texture and the model expression is looking much better.

Mete Bronca!!

11 November 2004, 10:11 PM
Só fazendo volume aqui nos posts... kkkkkk

Mas ta cruel d+

Congratulations and go on brother!

C ya! ;)

11 November 2004, 10:44 PM
Deadly Force - thanks dude.. i´m realy need to take a time to make a good concept.. to represent my intentions!! thanks man!!

todesco - thanks dude!!

mr_carl - thanks man!! and don´t scare.. is all fake hehehe

pBarrelas- thanks dude!! i´m igree the face alone is not cool.. hehehe what u think about this helmet?

overcontrast - thanks man!! i fixed some problens (i think yes) hehe i´m focus my priority on the modeling.. i fixx texture and light soon as possible heheh

terraarc - thanks man!!

melkao - thanks man!! i´m igree about the dark, but the blood?!

Blackman - thanks man!!

FR3D- thanks to man!!

Well thanks all!!
c ya!!

11 November 2004, 12:44 AM
Cara to com preguisa de escrever em ingles... hehehehe!!!

Como eu tinha dito, gostei muito do SSS fake que vc fez...

mas o que eu posso falar contra é que os cilios estão muito duros e grossos mas como ela vai aprecer meio distante talvez isso pouco importe...

11 November 2004, 04:00 AM (

just the wireframe

11 November 2004, 04:30 AM
i can tell that some of the textures here are of course bitmaps (or whatever) but how much if this is prodecural like you did on the spider thing? just a curiosity thing, still looking quite good dude.

11 November 2004, 04:35 AM
stork - hy and thanks man!! for this model all textures is bitmaps painted, some layer is photography like dirt maps!

thanks man!

the soldier/sharkship and spider is "full" procedural! "full = 80%, i have bitmap im some channels, i thinkg"

c ya!

11 November 2004, 07:00 AM
You are really working on it. Congratulations good job.

Snake Farlow. The rogue.
Maybe you cold give me some advices and tips.

11 November 2004, 08:22 AM
Whoa, it's a movie! When's it going to be released? heheh...The main character model has a nice style to it, not very realistic but yet quite believable, though I felt the the excessive dirt does make her look a bit zombie-like.

Question, how did you create that kickass, movie-like feel! Is it some kind of post effect?

nice stuff!

11 November 2004, 08:44 AM
Hey there Patrick, nice modeling and texturing there, thumbs up! Only crit is that the scars on the face need a little displacement and the eyebrows need a little shag hair or just splines of some kind, just not to be so flat.

11 November 2004, 01:35 PM
Like I have said before and I agree with Kaksht, those scars need volume, man, otherwise they look like painting dirt.

Rock on!:buttrock:

11 November 2004, 05:44 PM
Well Patrick, the face with the helmet its better but i think that the helmet could be bigger like the one that you draw in the concept sketch!!

11 November 2004, 10:18 PM
Patrick, blz!

As texturas estão ficando duka, e essa garota não é nada baozinha, cara essa cena tá ficando massa parabéns!


11 November 2004, 12:52 AM
damn' great, man!:buttrock: Looks fantastic - maybe the eyes are a little bit too ...wooden???

Pls don't misunderstood me - only a little tweaking with the white texture on the eye...the veins are looking like some kind of wooden structure imho...

Anyway - still a pleasure to look at...Keep it on,mate!:thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 03:35 PM
Hey D3 my friend! This work is fantastic!
The machines are stunning! and this girl is becoming great too!
Wish you the best in this challenge!

Manda bala rapaz, ferro neles! hahaha

11 November 2004, 03:38 PM
SnakeFarlow - thanks man!!

keetmun - wow thanks man!! to be released? may be never hehehe, not is very realistic, i need some years to do more realist, like work 3 months in a unique character hehehe
the aspect of the image is very pos produced man... color correction/grain/lights like glow and inumerous thinks!
i will try show this process soon!! ok!! thanks man!

Kaksht - thanks man!! but the blood in the face not is scar, is splashed blood of another soldier or died people hehehe
about the eyesbrows i don´t know.. if she need i will do.. i´m looking the dstance of camera, and i´m think she don´t need.. hehehe

high - thanks man!! hehehe

pBarrelas - hy dude!! thanks for the coment.. about the helmet well look only the 3d hehe my sketch is just to reference. hehehhe

metaballs2000 - Fala mano! Valeu pelos comentarios cara!! to trampando pra tentar deixar essa cena bacana!! Valeu mano!

Saschi0815 - thanks man!! i will look to this!! thanks !!

Mecman- what i can say?? Thanks dude! hehehehe


11 November 2004, 03:03 PM
portuguese, sory :sad:

hey d-3, parabéns pelo contest, esta ficando muito show.

Eu to com um pouco de dificuldade de visualizar a cena final, Não sei criticar o trabalho com muita clareza. Se for uma mega cena , e a mulher for mais um ítem , então ela ta muito boa.

Mas se for um contest só de modelagem de mulher, talvez falte algo pra ela ser a campeão. Como eu não to conseguindo ver o geral , fico meio perdido. mas você esta de parabéns, criou todo um universo!!!

Da até pena se depois, ele não tiver continuidade.

Parabéns pelo trabalho na space opera. Estou sempre acompanhando. Força sempre.

11 November 2004, 08:00 PM (

modeling and texture for the armor..
i will try to finishi this gril in this week!! i'm need modeling another elementes... work d-3 work man!!!
c&c is welcome!! thanks guys

11 November 2004, 09:27 PM (

just the wire frame. thanks all

11 November 2004, 10:16 PM
your modeling look good, maybe the amor's texture is too used...
Your project is on the wright way continue!

11 November 2004, 10:28 PM
great texturing my friend!

keep going!
keep going!
keep going!
keep going!
keep going!

11 November 2004, 10:32 PM
PORTUGUESE... Sorry, i am very lazy... :D

Grande Patrick!!!

Muito show! Se continuar assim tú vai parar na continuação de MATRIX!!!
Achei que mandava bem em robôs etc. Mas, pelo que vejo manda bem em orgânicos também.

Como vais ser a cena final?


11 November 2004, 10:39 PM
Amazing work!! :scream:

Keep it up!! Great textures!! :thumbsup:

paulo crumbim
11 November 2004, 10:43 PM
falaaa ae pilantra! vein ta ficando bem legal! soh por favor faiz os braços =P huAEHHUaehuAHUE minh aunica opiniaum por enquanto eh de deixar a pele um poukinho, poukinho mesmo, mais rosada, soh pra fica um pouco mais natural, e dar um atençaum maior para os olhos tbm, manda ve ae q com certeza vai ficar bacana! t+

11 November 2004, 07:00 PM (

a litle up date.. come on guys... critiques or coments??? hehehehe
i'm back soon to reply all ok! thanks
Best luck for all!!!
c ya

11 November 2004, 07:21 PM
hey thats really great man... everything looks cool... but 'm not sure about the helomat... it looks odd to me... but bside that its all just kick ass!... rock on dude :thumbsup: :buttrock:

11 November 2004, 08:52 PM
Nice Texture
good luck

11 November 2004, 11:04 PM
hello all!! i´m maked a wallpaper of she.. if some one have interest

1600x1200 click on image (


-| SeWaN |- thanks man!! i´m like the textures hehehe

tabajara - thanks dude!!!

BiBiNhA - ihhaa thanks girl!!!

paulo crumbim - valeu pela dica mano!! vo dar uma olhada nisso!!!

overcontrast - thanks by the coments dude!! i will look this... may be heheheh thanks man!!

