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09-07-2004, 11:43 PM
Hi my name is Tom Whitford and I a currently taking animation at VFS. I was working on my animatic(rough animated storyboard) when I ran into a dead-end.
Story: similar to an Itchy and Scratchy episode where underdog pulls gag on goofy character untill the point of death.
My 2 characters are situated in a sawmill(where wood is cut) The bird being the worker and Dog being the boss. In the avi you'll see that it ends ebruptly, I basically need an idea of how to get the dog onto conveyor which will lead to a saw blade and his death. plz post any ideas you may have :)
Thx a lot guys!
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http://www3.telus.net/dayofdefeat/1stversion.rar (http://www3.telus.net/dayofdefeat/1stversion.rar) (need help)
http://www3.telus.net/dayofdefeat/animaitc.rar (http://www3.telus.net/dayofdefeat/animaitc.rar) (idea used; thx loki!)
09-11-2004, 09:04 PM
what if, when he gets the shovel down his throat, he stumbles back on the conveyor switch and falls on the belt, and hits the saw blade?
09-14-2004, 09:13 PM
thx, appreciate the help man that's kinda funny, I'll apply ideas with other ideas etc till I et something that works, other suggestions are welcome :)
01-19-2006, 05:00 AM
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