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09 September 2004, 11:44 AM
Hi everybody,
This is my first post :-)
As I'm most of all an animator, I never took time enough to post a good picture.
Anyway, here is the 1st version of my animation (about 8 hrs of work).
Hope you'll enjoy and I'll wait your comments.

09 September 2004, 08:58 AM
Here's my model (simple as required), and my update of the animation.
Please leave feedback, all help is welcome ;-)


09 September 2004, 01:55 PM
good animation, good timing, nice job ...."chapeau bas"

09 September 2004, 01:59 PM
Nice animation for the time you spent ! Expressive !
Other ones in progress ??

Touf, always running after time...

09 September 2004, 02:02 PM
hi :)
it is a realy good start i like it. Maybe you could move his head a bit (rotate), thats me

Take care

09 September 2004, 02:32 PM

I like it too...some of the poses didn't read too clearly for around "touches me" but all in's a great start. Good job:)

09 September 2004, 03:08 PM
Hi marthe2k3,

good start! I especially like the final pose, very frightening :eek:.

The part between 'the next... ...touches me' looks a bit strange, like a puppet on string.

Keep on going !

09 September 2004, 03:41 PM
Hi mates
Thanks to all for feedback.
The "puppet on the string style" ;-) is done on purpose. I didn't want it realistic at all...maybe a strange choice but that's mine ;-) I will see for that, this part seems strange to many people...
I will try to post another version tomorrow unfortunately, I'll be gone for 15 days :-( ****ing Holidays ;-)

Thanks again


09 September 2004, 04:31 PM
Holidays? It's barely October, what country do you live in? Oh,'re in France ; )
I'll take those holidays if you don't want them! We need more!

I like the 'puppet on a string' idea, I say go for it! And that crazy ending is great!

10 October 2004, 01:29 PM
Hi Again,

Here's my last update before a 15 days break...

I'll try to work again on it a few days before the ending of the competiton but it will be very short :-(So please, let me know what you think about it, it will really help me ;-)

Rage On

10 October 2004, 01:44 PM
Yeah baby!
Nice job!!!

10 October 2004, 03:17 PM
HI marthe2k3 :)
looks good...if i could change something i would add some dynamics to the eyes. He is kinda sleepy :). The next thing is when he says "the next..." his head and his finger are focused somewhere else. And maybe try to shift his weight when he makes a step :):):)

Thats me, take care im going holidays as well 10 days :) starting tomorow.

3D Swede
10 October 2004, 05:48 PM

A few minor crits.

Maybe adding some toe-movement when he takes the first steps?
I think the lipsync needs tweaking as well.

About his looks though, he's a really handsome bloke! I bet he gets all the girls :scream: !

(I'll probably have nightmares after staring at the last frame of your animation for too long!)

/3D Swede

10 October 2004, 08:45 AM
Yeah Baby! Awesome!!
What a great design! (joke).
Very funny and comic animation.
Keep on working hard!:bounce:

10 October 2004, 12:31 PM
:-( I can't download for some reason.

10 October 2004, 03:58 PM
Same here:(

10 October 2004, 07:38 AM
Here's still a WIP No time to finish....
Anyway I'm lazy, and I don't like spending much time on a single thing :-(

keep on rocking

10 October 2004, 07:48 AM
Oops sorry, the final one is here :
About the ones who were not able to download my shit, sorry, I don't know the problem.
Maybe a ****ed up update last time....
Hope it will work this time.

Keep on rockin'

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