Very thanks all!!
c ya!! more critiques or more coments? heheh

paulo crumbim
11 November 2004, 11:22 PM
fala aee d-3, em questão da pele, melhorou bastante, ficou bem mais natural, quanto aos olhos acredito q ainda a oq mexer, mas não se limita só ao globo ocular, acredito que se vc afinar num pouco mais as sombrancelhas vai dar um ar bemmmmm mais feminino na garota, eh isso ae, continua ae vein! t+

11 November 2004, 01:28 AM
pode crer Cumbrim.. vou ver o que posso fazer nisso mas naum to afim de perder mais tempo mexendo nessa mina saca!!! ja se foram 2 semanas nela ¬¬
preciso modelar outras coisas ainda!! heheh
veremos mais pra frente!! heheh

11 November 2004, 01:44 AM
Very good work.!! I like a lot to see these updates. :applause:

Keep the good work. :thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 05:21 AM
Heh heh...she looks a little cross-eyed. Everything looks good no less!


11 November 2004, 09:05 AM
wow... I like it!

Only prob is... you can't perfectly identify her either as a male or female ;)

Is the blood on her face her own? If yes, maybe ad some bumped scars below them so that you can really see her wound... if not... forget what I'm saying :)

really nice!!

11 November 2004, 11:29 AM
Cara ta bem legal, so posso diser o que eu já tinha comentado contigo, a fata de alguma coisa encima dela, como eu disse, podia ser a nave, ou então alguns prédios ou algo do genero pois nao sei como é esse mundo que vc está criando!!!

11 November 2004, 12:35 PM
What can I say? I hate you!! hahahahahahaa
Nice up man, Keep it up with the good work!!

11 November 2004, 12:59 PM
Hey,dude!!!I don't know anything about 3D so can't really give you crits but these images are really impressive!!Maybe the girl look a little bit too young.But that's totally subjective of course.
The spider rocks!

My SpaceBra 2D:

Heber G Conde
11 November 2004, 02:12 PM
Beauty armor!
I like a lot the layers of paint in the armor, and it doesn´t appear to be too much heavy, what is great too!

Keep going man!

11 November 2004, 04:11 PM
Great armor and the textures are awesome ! :thumbsup:
Just one crit : the head seems too big.

Good luck !

11 November 2004, 10:20 PM (

another test... hehehe
i´m back later to reply all!!

11 November 2004, 10:25 PM
hi D-3

great render....
one thing...the lower parts are less rusted than the upper members...its looks a brand new armature...

see ya

11 November 2004, 11:04 PM
great job d-3! It´s amazing to see so many details just for a single of many elements in your opera!


11 November 2004, 12:21 AM
thanks guys!!!

JR.BRAZ - very thanks dude!!!

keetmun - thanks man!! about the cross-eyes.. is look like hehehehe

lehmi - thanks man.. about the blood not is scars.. is splashed blood hehehe

MadnesS - valeu mano.. vou ver isso mais pra frente.. ainda preciso modelar algumas coisas....

mecman - do you hate me your bastard!! hehehehe thanks dude!!!

OKMER - very thanks man!! and yes the girl is young. is intentional hehe thanks again man!!

Heber G Conde - thanks dude!!

Deadly Force - thanks man!! the head is a currecly proportion... in another views.. maybe is because the perspective angle.. i don´t know hehehe

JulianoCastro - thanks man!! i will see this.. thanks!!!

AlexandroCastro - thanks man!! the detail make the diference.. or not hehehehe!!!

thanks all!!

11 November 2004, 12:59 AM
woa! that looks too much better, is great that model, and now i understand why you was'nt agree with me about the blood.
great work:thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 02:34 AM
Not much to say really... just amazing work!! :thumbsup:

Congratulations! Keep it up! :bounce:

11 November 2004, 04:58 AM
melkao - Very thanks dude!!

Bibinha - thanks again!!!

Very Thanks!!!
well i discovered a great tip´s to control hi-poly (face) easy - on max7 only!! hehehe

don´t have anything with this thread but!! hehehe

pls see this thread guys!! (

11 November 2004, 06:44 AM
Oh boy, this is absolutely awesome!
can't wait to see more stuff from you and catch a glimpse on the final compo :)

keep that up m8, such work is making me really love this contest!!

11 November 2004, 03:57 PM
Alô Patrick!

Some great stuff you've got going here... my only crit is that some of your shading still looks a bit plastic, imho you should spread the specular highlights a bit or use dim reflections instead...

Diffuse level for metal also works wonders, you can get it in the anisotropic and multi-layer shaders in MAX. A falloff map here really helps to mimic the behaviour of most metalic surfaces that tend to be darker around the edges and brighter in the centre... you can also achieve this by simply using a falloff mask in the diffuse channel...

Also, for the skin try to use a falloff map on the self-ilumination channel and copy a darker, more saturated version of your diffuse map into the "shadow" slot, in the "shadow-light" mode... keep the bright slot full black. This helps you get that sub-surface scattering feel... cheap, but effective!

Hope this helps, keep up the great work here :thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 04:03 PM
beatifull render i like very much this characther and i liked and your concept design this is going to be a great scene :thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 04:24 PM
That warrior rendering looks cool.... and the wallpaper is nice :) Moooore mooore :) Keep it up mate

11 November 2004, 07:42 AM
The last warrior image looks very good! :thumbsup:
Also your tip on controlling hi-poly is also :thumbsup: (you surely think that I have a BIIIG thumb! :D ), currently working on 6 and still learning this version's new stuff...but when it comes to face morph targets I'll surely try to make something similar....

Keep it up! :)

11 November 2004, 12:33 PM
very thanks guys!!
AcidX - thanks man.. i will returm to make this project today hehehe

Rui_Padinha - thanks man! thanks by the help. i will work on shade/texture after.. i´m need to finish the models heheh very thanks

Lelantos - thanks man. i´m trying to make the best possible heheh i´m liked the concept to hehehe

Borro - thanks man!! and wait wait hehehe.. i will retur to make more stuff today heheh

terraarc - thanks man!! and one pont... get the 3ds max7.. is much better them max6
nice tips i think... heheh

the last test of control hi-faces
now i´m back to this project "grand space opera" hehehehe

Render Animation (

ScreenCapture (

11 November 2004, 07:32 PM
Hey Patrick!!!

I'm impressed with the amount of models that you already have built for this challenge! I love the style and I can see that your organic modeling is 100% better! Great textures too! Keep it up and I'm looking forward to see the final result!

See ya!

11 November 2004, 09:36 PM (

well she is done hehehe
i'm maked the gun only... heheh
thaks all..

11 November 2004, 09:55 PM
Hey Patrick!!!

I'm impressed with the amount of models that you already have built for this challenge! I love the style and I can see that your organic modeling is 100% better! Great textures too! Keep it up and I'm looking forward to see the final result!

See ya!
Hy dear friend.. is a long time at the last comunications no hehehe
Fausto Very thanks i´m your fan dude!!!and you know hehehe
man i waithing your returns hehe
best luck man!!

c ya

11 November 2004, 11:15 PM
hey patrick...great render...i think this job will be one of the best...


see ya

11 November 2004, 03:02 AM
JulianoCastro - very thanks man!! the render/color/light looks beter....
"i think this job will be one of the best..." uhmm i don´t know man!! i´m making because is a good theme, and i´m like so much the hi-tech things hehehe
Thanks dude!!!
c ya!!

11 November 2004, 06:20 AM
Only one thing. Take that soldier out of the center, you will see that either left or rigth it will be better to your composition.

