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Hmura
02 February 2002, 03:17 PM
I HAVE CHANGED MY ENTRY :)

Well this is my current work in progress.....

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/PAfrontpers.jpg

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/Pabackpers.jpg

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/PAfront.jpg

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/PAside.jpg

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/PAback.jpg

What you think....
More updates and info later.....

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parallax
02 February 2002, 03:40 PM
one of the best ones i've seen so far, IMO
very nice concept. I especially like the earring-decoration thingy :)
gives your character history

fellah
02 February 2002, 05:15 PM
I love this sketch, and as parallax mentioned, yea, the earingDecoration is just perfect! start the modelling process, now! :D

Bluemilk
02 February 2002, 05:18 PM
Akk yeah, really like this one, wot you got planned for down below?

RA
02 February 2002, 09:56 PM
same here this is a cool concept

Hmura
02 February 2002, 05:13 PM
:)

Martin-K-
02 February 2002, 05:32 PM
love the drawing, i second the like for the earring decoration, good stuff ( and love the tubes )

Error323
02 February 2002, 09:56 PM
COol!! but i wonder what quind of program u use???

JacobB
02 February 2002, 11:33 PM
this is only a suggestion, but I think it would be cool if the ornaments on his mask were like old fishing lures or something, giving that trampy scavenger feel.. excellent design:)

Hmura
02 February 2002, 02:50 AM
Thanx for the replies again,
Im at work at the moment, hopefully a couple of updates later today....

Error323 = The program im using is Wings 3D, it is a freeware program... you can get it at http://www.wings3d.com
I decided to use it for this challenge to test the program :)

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CerberusC
02 February 2002, 05:02 AM
good start i think, what's the program you will use for render?

Hmura
02 February 2002, 07:13 AM
I dont know about the rendering yet, still thinking :)


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jrockstar
02 February 2002, 10:29 AM
wow ...

The design is sooo cool ... I just love the head :p

I cant wait to see future updates ...

Hmura
02 February 2002, 02:05 PM
I HAVE CHANGED MY ENTRY :)

Well this is my current work in progress.....

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/PAfrontpers.jpg
http://www.hmura.f2s.com/Pabackpers.jpg
http://www.hmura.f2s.com/PAfront.jpg
http://www.hmura.f2s.com/PAside.jpg
http://www.hmura.f2s.com/PAback.jpg

What you think....
More updates and info later.....

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Hmura
02 February 2002, 01:29 AM
Hmmm... It seems no one likes the new design...
doesn't anyone have any comments?

Hmura
02 February 2002, 12:25 PM
Test rendering :) The quality of the pics is low, to allow low file size... :)

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/TestRender1.jpg
http://www.hmura.f2s.com/TestRender2.jpg

Higer Res Renders

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/PArender.jpg
http://www.hmura.f2s.com/PArender2.jpg

Still a lot more to do, next the head, then adding details...
Comments Welcome :)


Hmura

Hmura
02 February 2002, 07:30 PM
Heres a quick update, just trying out the head and mask for the character.....

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/QuickUPDT.jpg



Hmura

Hmura
02 February 2002, 11:30 PM
Heres a simple Global illumination scene done by a friend :)

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/PA_GI2.jpg


Hmura

MadS
02 February 2002, 03:28 AM
Hmmm... It seems no one likes the new design...

I think you are right there. I was really diggin' the dark character you had before. He had a very malevolent look about him. Your new model looks like a P.A. version of Vivi from Final Fantasy 9.

Hmura
02 February 2002, 05:29 AM
Well there is a slight resemblance, only slight and i wasn't planning on it...

Well the reason I changed my entry is because Im still a begginner in 3D and to model the other guy would take longer than what the deadline date is.... so I came up with another sketch (Ill post it later) and used it loosely to start the new model....

Okay ppl I have made some changes to the model, tell me what you think of it now :)

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/new_gi_pa.jpg


Hmura

dutch
02 February 2002, 07:04 AM
good to see some wings 3d

Hmura
02 February 2002, 11:00 AM
Heres what I still have to do, ( and maybe more :) )
Any ideas on the colours ??

http://www.hmura.f2s.com/stillTOcome.jpg

Hmura

Piz
02 February 2002, 02:05 AM
Hi Hmura,


your character seems very funny and orginal....
I like it ... :)

Bravo!



:)

Hi
Piz

Hmura
02 February 2002, 09:26 AM
Thanx for the reply Piz. :D

Ok ppl, I have found a little time in which to finish my model, its almost done, Just rendering as we speak, Im 0ff to work now, when I get back I post it up... I don't think I will have time to texture te model, as I still need to finish off the weapon.
Should I go on with the one I drew, or maybe something else, any Ideas what would suit him.... ?


Hmura

CerberusC
02 February 2002, 04:52 AM
Yeah, i'm with piz, it's very funny, i want to see in an animation :] (i'm an animator...u know...i love to see the characters in motion) :]

Hmura
02 February 2002, 06:44 AM
Thanx CereberusC for the comments :)

Here is the render of the 'finished' character, I might still add some small details, but the next thing on the list is the weapon....
As I said before I will not have time to texture it :(

pascal_blanche
02 February 2002, 06:52 AM
I'm glad to have cowardly abandonned this challenge.. :D :D man... only good designs on this one! I really like the style of this guy!!

