View Full Version : PA Challenge - Character - Totitch

02 February 2002, 06:47 AM
2 Sketches (just the minimum to put all my idea and find "good" proportions...)

A first render...

I hope to send more soon.
Waiting for your critics and help.

02 February 2002, 07:07 AM
yea! thats cool... i think you should make the neck skinnier at the base and make it a bit longer (like in your pic). Also on the side shot, i reckon the neck should be more curvey.

It'd be great if you could add some more muscle definition in the neck too... at the moment it looks a bit flabby, which doesn't fit in with yoru lean character.

i really really like yoru concept sketch.... is that a flame thrower on his back?

man... all this PA stuff makes me want to break out Fallout again... must resist temptation.

hope my crits are helpful :)

02 February 2002, 07:09 AM
That looks like a painful way to inhale.
cool concept but i think unless his nose is also covered; he's still gonna die if the environment is toxic

Adam Klein
02 February 2002, 07:24 AM
LOL! thats sweet, I like the style a lot, Nice sketch too by the way.
I was looking between your model pic and sketch and I noticed that your model's forhead is bigger and the cheecks are smaller on the model. It would look sweet if you dropped the helmet a bit and puffed the cheeks out a tad wee. :)

great though, . heh,heh, those chompers, heh,heh.


02 February 2002, 08:12 AM
I love this design, excellent stuff, nice start to the model as well, youre using lightwave?
can't wait to see it finised :D
ohh and excellent work on the teeth !!


02 February 2002, 01:30 PM
Thank for all your critics...

Muscles will come soon...
I was too tired tonight.

HMURA: I 'm using 3DSMax. Thanks for compliments.

02 February 2002, 01:33 PM
damn, that's a phreak man . . . looks very good. sweet concept.
especially the original way of breathing. . . tho I too think yyou should cover his nose . . .

02 February 2002, 01:46 PM
time to work now, now or asap

02 February 2002, 01:50 PM


Don't want to work today...
And don't want to see your Ugly face...:D

J'arrive batard!
T'vas voir ta gueule...
Je suis la WAAAAHSAP!

02 February 2002, 01:57 PM
euh...I think you should retry with another character of the moon light shadow dancer, and the ears are too dance dance dance of the mukum dance hanhan...
seriously, good start, I can not wait to see the entire character de feu folet de vache

depeche toi pouriture
(scuse my french)

02 February 2002, 02:02 PM
Is that a colgate smile??? :D

02 February 2002, 02:08 PM
if this nose thingy is an issue, then why not use noseplugs, or those clips that syncrhonised swimmers use.. :D

02 February 2002, 02:11 PM
or have a screw go through his nose and tightened on the other side :D


Dobar ti je..

02 February 2002, 02:22 PM
I see that i must do something for the nose...

Maybe 2 corks!!! (bouchon en lièges)

Scuse me for french,but i'm not really good in English!

02 February 2002, 02:23 PM
hey! cool design! I'm impatient to see the rest of the body!
I'll wait for a more elaborated version to critic it.

02 February 2002, 04:55 PM
looks really promising... i agree about the nose though.
You should turn cast shadown on to 'show off' your model.
I think your concept is really great and wolfensteinish! :)

02 February 2002, 10:06 PM
my gawd,
im really lovin this piece bro.
nice work all the way around.


02 February 2002, 10:24 PM
this guy takes the cake.

you don't have to do anything about the nose.
I mean it looks like everything from the neck up is dead anyway and if you look closely you'll see that the straps around his neck are pretty tight - preventing any air from entering via normal means.

however, if you were to put 2 corks up his nose that would be very funny.

02 February 2002, 10:42 PM
Thanks Sherban,you are a friend!(Or maybe must i pay you now???):D

02 February 2002, 10:57 PM
anytime, bud

ps. next time you want to discuss financial matters use the private messages. ;)

02 February 2002, 04:07 AM
Here some nitpicking:
I like the sketches so much I think two things get neglected in the 3D model.

1) The teeth are too clean and even. They're part of what makes the sketch so striking.

2) His neck tapers too thickly. The sketch is more like a rod, with less tapering out at the bottom. The sketched neck appeals to me more.

Hope to give you guys some company soon...

02 February 2002, 06:12 AM
I'm ok with the nose!!!
keep it like this!!!
I want to see the body NOW!!! Com' ON!!

02 February 2002, 06:32 AM
hey a pretty look design, i't remind me a bit to LOBO's comics hehe and the model it's like de drawing, good good :] i want to see more hehe

Facial Deluxe
02 February 2002, 12:51 PM
That's excellent, keep it up !

