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AddictionJunkie
09 September 2004, 03:25 PM
Hi I just started this girl... and was hoping for some critiques along the way to completion. Let me know the bad, the good, and the ugly..

Thanks.

AddictionJunkie
09 September 2004, 03:32 PM
Here's the wireframe..

David Brunšek
09 September 2004, 11:45 AM
The head is cool for me, but you can do it better!
Try to make a little bit smaller nose and eyes.

Maybe you can make bigger jaw, so it won't look like a fow. ;)

Sp3ctre
09 September 2004, 06:14 PM
the cranium is too small, the eyes are too big, and for a female, the jaw is too wide and goes too far back

eyes are supposed to line up halfway between the top of the head and the bottom of the chin, and a person's head is 5 eyes across. also, the jaw line comes up right in front of the ear, not behind

I didn't really notice any modeling problems, but you've got to fix the anatomical structure of the head and try to make it look more feminine

AddictionJunkie
10 October 2004, 12:02 AM
Thanks for the advise guys.

Here are some of the changes that I made.. I'm still not done yet with the over all head.. but I'd love some more advise.

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