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timwarnock
07 July 2004, 12:08 PM
http://www.thenextside.com/pimages/CA05.jpg

Any feedback would be appreciated.
Cheers,
Tim

Ganthur
07 July 2004, 12:23 PM
Very cool image, the only thing that caught my eye at first glance was that the plane in the bottom left looks like it is a bent, but that is probably just me.

Great work

Ganthur

theCloudmover
07 July 2004, 12:44 PM
Excellent. I really like you choice of colors on this. I do agree with Ganthur that the plane looks a bit crooked. It is also not as finely rendered as the other elements in your image. In fact I'd just paint over it. Sure, it does add to the illusion of scale but the figures demonstrate that in a more elegant manner.
Minor quibble.
GREAT pix!! :applause:

The-13
07 July 2004, 04:12 PM
Nice work. I love the colors. It really is good but it seems almost too clean... In a hanger I would think of there being more clutter lying around.

giza
07 July 2004, 06:24 PM
Good enviroment, I enjoy color range

timwarnock
07 July 2004, 10:39 PM
Thanks so much everyone. I will keep working on it and try and address your suggestions.

Rikaro
07 July 2004, 10:52 PM
wow nice work!!
a little more detail on the rear and on the plane may be?

ChristopherRabenhorst
07 July 2004, 11:25 AM
Nice work, but maybe a different perspective would give it more depth and ad to the sense of scale

timwarnock
07 July 2004, 12:41 PM
OK I've reworked it and tried to address all of your comments with the exception of changing
the perspective. I'll save that for the next one :)
Thanks everyone for your feedback. Very helpful.
Cheers,
Tim

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