Snake Farlow. the rogue.

11 November 2004, 07:01 AM
whoaooow...that's just sick man, you just made a doom3 monster! top class...Nothing wrong with your model


11 November 2004, 10:18 AM
hoo+WooW: it's crazy, it's amazing, it's beautiful... :applause: wonerful work !!!

11 November 2004, 11:10 AM
wow+awsome... u are 10 steps in front of us all....! i can see where this is going!

11 November 2004, 01:47 PM
:thumbsup: Great stuf Great Progress:thumbsup:
And i like a lot the sketsh with warrior woman and baby VERY emotional.

11 November 2004, 02:07 PM
good luck in the competition!

you sure are pretty fast....
I definetly don't want to cross the way of them spiders.....!

mostly I like the golden look of the spaceship behind your female warrior...nice armor by the way....

your male soldier looks very good! the textures make it clear, that this one did some fighting already.....and obviously won....

I look forward to your progress....

11 November 2004, 07:02 PM
Good work. Nice alien

11 November 2004, 02:30 AM
Hi, things are looking great. She's coming along nicely. I'd work on her pose a bit though. I see where you're going with it but it needs some work...but you probably know that already. peace and good luck

11 November 2004, 10:01 PM (

hello guys.. i'm modeled a baby today. the warrior and the baby is finished! now i need to finishi another models.. and work in the final image!
Vaery thanks!!

11 November 2004, 10:28 PM
Hey my friend!!

very very nice composition! I've really liked!

keep going!

11 November 2004, 10:28 PM
great render Patrick...amazing job!!...keep up the good work!

see ya

11 November 2004, 11:19 PM
SnakeFarlow - thanks man, thi´s imagens not is the final composition.. ios just to show the model.. heheh is more cool!! heheh

keetmun - very thanks man!! hehehe

jddog - thanks man!! heehe

markovicd. thanks man.. i will start to work in the final concept/image soon hehehe

SUN - thanks man!! now u can see the baby hehehe

digital_blade - very thanks man!!

macoD - thanks man.. but maybe i dont use the alien.. i don´t know .....

HieSpike - thanks man

tabajara - thanks friend!! hehehe brazilian power kkeheheheheh

JulianoCastro - thanks dude!!

thanks for all!!
c ya!!

11 November 2004, 11:29 PM
Yeah... what to say... simply :buttrock:... I can only add that in my opinion a one more blurred ship in the distance and a few more blurred troopers in the background would do good to this scene:) . And as your finished warrior with the baby is concerned, I would only move the elbow of the arm with the gon more to the back. It's a bit unnaturally in the front.
Great job! Nice to see someone jumping with a grand steps to the final image:thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 12:07 AM
Cara eu nao gostei muito do pano que envolve o bebe nao...

Ta muito duro, da mais uma amassadas nele...


11 November 2004, 05:25 AM
Hi Patrick.
Now that image just rocks, really really great, dramatic, dinamic, the blur and everything is just awesome! Cant wait to see Your final image, thumbs up!!!

11 November 2004, 10:27 AM
Wow :eek: , extremely impressive stuff here! It reminds me a litte bit "Final Fantasy Spirits Within" for the soldiers & spaceships... many manga influences...

Great work :thumbsup:

11 November 2004, 12:31 PM
Hi Patrick,

Are you kidding, man? I mean, 5 pages?! That's great!

What can I say... your project seems great, from the beginning. The sketches are so cool and the models, lights, textures. Everything seems very, very good.

Besides, I like the fact that you focused not only on creating high-quality visuals, but also an interesting context; a interesting scene. It seems you have imagined a whole movie before that, and you're now showing us the final scene...

Just one question: what did you use to make the clouds? Is it volumetric? Are you using only 3DMax or also another software? Just curious...

Great job. I mean it. Keep it up, man.


Helder Conde
Atitude Digital Media

11 November 2004, 04:06 PM
I love the monkey-like features you gave the troops behind the girl. It works well with the way you designed them. The out-of-focus ship looks good, too. I would like to see an in-focus version of that, too. Excellent work!!

11 November 2004, 10:08 PM (

this image is a pre-viz of background and composite of final scene... i´m working on this.. i need to move she more to the center.
well is this
Thanks guys!!

11 November 2004, 10:17 PM
:drool:i love u man :)

11 November 2004, 10:32 PM
arturro - thanks dude!! i will fix the pose of warrior soon... heheh very thanks man!!

MadnesS - valeu ai mano.. vo tentar dar um tapa!!!

Kaksht - very thanks man!! i realy working to do a good final image!!

Nomad - thanks man!! i like much of anime and manga man!! thanks by the comparasion hehehe

HelderConde - thanks Helder!! yes i´m imaginated a litle histori to make this scene.. but i don´t say now hehehe
For the clouds, i´m using a plugin. afterbunner.. is very very good pluglin!!
Man very thanks

todd4cgi - thansk man!! i will try your sugestion!!

thanks all!!

11 November 2004, 10:57 PM
Looks sweet. The spider like mechs are like from "Ghosts in a shell"?

The only thing I would think is a little strange, All the troops look like the same. Like the same as in movement, defining insignea holding the gun the same way. even like mirrior one or 2 to give the look like some are left handed to brake up that confusion.
the three group of 3 troops are the same.

11 November 2004, 11:12 PM
-| SeWaN |- Veru thanks friend.. but i prefer woman.. ok.. heheheeh

VHashishV - thanks man!! but like i´m say.. this is a previz, a litle test hehehe i´m need to model more stuff/including civilians,background, builds, cars inumerous thinks hehehe
after this i will positioning all models in diferent poses bla bla bla... heheh

Thanks man!!
c ya

12 December 2004, 01:22 AM
ow yes.. i´m forget something hehehe i´m recorded de modeling of the baby.. if some one have interest?
is aprox 1 hour of video/ 75 mb winrar! click on the image to download!

Thanks all!
cya (

12 December 2004, 02:24 AM
:bounce: Great Work!!! I feel sorry for that baby though!!

And the video... thanks!!! Amazing modeling!! I learned a lot!! :cool:

Keep it up! Don't give up!!:D

12 December 2004, 04:20 AM
Great, amazing, cool, incredible, your work is excelent. CONCGRATULATIONS

Snake Farlow. (

12 December 2004, 06:01 AM
Scary baby...but the overall scene looks fantastic, got that kickass feel...


12 December 2004, 11:56 AM
Thanks Guys!!

Bibinha - thanks girl for the motivation!!

SnakeFarlow - thanks man.. what i can say?! very thanks hehehe

keetmun - thanks man.. scary baby? this screenshot not is the finished baby..hehehe i will try post today man to you see hheheheh

Thanks all!!

12 December 2004, 12:17 PM
hi its wonder full

12 December 2004, 04:29 AM
falcon_time - Thanks man!!
i´m need to work more 50year on this to make this realy wonderfull hehehe

Thanks guys.. updates soon!!

Heber G Conde
12 December 2004, 10:48 AM
How are you going my friend...probably tired, right ? :thumbsup:

You are doing a great job with all these character Patrick! The warrior with the baby were also great, with this beauty envoriment gets amazing! :eek:

I still can´t see where in the hole image this piece will appear, in fact there is so much details in your job that each light study look like the final shot to me! I´m really liking the atmospheric effects that you are creating in each core of the shot, and I´m willing to see the final composition - or it´s fist studies.

I´ve saw the alien with holes in the cheeks too! Great tip and example of what wrap deformation can do! Not to mention the interesting "beautifull" modeling.

