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06 June 2004, 11:07 AM
Here is the latest Illustration in the Comercial RoboPhone series.
(It is a series of Ad´s, for a Danish Mobilephone Company)
Well I hope you like it, comments are always welcome.
06 June 2004, 11:16 AM
well, the idea is nice BUT...
i can guess that on the left side there will be some kind of slogans, txt etc... if that's correct i understand why the background pic is blurred (but maybe the part covered by the rendering should be sharp/in focus?)
i would work a little more on the lighting/textures... it all looks very plastic. like lego or somethin'...
that's my crit... either wanted or not :p
06 June 2004, 11:24 AM
Try lightning up the scene a little bit more and give some detail to areas of arms and legs. Also it would be nice to see the wire.
That's a tricky concept there. Keep it up!
06 June 2004, 11:27 AM
not bad to me.
01 January 2006, 02:00 PM
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