02 February 2002, 06:11 PM
Thanks for all the critics...

Here is a new wip...
Just wait a little for details!

I'll post a description of my concept later...
(If someone wants to translate French in English...I'm too bad!)

02 February 2002, 08:36 PM
yup, this guy sure know how to draw, isn't it Totish?? Good start on your model, just watch out cause for now he is a bit too squared (carré quoi) look here for some "edge loop advises" ( ( il faut travailler les edges de ton perso pourqu'ils desinnent les courbes des muscles )
See? even trough the web I can give you some advises ;)
Good to see you there, take care!

02 February 2002, 08:40 PM
Thanks for the link Pascal!

I will try to do it!

02 February 2002, 08:05 PM
don't you have a new update with the modifications that Pascal Blanché told you last time?
we want to see more things about you character!

02 February 2002, 10:59 PM
i think the body is better now...maybe not enought...
Don't look at arms...I haven't work on it!

But finally it will be recovered...

Critics are welcomed!

02 February 2002, 03:17 AM
Waaay better my friend ;) now work a bit on these shoulders (epaules) with a thoracic cage like this, he should have bigger shoulders and the upper arm is a bit to tight ( serré ) :D (enerfant hein? )

02 February 2002, 04:56 AM
I really KIFF it toschchhtissttch.....!!!!

02 February 2002, 06:45 AM
this skecht! this face!great concept totitch....i like it:)
And yep his body looks much better.
just want to say keep going (goin'??)
Tu tiens le bon bout quoi vas y mon gars.:D

02 February 2002, 09:27 AM
why does it have to be anatomically correct. its a toon model for gods sake... i think its looking good... love the massive grin.

the best part of these challenges is that there is a range of detailed modelling and some simplistic neat 'toon' designs... this one sits somewhere in the middle

do ya own thing man... its cool

02 February 2002, 03:42 AM
Thanks for all the comments and constructives critics...

Just want to send a picture for the fun!
A little 2d break... Nothing special but i've been pleased to do it...

After the apocalypse!... :p

02 February 2002, 03:45 AM
LOL awesome style Totitch

02 February 2002, 03:50 AM
thats great

Facial Deluxe
02 February 2002, 04:37 AM
Yeah cool !

02 February 2002, 05:14 AM

02 February 2002, 06:46 AM

02 February 2002, 05:58 PM
hahah :D :D :D I just LOVE the 2D image, and what a character!!! why don't make THAT character in 3d? you would be one of the first out with a PAcartoon in this challenge. awsome, I just had to comment :)

02 February 2002, 10:01 PM
uaua jajajaja!!! :D :D :D :D

Totich!!! I love your syle!!! please!! we want a cartoon apocalypse world!!

I think the apple is hight for him :D :D (very good)

02 February 2002, 01:30 AM
wow very nice 2d work tot! was that all Scan and Photoshop?

Been trying to develop a photoshop coloring style for my two d images just can't seem to get one that gives the look I want.

02 February 2002, 02:28 AM
AH really nice style !
Aber, dein model ist hum... sehr sehr sehr germanique ! Ich denke es ist voulu ? :D :D :D

PS : tu bosses où ?

02 February 2002, 03:08 AM
fun character! I'd say some variation in his teeth (size and alignment) would be nice more in-line with your sketch. I was actually expecting to see a really tiny body on him :)

02 February 2002, 12:42 AM
Fellah and Pabbloz:
i like cartoon characters too...
But i've started this challenge with a semi-realistic character!And i like it too!
maybe an other challenge will be more toooooon!

[MSF]:it was just all scan and photoshop...And very quick too.It's not a complicated image...Just a lot of blur...

Joebount: Yaaaaa! Her ist zehr zehr Germanic! But he is not! the reason why i give him this style is just because I like the german helmet...very design!

muckywetnoodle: yes...Me too,but not enought time!!!
I was not at home this week-end and it will be
hard to find time this week!

Thanks for all your messages!
happy to find cartoon lover!

02 February 2002, 04:48 AM
Nice taf(work), totich!!! :)

02 February 2002, 08:13 PM
is it Adam or Eve ??

Who bite the apple ??

where are the 4 apocalyps knights ??

great 2D art... and 3D too... but i prefer the 3-teeth little green mutation... :)

02 February 2002, 04:42 PM
... mmmm a terrible stehroidate, nazi helmed, mutant character?....


Where you find that humorous idea? ah ah ah!