Hmura
02 February 2002, 10:40 AM
Thanx for the reply pascal, too bd you missed out, would have loved to see that chick in 3d :)
you must have been too busy with the Pirate poster eh

Hopefully next challenge :)

p.s. I would like to add that this is the first 3d character I actually completed modelling :) Its been great

WEAPON IS COMING SOON

Hmura

Hmura
03 March 2002, 07:22 AM
Heres a different view :)

Piz
03 March 2002, 05:52 PM
You rock Hmura.... :D

... but now.... color! Texture! Lights!

Go! go! go! :D :D :D

I'm sad ... too many good 3DArtist here.... eh eh eh!

Hi
Piz

;)

Hmura
03 March 2002, 12:24 PM
Piz, I don't think I will have time to do texturing, I just returned home from a wedding I went to , and I still have to finish off the weapon ahhhhhh :(
Im at work now as well... looks like no sleep for me tonight again he he

Hmura

Cgkoko
03 March 2002, 04:13 PM
Hey! he looks funy,in a good way.I like him!Iwould realy like to try wings 3d.Is it free?If that's the case where can i download it?
Snif!:( .No textures?

Hmura
03 March 2002, 04:35 PM
Thanx Cgkoko for your reply,
yeah wings is free go to http://www.wings3d.com
unfotunately no textures :(

Hmura

fellah
03 March 2002, 05:39 PM
sorry I have missed to comment this GREAT model during the challenge but I haven't seen it among all the others. and, I will surely not miss you in the next challenge you'll enter, not now that I have seen what you can do!

you don't have to texture this guy, it looks great as it is imho. sometimes a simple GI render can look much better than an "fast textured" model.

it shouldn't be a bad thing to add some details to the feet (and some more places) and maybe take away some sharp edges though.

overall great modeling and coooool design!

Hmura
03 March 2002, 08:35 PM
fellah, thanx for the comments, i will hopefully finish the weapon in time, i keep changing it :), maybe i will add some more details...

here is a Landscape test i did :
http://alshaheen.net/artists/hmura/LANSCAPE2-2.jpg

Hmura
03 March 2002, 08:36 PM
Another one :

http://alshaheen.net/artists/hmura/LANSCAPE2-2darker.jpg

Totitch
03 March 2002, 08:43 PM
Hey HMURA!!! Your character is really good!
I like the design a lot!
But why don't you work on it,to finish it in time!
It will be fun to see him textured and more detailed...

Your landscape is really good anyway!
What a texture! Great! :D

Finish your character...It's an order!!! ;) :D :D :D

Hmura
03 March 2002, 02:15 AM
Totitch, thanks for the comments but, alas, the time is slipping away :)

Hmura

The Librarian
03 March 2002, 02:37 AM
OookOook!
Eeek.

tAstyBITs
03 March 2002, 03:44 AM
I like.

pabbloz
03 March 2002, 04:24 AM
very good design and style Hmura!
I haven't seen your model before and it was a pity, it's very nice!

add more colors please! ;)

Hmura
03 March 2002, 03:11 AM
Pabbloz, thanx for the reply m8

Heres the new test render :)

The scene is in a environment where the sun is 50 times stronger than what it is now, therefore the suns strenght really is much higher..

I really think the dry cracked ground looks better in this render.

I have also added some fog... its really toxic due to the nuclear falloff, so as it provides some protection from the sun it is at the same time deadly :)

I have included a tree which is glowing, due to toxication of the soil and the atmosphere... Its only a simple render as the high quality one would have taken too long :)

Notice the weapon, yes its a staff :)

http://alshaheen.net/artists/hmura/PA LANDSCAPE211.jpg

Hmura

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Okay I had some pretty good comments from ppl over at the ( http://pub33.ezboard.com/fnendowingsmiraifrm17 ) Wings forum.

Im trying to make the shadow softer or better yet, make it gradually soften, is there a way to do this in lightwave, and I would also like to make the ground "shimmer" the way it does when its really hot... any ideas ?

p.s. Does the tree affect the viewers attnetion of the scene?

Hmura
03 March 2002, 12:09 PM
Here they are For easy viewing :

http://alshaheen.net/artists/hmura/new_gi_pa.jpg
http://alshaheen.net/artists/hmura/PAnewest3-2.jpg
http://alshaheen.net/artists/hmura/PAnewestBACK2-2.jpg
http://alshaheen.net/artists/hmura/LANSCAPE2-2.jpg

Hmura
:)

RA
03 March 2002, 02:28 PM
hi pal seems none of your links are working maybe this is why not sure ?

Hmura
03 March 2002, 01:39 AM
M8, Only the links on the last post are working all the other ones are not, they were previously on the .f2s.com site until it closed its free space thingy, the 4 images in my last post should be fine :)

Hmura

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