09 September 2004, 04:14 PM
Looks great. Good concept.
Here's the crits:
When he says "He's fragile.. He's very fragile", the animation conveys too much anger. It doesn't match the voice clip. Try to go for a more "pity" expression. Like when he says "fragile", instread of having his arms swing violently, make them express "fragileness". Like some soft motions with easy out curves.
Also, the other alien dude in the back, when he says "you mean...beyond pasifism?" I need more of a puzzled look on his face. Remember, he's confused by the initial statement.
Fix those IMO and it's gold! Good luck.
Never attempted facial animations so take my advice with a grain of salt. The last animation I did is here:
shameless plug (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=164776&goto=newpost)
01 January 2006, 10:00 AM
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