It remember me some interesting design of the Metal Slug Game Series...

.... and for that a love it!!!

Piz :D

02 February 2002, 01:03 AM
I think this guy is cool, even though he gives me the creeps.
But in a good way:)

Keep rockin'
I am looking forward to more more more!

02 February 2002, 01:42 AM

Why do you say this...I can't give you the creeps.
You are so talented! Maybe my favorite! I give you 5 man! :D
And Frezzato and Miller are Really good reference no?
Pascal was rightwhen he said it looks like Mignola too!
Only best references to become a wonderfull designer like you! ;)

thanks for your compliments!

02 February 2002, 01:53 AM
Yeah Frezzato rocks.
I wasn't thinking of him for this project but I guess its in my brain and I didn't even know it! As for Miller and Mignola, they are my Gods of the moment. I am reading DK2 and Wake the Devil on the train these days, good stuff.
And thanks for the compliment it mean alot comming from such a talented artist.

Carlos Hernánde
02 February 2002, 04:43 AM
very good work, I like much that style, I am wishing to see that finished model :) (sorry my english is bad):)

02 February 2002, 08:54 PM
alors!! tu la post ton Update!!!!!!!!

02 February 2002, 11:40 PM
Here is my new update...

A bit more different than other times!
Only 1.6M to download...
Just unzip it and run it (totitch-WIP-001.exe)...
There is no install...It's clean!

It's the mesh in real time 3d...
You can zoom on it and turn arround...
Maybe hard for little PC config.

Maybe not a good idea!!!

So here is a render for people who don't like ".exe"

I hope you will enjoy! ;)

I think i will update it like this now...Give me your opinion.

02 February 2002, 11:56 PM
lol love that songman . . . hehe

and an excellent way of showing your model.

coming along very nice :)

02 February 2002, 12:05 AM
uauau!!! hahha :D :D :D
IT'S AWESOME!!! VERY COOL!! haha:D and very nice music! :D

I love it! very good!! great work!
Hey! your character is very very good!!! and really good modelling and design!! fantastic!!!

Totitch! Totitch! Totitch! Totitch! Totitch!
Totitch! Totitch! Totitch! Totitch! Totitch!
Totitch! Totitch! Totitch! Totitch! Totitch!
:D :D :D

02 February 2002, 12:06 AM
Thanks Equinoxx!!!

I was very anxious of the result...
It seems to work! :p
happy that you try it!

Thanks Pabbloz!.. :D
KING of the 5 minutes Updates! ;)

02 February 2002, 12:43 AM
SUPER LOL!!! :D that music, where did you find it!? :D :D :D
great idea with the "realTimeSpinner", the model looks really good, the only critiques I have is on the arms but they ain't finished so I ain't gonna say anything about them yet, great work!

02 February 2002, 01:08 AM
Updated at last!!!
This is good work usual!!
But I have some crits tho':

This is personal and I know that you don't have to follow your sketch If you don't feel like... but I think he should be taller with thiner arms...just a question of props!!!

It's excellent anyway!!!

02 February 2002, 01:12 AM
Nice idea showing your model that way :)
Ups, fellah just said what I was going to say. Something strange on the back part of the bare elbow and forearms but as it is a W.I.P. there' nothing really relevant to complain :p . Very funny overall! Great job :)

02 February 2002, 01:18 AM
Hey nice model there. Like the cartoony look and the breathing apparatus... least its not a face mask.

Cant wait for more to come.. :D

comment my work? (

02 February 2002, 02:45 AM

You are right Stipouch!!!
I was on an other way...It's time to give him the right proportions!
Thanks for this very constructive critic!
(traduction en français: Tu m'fais yèche ehhh,conna'! :D :D )


You are an other addict of that stupid song!
It will become an obsession now...sorry! ;)

02 February 2002, 06:12 AM
totototitatatoutatatam toutitotatoutamtam
music great i prefer it to the model:D
nice work totitch cool to see an update.
i like the proportions between head and body.
ca le fait quoi!

02 February 2002, 03:25 PM
Ahhhhh!!! That song still playing in my head
I like your style, is different and funny. What more can you ask for?

I have notice the hearts in the preview picture... Are you going to keep them?

02 February 2002, 04:15 PM

Arrff! Arrff!
Just a cheap joke!!!

but...Why not after all! :D :D :D :D

02 February 2002, 06:45 PM
i cannot see that hearts, :""( i like it so much

02 February 2002, 08:35 PM
I´ve downloaded your zip. I think it´s not a good idea to show your character this way. Not for the result, it's cool. But I think nobody likes to execute an exe file.

