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09 September 2004, 03:25 PM
Hi I just started this girl... and was hoping for some critiques along the way to completion. Let me know the bad, the good, and the ugly..


09 September 2004, 03:32 PM
Here's the wireframe..

David Brunšek
09 September 2004, 11:45 AM
The head is cool for me, but you can do it better!
Try to make a little bit smaller nose and eyes.

Maybe you can make bigger jaw, so it won't look like a fow. ;)

09 September 2004, 06:14 PM
the cranium is too small, the eyes are too big, and for a female, the jaw is too wide and goes too far back

eyes are supposed to line up halfway between the top of the head and the bottom of the chin, and a person's head is 5 eyes across. also, the jaw line comes up right in front of the ear, not behind

I didn't really notice any modeling problems, but you've got to fix the anatomical structure of the head and try to make it look more feminine

10 October 2004, 12:02 AM
Thanks for the advise guys.

Here are some of the changes that I made.. I'm still not done yet with the over all head.. but I'd love some more advise.

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