View Full Version : Environment : Ruin at dusk

06 June 2004, 06:07 PM
Inspired by the music of Upaj (especially Le Lotus Noir), you can listen to it here :

Higher rez version HERE (

06 June 2004, 06:39 PM
that is really awesome that you created this from the insperation of a song.i really like it. :thumbsup: but i think the light on the far left shouldn't come out of the sky so much it makes it look like it's the continuation of the light coming through the rocks. all you really have to do is make that one beem smaller and maybe not as strong. i hope you understand what i'm saying to you :hmm: i think when you fix that it will look great. cheers:beer:

06 June 2004, 07:57 PM
I would work on teh volumetric light a bit more. You wouldn't have harsh beams like that in the foreground (right hand side) without something else blocking them. I'd go for a more overall look and possibly have something that the beam through the ruind wall shines upon.

06 June 2004, 10:39 PM
First of all very good work. The colors palette was well found.

In my opinion the highlights of the left zone, at clouds, disturbes the lecture of image. If itīs more darker, better.

Excuse for my english.


06 June 2004, 08:51 AM
Thanks for the critics, I made a little update to the image, I worked on the background.

Hope you'll like it!

06 June 2004, 10:02 AM
hehe, cool song :bounce:

pic looks great, a bit unrealism, because the sky is too blue i think

but, well done! :applause:

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