You can try to use another programs to obtain the same effect without using an exe file. Do you know Cult3D?

Keep an eye on this page

Excelent model. I think is the most personal character in the challenge. :)

02 February 2002, 08:43 PM
Right...But you must install "cult 3d ActiveX player" before...
My .exe don't need any install!
and are you sure this program is able to render 100.000 polygones or more?...

And there is no Gooood Music! ;) :D :D :D

Thanks for the link anyway!!!
And thanks for compliment!

02 February 2002, 08:48 PM
come on totitch, pabbloz updated his model within 5-minutes! :p

*still dreaming about that song in the .exe* :D

02 February 2002, 08:55 PM
I said you Fellah!!!
It's too late for you now!!!
Tadoudidoudidoudada Tadoudidoudidoudada TadoudidoudidoudadaTadoudidoudidoudada
Tadoudidoudidoudada Tadoudidoudidoudada!!!
Stop it!

And for Pabbloz,Yes I know he is the "KING" of the 5 minutes Update!!!

02 February 2002, 09:20 PM
hehehe :D :D :D

02 February 2002, 04:08 PM
It looks like people is liking the song more than the model! :D (just kidding!)

It's a nice way to show up your model, you are the best! master! :D :D :D

In the next one will he dance that music rythm? (I actually do it!) :p

02 February 2002, 04:14 PM
In the next one will he dance that music rythm? (I actually do it!)

what an superb idea! please totitch, make him dance to the music :D :D :D

02 February 2002, 05:02 AM
Here is a new little Update...

The Shoes!

Next step... hands!!!
Not enought time and a lot of stuff to do to finish him... :(

02 February 2002, 05:52 AM
I just love the detailing, very beleivable yet stylized. I can't wait to see this guy finished. I no longer am getting the creeps from him!
great work

02 February 2002, 06:05 AM
Oh my god!!!!!
THE BOOTS ARE AWESOME!!! Fantastic!! with a lot of details!!
I'm very impatient to see the hands!! your model is getting and getting better in every post-update!!.

Again... excelent boots.

02 February 2002, 03:14 PM
great job on the boots totash!!!
You should add some wheels under the boots so he can slide on ramps as you do so well !!

au boulo Now!!!

02 February 2002, 04:25 PM
What a boots!:eek: Do you know where can I buy one of those? :p :D

I like them! A lot of details and they still look clean and defined. Good job.

02 February 2002, 05:11 AM
Stipen:"...some wheels under the boots so he can slide on ramps as you do so well !!"

Or walk on Dogs Shits as I did today,so well to! ;)

Daniel S: i'm ok to sell you my own shoes!!!(you will have to wash the sole(Semelle in french):p )

pabbloz:"...your model is getting and getting better in every post-update!!. "

fortunately!!! It's the way of the 5 minutes Update! :D
Thanks for compliment!

KOryH:Thanks for compliment! it means a lot for me,from such a great artist like you!

02 February 2002, 05:29 AM
Yaozah!! Thats a neat way to present the model. Love the update too, though I think the shin guards could contour better or maybe just have pads behind ?

See you,


02 February 2002, 10:01 PM
hmmm i' just wanted to see if there was an update since the last 5 minutes :D but .....
(quoique en ce qui me concerne.....)

02 February 2002, 10:32 PM
ick ooch!

02 February 2002, 10:46 PM
Hey dobermunk!
I don't understand "ick ooch" ??? :confused: :confused:

Is it good or bad critics? :D

Hobbes: I will work this week-end...So wait and see!
I'm not a 5 minutes Update King!!! ;)

l_farley13_l: Happy that you like the ".exe"
For the shin guards, I will work on it if I find the time!

02 February 2002, 05:13 PM
Here is a new Update!
Hands are just started and not connected to the rest of the body...
A better render(Thanks Pabbloz for tips!)

Nothing really new...But all the week-end to work! Yeehaaa!

02 February 2002, 05:32 PM
nice, looks like you have made the upperbody thinner which was a great change for the "proportions" imho. great to see it in a GI render to, still some things that needs to be fixed but it looks much better!

02 February 2002, 06:58 PM
Excelent Excelent!!!
The prportions of the model are awesome! This character is the most original of the forum!!! Bravo Bravo!!! and Olé!
Great details!