Keep going man!
Abraço Patricão!

12 December 2004, 10:53 AM
DAmn amazing stuff
nothing to crit really

12 December 2004, 11:48 AM
nice composite so far dude!

one thing that bothers me a bit though is her right hand and the way she holds the gun.... somehow just doesn't look natural....

try different angles for her a little with it to get a better look....

have fun.....

12 December 2004, 12:02 PM
reallu stunning work man :bowdown:

12 December 2004, 05:14 PM
Awesome modeling and compositioning. I agree with what was said about each shot looking like it could be the final image, because you did a great job on all of them. I really like the latest image. Personally, I like the color composition of the second-to-last image the most. However, in terms of overall composition, I like the last one the most. Great job, can't wait to see more updates.

12 December 2004, 12:17 AM (

just the top view of main flor

12 December 2004, 12:20 AM (

the concept for the arcs and coluns of main room... more ups soon.. sorry by the slowly...

and thanks for all!!
c ya

12 December 2004, 12:31 AM
Heber G Conde - what i can say for you man?. realy realy thanks by the incentive!!

d-tox - thanks man.. but crits is welcome hehe

digital_blade - very thanks man.. like i´m say in another replys this just a test... i´m working on this.. not is finished... hehe tanks

jddog - thanks again man!!

Dead_Last - very thanks man! i´m realy studing the composition/color/lighting for the final image... this time, is time to xprementations hehehe

I really hope to correspond the expectation of all the ones that are congratulating me and motivating my work!
Thank you very much of heart!

12 December 2004, 01:27 AM
Hi Haraguti heheh

:applause: Ah Mulekkkkkkkkkkkke tá mandando bem veio, arrebentou mano, o cenario ficou animal mesmo, Congratulations good work :applause:

Sorry my bad english !

Abraços :thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 12:17 PM
Valeu uchimata!! espero que saia algo bom desse contest!!

Thanks all!!
c ya

12 December 2004, 03:12 PM
hey man , your work looks better everytime.Congratulations.
I like the expression of the face's woman:thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 07:58 PM (

modeling of the mainroon/ coluns/ arcs... a lithe light and composition test...
color style001

12 December 2004, 09:24 PM
melkao - very thanks man!! i´m trying to make a good piece hehe

12 December 2004, 09:27 PM (

more monocolor... i´m realy don´t know.. hehehe

12 December 2004, 09:29 PM (

another color composite test...
well i´m wait the coments.. to make a choice.. i´m prefer the first!!
thanks guys!!

12 December 2004, 09:41 PM
i prefer the yellow!!...but with a litlle less light

see ya

12 December 2004, 09:49 PM
Nice job!

I personally like the second one... I think it´s a little more realistic, but then... that´s just me! :thumbsup:

Keep it up! :scream:

12 December 2004, 10:05 PM (

more monocolor... i´m realy don´t know.. hehehe

Wow D3, that is tight! I like all the poses, only want to suggest your lead characters' left arm either needs its own special light, or the arm needs re-posing. Just a suggestion.
Nice work - it looks like it could be a scene from a sci-fi channel series!


12 December 2004, 01:02 AM
Thanks Juliano and Bibinha!! hehe!!

Daniel McMillan thanks man!! like i say, is just some studes.. i´m need repositionation all character.. make the light correscpond the enviromente light.. and another thiks!!
Very thanks!!

C ya!!

12 December 2004, 01:40 AM
Kinda a silly crit...just something that my eye was drawn towords.....the baby dosen't seem to have any "weight"....seems to be floating in the blanket...dosen't look to real...and it seems my eye is drawn towords the baby as the "REASON" for the image...does that make any sense at all...maybe not...I'm a bit of a detail freak. :twisted: ..perhaps you have already attended to this of have a plan .. I haven't read back that many pages....It just caught my eye is all.....peaCE)) ;)

12 December 2004, 10:04 AM
Hi there Patrick!
Personalie i prefer the third version, cause it is the most dramatic IMO, it is brighter then the other renders, has more color in it and that gives it something like befor death sense, like shes being shot down and falls dead, and then the camera looks to the floor and brightens it all up, dunno, i would go with that one, but thats just my opinion.
The second render is kinda oldish look, like loking into B&W photography, its not the right mood IMO.
And the first render has too much of the gonden look, just dunno...
Eitherway, thumbs up! Excellent job!

12 December 2004, 11:31 AM
First, i have to say that this is certainly one of the best entries i have seen so far..:) but i have a suggestion to make..
As it is you have an indoors scene with something significant happening, which is very nice with the jets outside, but does it give a sense of the scale of whats happening? a suggestion that you could consider is having some sort of wide window showing the battle outside or even having them partially out of an entrance with a huge battle further away. this i think may give a bigger sense of scale to the scene and maybe make it all the more significant if you show that the whole battle is for the baby? Just an idea because atm it feels sort of small if you see what i mean? But keep going i love the models and the progress your making :D..I hope this suggestion is ok..

12 December 2004, 11:55 AM
i like your style.
The scene seem nice, but when i see the first sketch, i prefer this because the GSO is really in.
the last you present seem to me a little bit to closed, without a contrast range.
That s all. But, sure, you are one of the best maxman i ever seen !
Bye and good luck.
The design is nearly the "Final Fantasy Movie" SPIRIT WITHIN

The force be with you.

12 December 2004, 03:18 PM
well u got some really nice renders here... if u aask me i would have to go with the third one... the more color the better... btw i think ur hurting the image by making it over contrast.. anyways this is looking awesome just tweak more to give it the perfection u want... :thumbsup: best of luck

12 December 2004, 12:34 AM
Hi Patrick, great scene...
i prefer the yellow to...

12 December 2004, 10:15 PM
Thank you for the comments.
I am very thankful. but really I prefer the scene inside of a building. powders believe that the largest events than they would decide or no a war would be inside of a building. and never in the battlefield.
In some images not of the to notice but the building has the whole glass roof. that can show the whole events that are happening out.
To A lot what to still be done. I hope to finish the whole work soon.
thank you very much to all.

12 December 2004, 10:20 PM
hey man... gr8! just gr8!...
well i would try yellow color rather then blue... :)

12 December 2004, 02:25 AM
markovicd. thanks dude!! i will try to make some tests.. c ya!

12 December 2004, 04:43 AM
hi Patrick, i like the last mono.. but with less brightness... the brightness is kinda eating all the detail on the scene, but otherwise there's killer action going on..keep up:thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 12:16 PM
uwil - thanks man.. i will stude more the color, light and composition... thanks man!!
c ya!!

12 December 2004, 10:07 PM (

just a quick render to show the models of the background!!

12 December 2004, 10:11 PM (

composite test and color...

12 December 2004, 10:13 PM (

composition test!! i´m realy prefer this colors... but i dont know! hehehe

Comentes & critiques pls
c ya!

12 December 2004, 10:22 PM
o.O...great!! again...the yellow one!


12 December 2004, 10:33 PM
atmosphere look like a little from ghost in the shell innocence :)

12 December 2004, 10:55 PM
JulianoCastro - thanks man!! hehe is coming is coming hehehe

-| SeWaN |- thanks man.. good!! remember the inocence atmosphere hehe good!!

Thanks guys!!

12 December 2004, 11:16 PM
hello patrick
only thing i can say is to ask if you're out of your mind!!! heheh, amazing job, and a real chalenge, because of my architectural habits, i am forced to choice the architectural image, lol... but the scene overall its really superb, a huge composition and the most important, a original idea.


