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09 September 2004, 11:44 AM
This is my first post :-)
As I'm most of all an animator, I never took time enough to post a good picture.
Anyway, here is the 1st version of my animation (about 8 hrs of work).
Hope you'll enjoy and I'll wait your comments.
09 September 2004, 08:58 AM
Here's my model (simple as required), and my update of the animation.
Please leave feedback, all help is welcome ;-)
09 September 2004, 01:55 PM
good animation, good timing, nice job ...."chapeau bas"
09 September 2004, 01:59 PM
Nice animation for the time you spent ! Expressive !
Other ones in progress ??
Touf, always running after time...
09 September 2004, 02:02 PM
it is a realy good start i like it. Maybe you could move his head a bit (rotate), thats me
09 September 2004, 02:32 PM
I like it too...some of the poses didn't read too clearly for me...like around "touches me" but all in all...it's a great start. Good job:)
09 September 2004, 03:08 PM
good start! I especially like the final pose, very frightening :eek:.
The part between 'the next... ...touches me' looks a bit strange, like a puppet on string.
Keep on going !
09 September 2004, 03:41 PM
Thanks to all for feedback.
The "puppet on the string style" ;-) is done on purpose. I didn't want it realistic at all...maybe a strange choice but that's mine ;-) I will see for that, this part seems strange to many people...
I will try to post another version tomorrow unfortunately, I'll be gone for 15 days :-( ****ing Holidays ;-)
09 September 2004, 04:31 PM
Holidays? It's barely October, what country do you live in? Oh,..you're in France ; )
I'll take those holidays if you don't want them! We need more!
I like the 'puppet on a string' idea, I say go for it! And that crazy ending is great!
10 October 2004, 01:29 PM
Here's my last update before a 15 days break...
I'll try to work again on it a few days before the ending of the competiton but it will be very short :-(So please, let me know what you think about it, it will really help me ;-)
10 October 2004, 01:44 PM
10 October 2004, 03:17 PM
HI marthe2k3 :)
looks good...if i could change something i would add some dynamics to the eyes. He is kinda sleepy :). The next thing is when he says "the next..." his head and his finger are focused somewhere else. And maybe try to shift his weight when he makes a step :):):)
Thats me, take care im going holidays as well 10 days :) starting tomorow.
10 October 2004, 05:48 PM
A few minor crits.
Maybe adding some toe-movement when he takes the first steps?
I think the lipsync needs tweaking as well.
About his looks though, he's a really handsome bloke! I bet he gets all the girls :scream: !
(I'll probably have nightmares after staring at the last frame of your animation for too long!)
10 October 2004, 08:45 AM
Yeah Baby! Awesome!!
What a great design! (joke).
Very funny and comic animation.
Keep on working hard!:bounce:
10 October 2004, 12:31 PM
:-( I can't download for some reason.
10 October 2004, 03:58 PM
10 October 2004, 07:38 AM
Here's still a WIP No time to finish....
Anyway I'm lazy, and I don't like spending much time on a single thing :-(
keep on rocking
10 October 2004, 07:48 AM
Oops sorry, the final one is here :
About the ones who were not able to download my shit, sorry, I don't know the problem.
Maybe a ****ed up update last time....
Hope it will work this time.
Keep on rockin'
01 January 2006, 10:00 AM
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