I'm very impatient to see the next update, maybe textures? a weapon?... :p
come on King of Design!

02 February 2002, 08:00 PM
GI render at last!!!
Good work totaticewicz!!

02 February 2002, 08:17 PM
yes hehe I have a new desktop :D

02 February 2002, 07:55 AM
A new Update...

Rest to do : Weapons...Munitions, Texturing, a little background, lightning!!! Too much...

02 February 2002, 02:50 PM
Yes!! good update!! Great bag!
I prefer the purple skin! Looks excelent!
totitch.... I love his legs :p

Come on come on! we want weapons !!! pum pum!

02 February 2002, 02:56 PM
Tooooooo good ant tooo funy !
I have replied to your private message, but it didn't work : your message's box is full !

Very very very cool !

02 February 2002, 03:01 PM
really great one, pabbloz is right, the purple skin is
great, and the proportions are chosen excellent.
But what i REALLY Love are the teeth, they are
splendid :D Which Toothpaste (do i spell that right??)
does he use?? looks really great :)

Go on :)

03 March 2002, 04:23 AM
hey totitch so here is my character as I said its simple but i like its cartooney style.

03 March 2002, 04:26 AM
alright i just posted my character. see my problem is that I have heard that working with sub d's you have to keep most of it quads because if not when you have triangles at the moment of smoothing it creates a pinch and bad geometry, its just that I cant understand how you all add so much detail with out creating triangles. and just how do you go adding so much detail thats my point.

03 March 2002, 04:37 AM
ohhhh i missed that!!!le 25 02! comment suis-je donc passé a cote?:eek:
it's exellent better and better.
his back pack is too cool and yes as the other i prefer the purple skin......and really these shoes and this legs are awesome:)
show more!
i'll try next time to have the eyes in the right place at the right time:D

03 March 2002, 04:44 AM
For Liquid tension:

Hey!!! it's very good like that!
Why do you want to add details!

Do you know "Jayce and the wheeled warriors"
This character looks like the small robot "oun" in French
Look at the picture at the end of this post!

To add details it's hard...Just try to have a clean stuff with less triangle possible!
you can work on a very low poly model and find the good shapes,then round it one time to 1
And then add detail on the rounded mesh and finally round it one more time...
Then you have a 200 000 poly character!!! Bouhouh :D
It' s a quick way...

look at the link that Pascal sent to me at the start of this thread...
When i started the body! Listen to this man...It's a great documentation! look at the mesh and try to do the same!(Easy to say :p )

But you don't need lot's of detail for cartoon characters!
Your is nice like that...just try to give him different materials and maybe clothes...Look at "oun"...He is cool! ;)


Eh oui mon vieux Hobbes...
J'était dans les choux...
J'ai rien posté depuis 3 jours!
pas de temps...
Et avec tout le monde qu'il y'a sur le forum qui grandit de jours en jours(Un grand Bravo!!! au passage),j'ai disparu de la circulation!

03 March 2002, 04:56 PM
i like it

very good style and detail model


03 March 2002, 11:14 PM
oki totish, time is running out! looking back to your early drawings, I think you should hurry to:
add knees protection (genouilleres)
add this litle piece of fabric ( le tissu la...)
add your flamethrower in the back with the tube
modify a bit you feet so they look like the ones on the drawing( longuer and pointy)
and pose it!

really nice model my friend ;)

03 March 2002, 11:56 PM
Why you should add him weapons? He seems so happy (he is smiling all the time:D )
Great model! Those boots really kick ass!

03 March 2002, 12:04 AM
What we have here?

A masterpiece!!!! :eek: :D

B R A V O !!!!

Another bomb from Amagazing Duo!!!!!!!!!!

eh eh eh!!!


03 March 2002, 01:04 AM
hey Piz! I've not done anything here! why do you think is so cool? :D :D :D

Come on Totitch! you promised us an update today!

Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch
Totitch Totitch toTiTch Totitch Totitch Totitch
Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch

03 March 2002, 02:19 AM
come on now you little french cartoon monkey *looking at the avatar*, are you lettin' your fans down?
you remembered pabbloz and the weapon url he gave us a while ago, right? ;)

totitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

03 March 2002, 02:30 AM
Hey! Thanks a lot every people!!!

Yes...I 'm late in Update,but I crashed my second HardDrive (Really dead!!! :( ) one day ago!
All my datas are lost!
Fortunatelly, I have saved my stuff for the challenge before! :D :D :D
But all those problem stopped me in my work!

