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07 July 2004, 06:12 AM
... It is game draft work

07 July 2004, 06:33 AM
so..the man looks like brave^^;
i like the feel of color..

have nice work^^

07 July 2004, 06:58 AM
gosh! :eek: It's realy good work! Great color. :applause:

07 July 2004, 12:00 PM
Nice work, not really original but nice.
2 little things :
- it seems there is a hole on the right shoulder of the big character
- and why the girl is the only character who's in movement. Because of that, your pic look weird... :surprised


07 July 2004, 01:38 AM
Thanks for your comment
I will consider your advice
I had tried to express personality of character
but, inexperienced

07 July 2004, 02:05 PM
You got this anime style nailed down! Great illo.

Question though- The shapes behind the foreground character, the thing with the eye(?) on the left and the spikey thing on the right. What are they? If they are weapons I would try to keep them from being hidden behind anything. Their design is so unique that in their present position they are unreadable.

Keep this in mind for your next pix.

07 July 2004, 09:05 PM
i love the color, as for the details, i think that everything has a pretty nice and even depth to it except for the males face. his face just seems to have a lack of detail and color and seems out of place from the rest of the comp.

if you address that i think u will have a winner

07 July 2004, 05:04 AM
My way of thinking about the weapon(Alive weapon).....
As master's weapon, that decorate master only by underpart think
Thank you for indicating member that do not think
And ... Facial detail will try forward

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