12 December 2004, 11:31 PM
Wazza your insane MF japa!!

Thats really awesome!! The scene mood is very dramatic. congratulation smy buddy!As I sad to you off line, I think you could open the camera lens and grow your composition frame for improve the emotion sense of it! U are insane man!!

That´s it!!


12 December 2004, 11:36 PM
As ultimas imagens estão muito poluidas... muito glow e blur. A imagem do background chega ser tão interessante quanto. O filtro de cor esta muito exagerado e prefiro a cor amarelada ao invés da verde. E tambem esta tudo muito apertado, coloca um wide screen ai que vai melhorar, ou então afaste a camera ou mude a lente. KKk A proposito, quando é que vamos ver um render da composição final? Pois é esse ai que interessa. Continue ai, to botando fé agora...falta pouco pra tanto tempo. Good work.

12 December 2004, 11:47 PM
Patrick, just amazing work... congratulations! :scream:

I really don't know exaclty what it is about your composite that I like, I just feel that it has a very pleasing outcome. I really like the way that you have set up the scene. It's very touching and strong!
I personally prefer the yellow filter, I just think that it adds more to the mood of the scene.

Onde again, excellent work! Keep it up.

Later :D

12 December 2004, 11:50 PM
silverioneto - thanks man!! i´m trying to do a good final image... im maked inumerous chages of first concept. i tink this new idea is better.. hehe

Mobra - thanks man!! i´m insane? no, is impression hehehe
i will try to do this man!! thanks again!!

banzato - Valeu ai mano!! mas a imagem ta em wide?! valeu mano!!

Bibinha - very thanks girl.. your feling is very important to me hehe.. i can see what the womans think abouth this scene!! thanks

c ya!!

12 December 2004, 12:18 AM
that's more like it Patrick,....really dramatic!:thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 12:19 AM
Now we are talking! :thumbsup:
It´s really nice color scheme.
It´s grow up a lot! I think that you could make a litlle borken glass because the space ship on the top. kind ofglass pieces falling.

12 December 2004, 12:31 AM
uwil - thanks man!! i will try make a litle more dramatic hehehe

luciano berutti - thanks man!! the idea is make cracked glass for the windows.. falling and inumerous another elements hehe
i just need time heheh

Thanks all!!
c ya

12 December 2004, 12:39 AM
keep going!

keep going!

keep going!

12 December 2004, 01:33 AM
i will

i will

i will

hehe thanks taba!!
c ya!

12 December 2004, 11:26 AM
Very nice!

ae mano! muito bom!!! fiquei um bom tempo sem ver a evolução dessa cena, fiquei impressionado com a qualidade, parabens!

como tenho certeza que você vai ganhar esse contest, pode ir c preparando pra paga um lanche do joão, seu forgado kkkk :]

Abração e continua detonando com essa cena!


12 December 2004, 12:05 PM
Wowwwww man!!
The architecture is great!
Esses pilares ficaram insanos seu japa maledeto!!
abraçao bro!!

12 December 2004, 03:36 PM
hey man it's a great idea and cool update now I wait to see the rest :) GL

12 December 2004, 07:09 PM
hey man that escene is very dramatic, that woman whit a baby is a lot expressive. i imagine that moment and is too much scary.
great work:thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 07:11 PM
hey man that escene is very dramatic, that woman whit a baby is a lot expressive. i imagine that moment and is too much scary.
great work:thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 09:30 PM (

compostion test and background modeling... i'm think the color is better more constrated and beauty!!
thanks guys!!

12 December 2004, 09:39 PM
Great models & textures :bounce:

I`m not sure that this point of view is cool... the camera angle from down is little wierd for me :argh: maybe make a test from above just for try.... I understand that you want to show the ship but the action can be on a higher level (a building) than the ship can fly near of the horizon line. Just my opinion.

Keep up the grand work :thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 10:29 PM
great work Patrick..! :thumbsup:
very dramatic indeed..!
although i agree with Nomad.. you may try to make some tests with different camera angles..
but anyway it's a great work..! congrats mate..! :thumbsup:
keep going and cheers.. :beer:

12 December 2004, 10:29 PM
man, i liked it very much

the composition is in harmony with the characters.

haraguti you're a monster my friend.

go ahead!

12 December 2004, 10:30 PM
Melhorou muuuuit na minha opinião... !

a cena aberta da uma grandiosidade bem melhor...

mas eu ainda melhoraria a pose da heroina...esse braço dela ta muito extranho ainda...

12 December 2004, 11:17 PM
erudito - thanks man!! Valeu eptim... mas acho que ganhar éh algo mais que naum ta nos meus planos hehehe mas pode ficar tranquilo que eu pago um lanchinho do jorjão pro c fica tranquis!!

mecman - thanks man!! Curtiu os peilares foi ? 1hehehehe

Divaise - thanks man!! i will show the final image soon hehehe

melkao - very thanks dude... i will try to mix of emotion on this image!! hehehe

Nomad - thanks man!! change the angle? uhmm i´m don´t know.. i´m like this angle and have a purpose.. if a hev some time i will try ok... hehehe Thanks man!!

greentek - thanks man!! but like a say to nomad this angle have a purpose!! hehehe

uchimata - thanks friend!! but ím not a MONSTER :twisted: heheheh

MadnesS - valeu madness!! éh vo fazer uns estudos de pose e deixar ele pror ultimo kkk

Thanks guys!!!
c ya!!

12 December 2004, 11:58 PM
D-3 meu fí.... seguinte:

A personagem principal esta ficando de segundo plano por causa das cores atrás dela.

remodele as cores....

por enquanto é isso.

12 December 2004, 01:15 AM
Wow! You've made a lot of changes!!

It's seems better in a general point of view... but there's something about this new arrangement that gets my attention. I don't know exaclty what it is... but it seems to drive me away from what I really should be looking at.
It's like instead of understanding and appreciating the scene and it's moment, I somehow find myself struggling to figure out what it is that's bothering me about it.

Sorry I couln't be more specific. I truly hope, although I think not, that this comment can be of some use.

But still.... amazing work!!! :scream:

12 December 2004, 05:34 AM
As MadneS said I'd slighly rewoek her pose. Particularly
the womans gun shouldn't line up exactly with the same
colored ceiling bar that holds the red banners. That ruins the
dynamics and gives a too contrived feel. I'd change the gun
barrel angle and color. Her gun would probably look newer.
Of course maybe she just picked it up. Just so it is not
the exact color of the wall. The broken up roof looks great,
I agree with MadneS on that one. Much grander view feeling.
And tells the story of war.

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12 December 2004, 06:35 AM
This looks very cool. Awaiting the final release.

12 December 2004, 08:23 AM
The final composition is very dynamic! :thumbsup:
But I think that the brightness and saturation of the colors give a rather happy feeling and takes away from the pivotal moment of the image...

Surely the outdoor take and camera positioning looks great!
Waiting for more...


12 December 2004, 12:26 PM
Aeee bem mais limpo agora! da pra ter uma noçao melhor do que esta acontecendo na cena, só achei as naves muito longe....
Mas ta ficando duca!!!

12 December 2004, 12:32 PM
Yo D-3
this image is going better each time i see it...i just think that you could try some others compositions...i think that the mais composite is point somewhere in her left...i think you could move the girl a little left and grows her image a little too...


thats it

12 December 2004, 02:53 PM
Very nice work, D-3. :thumbsup:
One thing that looks kinda "off" with the composition (at least, to me) is that the woman doesn't look like she's part of the image. The other elements of the image have almost a "painter-like" appearence, but the the woman looks more photorealistic than the others.