Maybe an Update tonight...but very very late!
Or tomorrow! ;) ....sure!
flamethrower,knees protection,little piece of fabric will be here!!!

Thanks for all your encouragements!
It give me force!!! Rhhaaaa! tonight,i will work as a King of the five minutes Update!!! :p
(Just like Pabbloz before he became lazy! Ahahahahah :D :D :D)

03 March 2002, 02:32 AM

5minutes!!!!... where's that update? :D :D

03 March 2002, 02:38 AM

What a pressure !!! :D

I stop talking now!
It's time to work!!! ;)

03 March 2002, 03:31 PM
i hope you're working....:)

03 March 2002, 04:38 PM
Originally posted by pabbloz
hey Piz! I've not done anything here! why do you think is so cool? :D :D :D

Come on Totitch! you promised us an update today!

Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch
Totitch Totitch toTiTch Totitch Totitch Totitch
Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch

Ops.... Totitch .... excuse me.... I don't want take away your merits... :D :D :D

A believe that Totich has built a very good mixture of real and unreal .... a realistic and comic blend.... :D

Fantastic.... but now Texturize, Environmentize!!!!!!!


Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch
Totitch Totitch toTiTch Totitch Totitch Totitch
Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch Totitch

Ah ah ah ah !

03 March 2002, 11:24 PM

My body need more updates to maintain it alive :D :D
GOOD JOB but we want more!!!

03 March 2002, 03:40 AM
After a long long time...Here is my new Update!
Just some detail more!
No good render yet,but I'm working on!
I ear you for the skin color...

Here is a 5 minutes+10 Days Update!!! ;) :D :D

I hope you will like it...

Rest 5 days for: Texturing a little,Give him a Pose,Working render!!! Impossible! :(

03 March 2002, 03:52 AM
awesome toto!! I "kiff" it grave....Great work!!

In french, private joke: Profite parce que lundi y'a un petit jameCustom qui t'attend!!

See you soon Totitch!!

03 March 2002, 03:54 AM

Great job totitch!!! I love the weapons! the knife an the flame-throw!!! are perfect!!

The cloth is amazing too!! how di you do it? hand or plugin?
All is excelent.
I know who will be my winner!!

sorry but we want the famous 5 min update!!
We want better render, textures, pose,.. fire,... smoke... come on guy!! you can't sleep!!!

03 March 2002, 04:22 AM
looking very cool dude
he reminds me of frankenstein :) hey, if he ever needs a comanding officer,let me know :D
all you need is textures and getting him rigged :) hehe
keep it up, he's looking very cool, cant wait until the new update.

03 March 2002, 06:01 AM

03 March 2002, 09:55 AM
Wow prettey amazing man, everyone's so good so much eye candy.

03 March 2002, 04:59 PM
I realy like this one!

one thing,
Although the new cloth is very nicely modeled, I think you should remove it, it doesn't suit the character.

03 March 2002, 05:16 PM

03 March 2002, 07:01 PM
ah yeah Bud :D
Great stuff :)

It makes me think to a second "FUN" world war ;)

03 March 2002, 07:45 PM
This is my Totitch!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D

03 March 2002, 12:22 AM
You made a terrible, fantastic, bastard PA Entry.... ;)
Toticth! Toticth! Toticth! Toticth!

... but now... texturize it!!!!!!!!!!!! Please.... :D :D :D



03 March 2002, 07:26 AM
Thanks for all the interest you give to my work!
I'm very moved!!!

A new WIP...

Now,he has got a pose!
Need some texture and a little background!
And a good render!(Hey Pabbloz...I need help! :D :D )

03 March 2002, 03:23 PM

Yes Totitch!! You did it again!! Another great update!! uau!
I love the pose!! great left hand (very nice thumb).
Good job with the smoke.

And really fast! You have enought time to do the environment and texture him!!

Guys!!! Totitch MUST be in the third places!!! so you know.. :D :D

hey totitch, I'll help you ;) I want be a friend of the winner!! :D :p

03 March 2002, 03:51 PM
Youpieeeeeeee :D

Thanks for your stuff bud, i really love it :D
I really love the position of your hands :)

Pabbloz, I need help for the rendering too ;) mouhahahhaha :D

Totitch, I really love it, you know that man :) I hope you will completly finish him for the 8...

A bientot l' ami :)

03 March 2002, 05:39 AM
mmm.... nothing..... Only I want know if It was so awesome as I remembered it..... and .. no.... It's better! :D

03 March 2002, 06:21 AM
He seems so happy with all those teeth and a flamethrower!
I would like to see him toasting some marshmallows or something.

