View Full Version : PA Challenge - Landscape - Sir Manfred

02 February 2002, 04:07 AM
Well... its nothing big really... and its waaay more WIP than anything... maybe... Well, i don't know if i will finish this one but if i get the time i will :)


02 February 2002, 05:48 PM
Allright... i'll *bump* it then!

I don't make landscapes that much so i would like to have at least one constructive comment if possible... :)

02 February 2002, 06:01 PM
maybe you should add some details?

02 February 2002, 09:05 PM
I think the DOF is really distracting. I'd concentrate on getting the scene organised and getting the details in there before adding the DOF.

The texture on the ground closest looks a little too much like noise. Use some bitmaps to add cracks. Also, the horizon looks as though it comes in too early. Add more behind it and lighten up the whole scene...

Keep working on it though, should be good when finished. :)


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