12 December 2004, 03:02 PM
E ae...Bom, de acordo com o tema acho que o seu concept inicial esta bem melhor pois podemos ver uma grande atmosfera. Aquelas imagens dos Robos tambem esta muito boa, parece uma sociedade disposta a enfrentar qualquer um que cruze seu caminho. No seu trabalho eu admiro muito a qualidade e as idéias das neves e robos, por isso eu iria enfatizar as naves e a aranha.

Sobre a mulher e o bebe: Eu acho que poderia ter mais ação e emoção. Ela pode olhar pro lado, gritar, apontar a arma, deixar o bebe escorregar, pular, levar um tiro nas costas, dar uma faiscada de tiro no ombro, mexer os olhos (olhos que apontam pra frente não são legais) etc. Me diz aonde estão os tiros Patrick, pode colocar varios flashs de explosoes e tiros por toda a tela. Mais uma vez o ambiente esta pequeno embora tenha dado uma grande melhorada com aquele background que ainda não esta finalizado, certo?. Com o ambiente maior voce pode explorar muito mais seus objetos. Outra coisa que eu reparei é que não consigo saber se esta voltado para o realismo ou pra uma pintura, é que algumas coisas estão parecendo tinta, entende? Mas tenho certeza que vai chegar num bom senso.

Por que voce não experimenta uma resolucão de 1024x480. Tenho certeza que vai melhorar muito, podendo mostrar mais o cenario e maquinarios.

Enfim, essa é minha opnião, só estou tentando ajudar ok?

Opps, só mais uma coisinha... estava aqui pensando... lembra do robo do Luiz Felippe Cavalcante? pra mim aquele angulo e ambiente seriam perfeitos pra voce tambem.

12 December 2004, 11:13 PM
FR3D- Valeu mano.. ja fiz isso!! na nova imagem.. mas deu pau no cd que trouce...¬¬

BiBiNhA - thanks girl!! uhm, don´t know wath is.. but i will try to fix this!! thanks!!

userBrian - thanks man!! about the pose.. i will work on this later... like i say inumerous times hehe i will fix the pose of characters later!!

||) |V| |^| - thanks heheh the final image coming soon... hehehe

terraarc - thanks man.. i don´t think this colors is happy hehehe is beauty!! the crucial moment´s need a great colors hehehe in my vision, of course!!hehehe

mecman - valeu mano... as naves eu vo render e posicionar ainda!! em breve em breve!!! hehehe

JulianoCastro - thanks man.. i do that in new composition (final hi-res) and i´m get a better aspect thanks man!!

ArtisticVisions - thanks man.. and nice observaction... but i´m don´t know.. i´m lost in inumerous details to do... hehehe wait ok.. i think will do a good final image!!

banzato- Valeu banzato pelo comentario.. mas tenho que levar em concideração varias regras do contest em questão do formato da imagem ok
o concept inicial éh apenas para se ter um ideia do que se vai fazer.. no caso do contest éh todo um processo de evolução que vc aprimora a cada dia!!
Valeu mano!!

Thanks all!!
c ya!!

Heber G Conde
12 December 2004, 11:41 AM
Now you got it!
Great background improvement! I love the chinese theme of the background!
Really good color choises! Great atmospheric feeling! :thumbsup:

Keep on with this great job, my friend!



12 December 2004, 12:30 PM
:eek: beutiful... congrats and the background rocks really !

12 December 2004, 01:27 PM (

i'm working on light composition and model.. i will finish soon!! hehe

Thanks guys!!
c ya!!

12 December 2004, 01:32 PM
much more dynamic, agressive and offensive pose! I shows different feelings. For me it's better! It looks great:thumbsup: with the background I haven/t decided yet which I would advice to use:shrug: all are very nice. Keep the tests comeing and I'll be thinking:twisted:

12 December 2004, 01:46 PM
Melhorou, esta bem melhor agora. Voce deve estar se perguntando> Oque fazer com os robos e as naves? Pra mim, essa região de respiro ficou ótima... espero que consiga integrar tudo.

Coisas que observei: O predio tem uma cor generica, que tal janelas refletindo o ambiente ou algo mais SPACE. O céu é muito "planeta Terra", que tal buracos negros e estrelas? Que tal fazer os folhetos em japones rasgados e desfiados? Voce pode aumentar o tamanho da aranha.
Obs: Troque o azul do céu e coloque uma cor avermelhada, acho que vai ficar interessante.

HAHAHA, ninguem mandou voce me pedir pra comentar, agora aguenta meu velho KKK sou chato mesmo hehe...só espero que melhore cada vez mais. :thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 10:15 PM
Heber G Conde - very thanks dude!! hehehe

jddog - thanks man!!

arturro - thanks man!!

banzato - calma velho vc faz 3d e sabe que as coisas demoram pra sairem ainda mais pra ficarem boas kkk
o céu éh azul e pronto kkkk
mas eu rasguei as faixas ok hehehe´

thanks all!!
i´m verry happy!! thanks!

12 December 2004, 10:18 PM (

well the final image is coming heheh soon.... heheh
another test of composition!! color positions and everythings!! hehe
Thanks all!!
c&C is welcome!

12 December 2004, 10:31 PM
Hello man!!

This render is much better and realistic where show with more details the others objects in the background.

Keep going with this great work.
Everybody is waiting for the final version!!

See u!!

12 December 2004, 11:19 PM
Hey dude...amazing picture.. like Luis royo´s artistic lines....

maybe can be a little bit populated.. ..

General concept is perfect..

Brazil Rulez !

12 December 2004, 02:11 AM

It’s a really great scene. Your art remind me another one I saw in forum.

It’s interesting the way all 3d and 2d artists are developping their skills. Even in different countries I can see some similarity regarding the art evolution.

Both are amazing! This kind of thing show us the importance of the forum. Today it’s possible to change information to make your art better.


12 December 2004, 02:29 AM
hi!d3 i really enjoy your work very much! dynamic and good story telling , but i think the red flag is too saturate !( for me) i don't know maybe u are still working on it, good luck !

12 December 2004, 02:31 AM
Hi D-3...great job man!! i think your scene is more dinamic...its better every day...please send more ups...


12 December 2004, 03:21 AM
yes! Amazing job, I agree with Juliano...only one thing that bothers me ,it´s the spaceship tail . it takes off!:thumbsup: Only another suggestion, ok?:scream:

But it´s really nice job!

12 December 2004, 08:11 AM
Wow, forget what I said about the angle this angle is great :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 09:53 AM
oh yes, that looks good!

a few things though:

the bg objects, especially the buildings need more detail.. I think you just came to it yet...

fg and bg have a different look and tend to seperate....

the yellow dust is a good way to make the transition but maybe you should place some of the blueish color tones of the bg into the fg somehow and test how it looks.....

....and good job with the arm looks a lot better now!

keep up ... I really like it so far!


12 December 2004, 10:52 AM
Great update man! really amazing! my only crit is the glow of the engines. It's too dark and too blish. I would make it more white inside, and the bluish "outside". I hope you get what I mean:thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 12:58 PM
Nice scene composition, I really like the new color scheme. I think the ships and the background buildings add a lot to the composition. Can't wait until you add some of the soldiers and spider mechs to the composition.

12 December 2004, 10:25 PM (

well my image nos is 98% complete... some adjusts and final image will finished! hehehe
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Thanks for all, your suport is very important to me!!
realy realy thanks guys!!

