View Full Version : Female Mecha Gunner
08 August 2004, 02:11 AM
Mecha Female wielding quad hand cannons. Crits always welcome. Enjoy.
08 August 2004, 03:41 AM
the turn is very nice , i feel the weight of the guns , but there is no arc. I think it would look much better if the guns turn in a downward swooping arc since they are heavy.
08 August 2004, 01:02 PM
good idea, hadnt thought of that. thanks for the crit, ill get righton it.
08 August 2004, 06:34 PM
actually the weight distributio on the turn needs to be fixed. when you pick up your foot off the ground. Your hips shift to stand on the other leg until the other foot lands again, then only will the hip get back to the middle.
the recoil on the cannons is good, very convincing. You just need to fix your foot/hip work.
If the character is standing off balance it looks like he has no weight... or unnatural muscle distribution on his thigh...:D
08 August 2004, 05:28 AM
Very nice crit. Ive been revising it a lot more using the top view to help, and Ill be if it isnt work much better, Good Call. Past that, the recoil was rather hard to act out since i had to pull my arms back while stepping back instead of being "pushed" back. I agree it needs work, so... back to it...
01 January 2006, 10:00 PM
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