Great job!

03 March 2002, 01:15 PM
good work Totitch
but you know what I've already told you about what you say that I've already told you....about what you know about la main

03 March 2002, 03:25 PM
Good stuff Totitch!!

03 March 2002, 03:35 PM
Thanks for all the reply!
It makes me work better! ;) :D

I'm working on texturing...Here is a new Little Update...
Don't look at the textures stretching...I will correct it later!

But the final scene will look to something like that...
Do you think it's good?(Color,Focus,...)

03 March 2002, 04:40 PM

but you'd ferait mieux de travailler the texture because ça stretch and also the focus et l'autre truc que you have written

03 March 2002, 04:41 PM
Just perfect Totitch!
But don't cut the flame-thrower!! I want see the smoke ;)
Another critic: I'm not sure if maybe is the perspective, but don' you put the clothe of the wrist behind the knee? (It seems a bit strange).

Add a more rubbish (mainly stones or similar) to the environment and it will be perfect!

come on Chitot! I can't wait more for the texture version :eek:

03 March 2002, 05:01 PM
That is almost perfect.If broken cycle give up his dead girl you have my vote!:D

oooh!and plase dirty him up with dust,scratches and stuf!GO GO!;)

03 March 2002, 05:20 PM
OOOOOH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!


I haven't words!!

Do you want to be my friend?? :D:D:D:D:D
We want textures!!! Ruuuun!!!! Ruuuun!!!!

03 March 2002, 06:23 PM
you know what ? You should stop playing video games like return to castle wolfenstein, Day of defeat and Medal of honor, watching WWII movie...

:D :D :D

Reallllllllllllllllly excellent !

BTW : c koi la loukhoum dance ?

03 March 2002, 09:53 PM
I dont have words too.. just WOW!

03 March 2002, 10:07 PM
very very nice Totitch, but the shadows by his shoulder looks a lil weird, might be to low res and add some bump to the skin and do as pabbloz said ;)

good stuff


03 March 2002, 11:02 PM

héhé, i WANT to see more :-D

Notebook : Kill Blanché, Clark, lil, pabbloz, totitch,... hum... sorry guys :-p

see you soon

03 March 2002, 12:04 AM
colgate must have survived the disaster :D
very very nice and eeh well... somewhat german ;)

03 March 2002, 04:01 AM
damn looking very cool dude :)
cant wait to see the next update.

03 March 2002, 06:13 AM
ohhhh yessssssss
ca tue ca tue!!!
tres beau boulot l'ami:)
C clair en tout cas on veut de la fumée.
sinon le dernier plan me parait sympathique. pour le sol je reprendrai les bonnes paroles de pabbloz....
Vivement les textures:D
allez trois jours y en a plus pour longtemps!

03 March 2002, 02:42 PM
I'm very very happy you like it! Thanks!

Pabbloz: For the background...Wait a little!It's a surprise! ;) Cgkoko: You can vote two times(Or three if you want...) ;)
And i can see you like dead characters
LichiMan:Hehehehe! Thanks a lot my FRIEND! ;)
Joebount: La loukoum dance est une dance a la fois acrobatique et torride qui se danse place de la repu, tout les jours dans une petite boite 3D Parisienne!!! :D ...Et j'ai jamais joué a Wolfenstein et je regarde encore moins de film de la WWII!!!
T A L (Thanks a lot!!!) :p
lildragon: Thanks for critics lil ! All will be changed in the next update! Promized !
Cédric: You want to kill all of us!!!!Grrrrrrr! Hey Pabbloz! Call your Spanish-Mafia! We have to do! Wanted: Cedric-29 May 1983-Student-Belgium!!! We know all of you! Be carefull man! :D
Parallax: Only people who were washing there teeth survived after the apocalypse! It's my concept!i think i will propose it to Hollywood! :D
Kenneth_fejer:Thanks Kenneth! can't wait to see your character update too!
Hobbes:Pour le sol...C'est en ville,donc plat,Mais attendez un peu!
Je prépare un petit fond!

Here is a little Update:

Rest:A little Background...More textures...Working more with lights! and 3 days! :eek:

03 March 2002, 03:27 PM
YAAB !! (You Are A Bastard)


03 March 2002, 04:29 PM
(Oh my god!, in this forum all people are crazy!!! ) :D :D :D

Totitch! I love the surprises!! :p is it my Christma's present? :)

Much better the cloth now!
And We see the smoke now!! uee!! (Maybe too long? bah! It doesn't mind!)
You really worked hard in textures! good! I love the composition (hight...) the render! and the background is awesome too!!
Nice lights!

