View Full Version : Please critique Jack in the box Animation


Davain
09 September 2004, 12:54 PM
Hello everyone,

A day ago I have posted this animation:

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=169880

in the "Finished Work: 3D and Animation" forum. I would appreciate you to critique every single aspect of it. Mostly I am interested in critique of the textures and the total look.

The Animation was done with Maya, Photoshop and AE as college assignment. Here is a direct link:

Animation (http://stage.co.il/media/mindknot372584.avi)

Thank you.

justicart
09 September 2004, 03:28 AM
pieces seem to fall un-naturally. the recoil on the winding is good.

texture looks good, except it seems blocky - maybe its just from the compression. Lighting makes it kindof flat. maybe add some dramatic spotlights with contrasting shadows. two in front and one in back.

Davain
09 September 2004, 10:08 AM
Thank you for the suggestions

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