12 December 2004, 10:31 PM
This is just awsome! jes, you are very close to reach the highest level!
Only make those red "flags" more dirt...

count me as your fan! What I most like in your scene are emotions and some content behind it:thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 10:44 PM
Blackman - very thanks man!! i´m happy now hehehe

egodoi - thanks man!! well now have some character hehehe

metaballs2000 - wow.. thanks man!! thanks by the comparation.. but olijosman-nibbledpencil is a master! i´m a only simple guy!!

monsitj - thanks man... i´m realy like of this contrast... but is litle cleam... i´m dusted it.. is better i think...

JulianoCastro - thanks man!! thank for the suporte dude!!

Nomad - thanks nomad... ok i´m will forget hehehe

digital_blade - thanks man!! but one important think for me.. is this image represente the invasion of a civilian area, no much resistance... and the batle rum on the ground... not in the build or skie... this is my point of view!! thanks man!!!

Dead_Last - thanks man! well now you can see soldiers eheheh alien soldier heheeh

arturro - very very thanks man!! you have a nice eyes and nice sence of critique to me is very important!! realy thanks dude!!

Very thanks to all!!
c ya!!

12 December 2004, 11:13 PM
Do you have any friend ? Do you have girlfriend ? Do you have social life? Are you gay? RUN AWAY FROM THIS COMPUTER MAN !

KKKK! Serios! Your job is fantastic man! Congratulations. You really can be the winner!

12 December 2004, 11:30 PM
AlexandroCastro - your $&#@**&@#$@# heheeheh i´m have friends.. a have a wonderfull girlfrend.... and i´m not gay, dement!! hehehe

thanks man.. and i´m don´t will win ok!! may be lemog won!! hehehe
c ya!!

12 December 2004, 11:59 PM
very nice picture! i like it alot!

12 December 2004, 12:20 AM
markovicd. thanks man!! i´m need finish some thinks hehehe


12 December 2004, 12:59 AM
Hey Patrick,

This is pretty bad ass. The composition is very involved.

I'm not sure about cutting the main character at the feet though. I know that the P.O.V. is at an angle shooting up and might be hard to pull off but you still have a lot of time, might be something to think about.

12 December 2004, 01:22 AM
igorstshirts - thanks dude!! i´m thinked a lot about this questiom... but realy I don't see the need of the feet appear.. thanks man!!

12 December 2004, 02:31 AM
cara...parabéns pelo seu trabalho, ta excelente... vou torcer pra vc ai ganhar esta parada, mais um brasileiro no topo!

12 December 2004, 03:25 AM
Great work!

I'd love to see some more varied, dynamic poses in the background figures, something that gives them a personality...

Still, I love the perspective and the Sharkship is beautiful!

12 December 2004, 04:20 AM
Wow. As much as I liked your previous version, this new composition is even more impressive; especially love the hoverships. :thumbsup:
Only thought I have is on the flags; if there was really a "strong" blast of air or wind, as your scene portrays, they'd be moving around a lot more.

12 December 2004, 05:43 AM
VERY NICE COMPOSITING !! I can see lots of stories going on in your single picutre, good job man.
I would suggest more floating or blowing away feel to the flag since your main airship's turbine is blowing dust around , might as well blow some flags around.

12 December 2004, 10:54 PM
leodan3D - valeu pelo concelho

cgkrusty - thanks man!! i´m like to the perspec and the ship, abouth the soldiers... i´m realy don´t want to put much personality for this guys... meke a litle for the central aliens... heheh

ArtisticVisions - thanks man!! about the turbulence.. the ship is far.. and not near.. because this i´m not distroced the flags... thanks dude

2DragonZ - thanks man, thanks by the suggestion.. but the ship is far on ar... heheheh

thanks all!! i will finish this image on next week!!
c ya!!

12 December 2004, 12:34 PM
Hei!! Now it´s growing up a lot the composition with soldiers, I think the last comment tha I had made, forget it!:scream: everything is balance. Another suggestion!:scream: You could to make a comand signal for the middle alien, like a command to attack.:thumbsup:
Amazing work man! you are so fast and with high quality. Great job!

12 December 2004, 02:24 PM
i'm telling you man you're creating a blockbuster movie. This one has 6 million bucks written all over it! :scream:

But really I can't fault you on anything. The bg looks a little fake but that's probably because you haven't finished it. Everything else looks great!


12 December 2004, 03:48 PM
luciano berutti - thanks dude... about the pose of the midle alien is not ordering to atach... just he trying to dialog hehe this is my intentions.. heheh thanks man!!

keetmun - thanks man.. realy i´m looking now to the image i´m see litle clean bg.. i will make some think on this.. thanks man!!

Thanks all.. well a introdution for the history for this image!!

In the Year of 2078, a prophecy revealed to the Rulers of the earth, it described a child's arrival that would destroy the empire and it would free the human race.
Then, th Lord of the war, lord nomed ordered that all of the born children in that period were sacrificed.
He sent their troops to exterminate all of the born children and with the smaller age than a year of life.
Their soldiers wandered for the cities behind that child. Spreading the fear and the intolerance!
A child especially was born in a city called remote meleb, bringing with itself a Divine mark. God's son!

i hope yous like guys!

paulo crumbim
12 December 2004, 09:09 PM
fala ae vein, bom sobre as melhorias não tem nem o que falar, acredito q agora é começar a se preocupar mais com a composição, tipow acredito que vc deixando a personagem em primeiro plano, se necesário corta alguma parte do corpo, (naum vejo problema) seria legal, é isso ae ta caminhando pra uma parada legal, manda mais ups ae, t+

12 December 2004, 04:23 AM
valeu cumbrim acho que ela ja esta no local e posição desejado.. acho que naum ah tanta necessidade de colocala maior ou mais a frente!! heheh

Valeu mano!!

12 December 2004, 12:30 AM

Ppppplllleeeeeaaassseee :D

12 December 2004, 05:06 PM
hey D-3

i can't see all your project, but i'm seeing this now... and surprised with all... can't wait to see finished! :buttrock:


12 December 2004, 11:58 PM
well my image nos is 98% complete... some adjusts and final image will finished! hehehe
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Thanks for all, your suport is very important to me!!
realy realy thanks guys!!This composition is perfect, and the update of the engine flames is looking very good now. :thumbsup:

Just a suggestion is to change the blue/cyan eyes to other color, the reason is that they look like the same of the engine flames/burst.

12 December 2004, 11:48 AM
thanks all bibinha and todesco

Daniel Pittaluga - thanks man.. but i´m tested another colors before, and i´m choice the blue..
thanks man...

i´m writhing a making of, when it finishes I publish. heheeh thanks all
c ya

12 December 2004, 02:04 AM
• HOW COULD I MISSED THIS THREAD?• Awsome Patrick! and you are almost over, I'm glad 4 u :thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 06:41 AM
The latest update is great man... I like your composition :thumbsup:

12 December 2004, 08:43 AM
very good stuff you got there. like the chars and especially the hovercraft/ship. but maybe you should put more detail on the background buildings

12 December 2004, 06:58 PM
Nice Job Friend, nice job!!

12 December 2004, 08:13 PM
hey man, is very nice to see all your progess, is a really good job. unfortunately i has been away so my work is not porgressing, but is dosen't matter.
good look with your epic escene:scream:

12 December 2004, 08:52 PM
wow!.... thats a killer pick man... love the style.... couldnt get a better expression in her face for the sceen...

12 December 2004, 11:15 PM
thanks guys for all coments.. the images i will work in next year only.. hehehe
i´m puted in my server some imagens for the making of if some one have interesst to see.