Bravo Bravo Bravo!!

P.S.: 68795244866... riiiiing... mmm.. hello, I'm Al CaPabbloz,... yes... and I have a homework to you... mm... ok...tomorrow is well.... yes.... He's name is Cédric... ok... It must seem an accident.... ok...with a camion is good... see you! :D :D :D

03 March 2002, 06:47 PM
héhé ;)
mouhahahahaha, does the spanish mafia really exist pabbloz? I thought it was an underground joke :p
But, take care, because the belgian mafia is a great one, and it is knew all over the world for its terrible actions, lol :D :D :D

Totitch, Argh, you are killing me with this pic (and not the pabbloz's camion, lol)... Great stuff my bud, I hope to see more soon :)

03 March 2002, 08:28 PM
(I want to be of Spanish-Mafia too if my Boss (Pabbloz) want it.)
By the way... ILYCF!!!!!!!! (I love your character, FRIEND!!!!!)

03 March 2002, 02:12 PM
hey !
(where is the update you promise yesterday?)

wake up Totich, you've already sleep 3 or 4 hours, it's enought.. Time to update your thread.. :)

03 March 2002, 05:14 PM
superb pose and mood of the scene but the skin looks weird, maybe some(just a little) texturing would be nice there.
I'm glad I didn't join this challenge 'cause if I had, I would have to kill you now before you submit it! :D

03 March 2002, 06:07 PM
So...Thanks to EveryBody for Critics,support and Humor!!! :D
It was a pleasure for me (and my eyes...) and i have been motivated as i 've never been since a long long time!!!

here is my last post for the February challenge...
There is a lot of thing that are not correct in it,but no time to finish it...So maybe an other Update after the Deadline...
I hope you will like was energy for me!

Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...I 'm nervous!
Here it is:

This man is one member of a hunter troop, payed by healthy rich, to track and eradicate contaminated peoples from the planet and then have a new start!...By the way...he is contaminated too! :)

PS: i'm not at home this week-end(No web), so...See you all on the next challenge!

03 March 2002, 06:26 PM
Why you are nervous?

You and Pabbloz ... I'm sure..... win the competition! :D

We will see next time for the next contest.... ;)

B R A V O ! ! !



03 March 2002, 07:06 PM

Totitch! I had never imaginated that you were so good with 3D.
This is the most complete, original and well done contributition to the feb. challenge.
Simply I love it. I give you all my respect because you have demostrated all your powerful talent.

A really really great update. Is all perfect! houses,... texture explosions, illumination, ambience... composition.

You don't have to be nervous, you did an amazing work. I'm sure will be recompensed for it.

I hope see you again soon!

03 March 2002, 07:49 PM

you probably work on your scene all night long to post a so detailled picture this afternoon...
very good composition...

have some critics.. sky is too flat, your character don't have a colgate tube and a toothbrush in his pocket, you don't draw a 2D cartoon when XSI render your fabulous scene and your are not a fish... :)

really impresive indeed.

A lundi, et bon week end.

03 March 2002, 09:42 PM
you've been pretty good at updating your model now totitch, I just replied to your model and complained about the skin and just a few minutes later you've another update! :eek: and with the skin fixed!!! :D
it's really sad that the challenge ends here 'cause your model just get's better and better for each update!

I hope to see a "cartoon"(like pabbloz and nanoneen's) from you in the next challenge :D that would be cooool!

03 March 2002, 09:48 PM
I'm right with you fellah, Totitch, you must do what I expected you to do: a cartoon character!

this character have a goood chance to win the contest (pabbloz too, Koryh too etc....), but I don't recognized you on it!
TOTITCH ! make your coming out, tell us that you are a cartoon fan


03 March 2002, 09:52 PM
Are you a GOD ? If it is true, you can't take part on this challenge and You canNOT win, neither. Sorry, It´s the rules. :D
Ok, Ok, Don´t worry. We'll continue to be friends. :D:D


03 March 2002, 10:06 PM
yaouch!!! This background is excellent, i really love it :D

T' as grave assuré sur cette update, félicitations, j' adore :)

une seule chose a rajouter : Vive colgate, fraicheur extreme en toute circonstance, meme la fin du monde :p

a la prochaine mon ami ;)

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