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Tom W.
09 September 2004, 11:43 PM
Hi my name is Tom Whitford and I a currently taking animation at VFS. I was working on my animatic(rough animated storyboard) when I ran into a dead-end.

Need help!
Story: similar to an Itchy and Scratchy episode where underdog pulls gag on goofy character untill the point of death.

My 2 characters are situated in a sawmill(where wood is cut) The bird being the worker and Dog being the boss. In the avi you'll see that it ends ebruptly, I basically need an idea of how to get the dog onto conveyor which will lead to a saw blade and his death. plz post any ideas you may have :)

Thx a lot guys!
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http://www3.telus.net/dayofdefeat/1stversion.rar (http://www3.telus.net/dayofdefeat/1stversion.rar) (need help)
http://www3.telus.net/dayofdefeat/animaitc.rar (http://www3.telus.net/dayofdefeat/animaitc.rar) (idea used; thx loki!)

justicart
09 September 2004, 09:04 PM
what if, when he gets the shovel down his throat, he stumbles back on the conveyor switch and falls on the belt, and hits the saw blade?

Tom W.
09 September 2004, 09:13 PM
thx, appreciate the help man that's kinda funny, I'll apply ideas with other ideas etc till I et something that works, other suggestions are welcome :)

Thx,

-Tom

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