Well is this..
thanks guys!!
c ya

happy new year for all

12 December 2004, 11:22 PM
:bowdown: thanks for all this stuff, I have checked more or less what is there, and it will be helpful for sure, thanks! I will watch it pixel by pixel:twisted:

12 December 2004, 11:22 PM
sweet image collection

12 December 2004, 06:28 PM
Thanks guys!!

arturro pixel by pixel ?? :eek: hehe

thanks for tha all coments.. the final image i will post on nextyear heheh to star the new year good hehehe

c ya guys!

12 December 2004, 11:23 PM
You seem to have already crossed the finish line! :thumbsup: And the result is some awsome work to be proud of! Wishing the best on the year to come!

12 December 2004, 03:49 AM
how could u already be finished nearly

im still getting started
well not really
ohwell will be good to see the final

Heber G Conde
12 December 2004, 03:36 AM
Hi my friend,

Great Job! I like a lot of the atmospherics effects. The blue rays are also very beatfull!
The contrast on the background between the the oriental feeling and the hitech aspect of the buildings is really interesting too :thumbsup: .
Great job with the dust and the character poses! All the textures are really good too, the woman´s face colors are very beautfull.
Great composition job with the "hot fraction" over the ships! The hole effect on the ships rockets (turbinas) is very beautfull too.
Great color balance !
The shot has a really great sence of motion...maybe some bullets travelling could work fine for this ! :thumbsup:

Really beautfull piece Patrick! I love the scene!
Congratulations :applause:


01 January 2005, 05:02 PM
very nice!
we are waiting updates!

01 January 2005, 03:17 AM
very very thanks guys.. i will post the final image on this week... very soon...

realy thanks for all peoples whrited here, coments, crtitiques and etc..

c ya!! en Best Luck for all!!

01 January 2005, 04:17 PM
Congrats this is really amazing :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:


01 January 2005, 02:14 AM (

My Final Image

In the Year of 2078, a prophecy revealed to the Rulers of the earth, it described a child's arrival that would destroy the empire and it would free the human race.
Then, th Lord of the war, lord nomed ordered that all of the born children in that period were sacrificed.
He sent their troops to exterminate all of the born children and with the smaller age than a year of life.
Their soldiers wandered for the cities behind that child. Spreading the fear and the intolerance!
A child especially was born in a city called remote meleb, bringing with itself a Divine mark. God's son!

Thanks All!!!
Best luck for all :)

01 January 2005, 03:23 AM
great uses of contast between the blue and yellow lighings.....nice placement of fog for atmoshepere...and GREAT caracters for this really tells a story...good luck finished before us so now you are sitting there chillin while we all scramble about.... :banghead:

...BTW how do you accomplish the "heat waves" in the air under the ship..they add alolt and I've been looking to do the same ?/////

01 January 2005, 04:58 AM
the heay wave is painted layer.. overlay/vividlight and another... is pure photoshop heheh

Thanks man!!!

01 January 2005, 06:46 AM
Amazing work! Congratulations on the finished piece. The level of detail is perfect and the overall composition looks to be in balance. Way to go!

Comments needed here too! (

01 January 2005, 11:53 AM
Yap, this one gonna be among the best here. My congratulations!

Heber G Conde
01 January 2005, 12:39 PM
Hi Patrick!
Amazing Job! Really Great history too!

I love the color balance and height distribution over the shot!
The chinese influence is really interesting too!

Great atmospherics effects! And the ships, are a great piece by it self.

Congratulations my friend!
Arrebentou Patrick! :buttrock:


01 January 2005, 12:51 PM
hey d-3 hope everything is OK with ... well u know!
And yeah great pic! really can feel the situation!
congratz ... u have ended ur jounrey!

01 January 2005, 01:33 PM
Well done... that's all good mate... I like the richness of the colors :thumbsup: great mood :bounce:

01 January 2005, 02:17 PM
very nice image, good action shot!

01 January 2005, 01:00 AM
one more time very thanks guys!!! :applause:

c ya!!!

01 January 2005, 10:19 PM
good luck my friend!!

01 January 2005, 01:58 AM
very thanks juliano!! you and another guys maked a very helpfull comentes and critiques!! thanks man!!

01 January 2005, 02:08 AM
Yup really good stuff, really has this blockbuster, action-packed feel to it. Good job man!

:buttrock: :thumbsup:

01 January 2005, 02:20 AM
keetmun - thanks man!! blockbuster :eek: WOW thanks thanks and thanks hehehe

01 January 2005, 02:21 AM
how did i miss this ,man its amazing,all the best

01 January 2005, 02:21 AM
Hi there master! I watched you r image pixel by pixel as I promised, and everything looked great:)

I have finished as well, check it out!

01 January 2005, 03:41 AM
Nice work here! This has a real feel of impending doom. I like the composition and think you should do well Good luck.
Kind Regards

01 January 2005, 03:49 AM
Good luck man! :deal:

Que Ronaldo y Ronaldinho te iluminen! :D

01 January 2005, 08:13 AM
Once again, wishing the best for your entry mate! :)
Surely put some extra effort on it and really dedication....learned some staff on time planning mostly....
The inspiration behind was really strong too and helped you finish your vision really really soon!! :thumbsup:

Wishing the best for your entry mate!

01 January 2005, 08:55 AM
Really Nice ! A great history to tell ! Well done ! congrats !

01 January 2005, 04:43 PM
hi there, great image you got there, I want to congratulate you for all your efforts. Your image is one of my favorits.

01 January 2005, 05:21 PM
Thats it what i call a "dynamic perspective"....Man, u did your job absolut fabulous....:applause:

When can we see this in a cinema round the corner?? :bounce:

Good luck in voting, dude!

01 January 2005, 07:41 PM
great entry. How could i missed this one. good luck

01 January 2005, 09:54 PM
Cool image Patrick.:thumbsup:
Dense but not overloaded, dynamic with live characters, like a shot from a movie.
Congrats mate!! :applause:
GL in the judjing phase!:thumbsup:

01 January 2005, 10:47 PM
:bounce: thanks guys!!

jdsb - thanbks man!! you don´t miss just become later heheh

arturro - thanks man!! master? how ?? where?? hehe thanks man!!!

blackdragoncg - thanks man!!!

Daniel Pittaluga - very thanks man!! ronaldinho, ronaldo, pelê,zico, cafu and another soccer players hehehe

terraarc - thanks man!! planning the work is the key!! hehehe

gpepper - thanks man!!

SnakeFarlow - very thanks

Saschi0815 - thanks man!! Cinema? :eek: if some producing of hollywood to be interested for something of that type hehehe

lukep - thanks like i´m say to "jdsb" you don´t miss just become later heheh

PROctavian - thanks man!! yours return has been very good.. I prefer myself not to arrest the jury's decision or to be awaiting something! if you say that you liked I am very happy!!

Thanks all!! and best luck for all!!
c ya

01 January 2005, 06:25 PM
One of the best works than I have seen in this challenge. The true Grand Space Opera:bounce:

Good luck:thumbsup:

01 January 2005, 10:19 PM
:thumbsup: thanks man!! true GSO hehehe :eek:

01 January 2005, 12:12 PM
I'm really sorry I didn't see this project before. I had told you that the image posted on #362 was, in my opinion, the right one to submit as final image.

Anyway, nice work.

Good Luck.



01 January 2005, 12:28 PM
Beautiful pic, the "life" of your characters is very impressiv, good anatomic positions, i like too the level of detail of the element, and the angle of vision, very great work