View Full Version : funny caracter in progress

06 June 2004, 09:09 AM
Hello everybody! First time here on the board. Im working on a carachter and i would love to have some input. His head, torso and arms are more ore less finished. His hands lack the degrea of detail yet. I welcome all constructive critisism.

Roy :D

06 June 2004, 02:24 PM
The model looks really good. The only thing I can criticize are the back and top edges of his ear. They look a little bit boxy. Maybe you could make them thinner and curl in a little bit. Otherwise it's a gread model. Made me grin.


06 June 2004, 12:45 AM
Nice comic character :thumbsup: , but the forms are too strong on the body
(sorry my english is poor)

06 June 2004, 01:58 AM
Great character, the only thing i can say is that he is Fat, yet very toned at the same time, which doesn't make sense. also the eyes look kind of weird to me.
again great model, looking forward to anims/tests

06 June 2004, 10:15 AM
wow ive never seen an old man with a belly but also with a massively cut back body. haha. even out his muscles on his back, from the front he looks just a beer chugger, then from the back view it looks like hes a full body trainer... just skinnier that usual haha, but great job on everything.

06 June 2004, 07:37 PM
Good Comic Caracter! But The Lines on the body is much strong, if you try to smooth then... i think!
yeah I think you can smooth more in the back (in the spine) seems to have some kind a fish cartilage ... :D


06 June 2004, 06:50 AM
I think the eye lids should be tight to the eyeballs.
They are casting shadows and that looks strange to me.

It's up to you, it's your character.

06 June 2004, 02:50 AM
I think I know that guy. It looks great. The only crit I have is that it looks a little weird where the neck attaches to the clavicles. It just doesn't look believable. Even for a cartoon character.

07 July 2004, 08:00 AM
great character

yeah as said the neck does the opposite of what it should,
maybe make it fatter at the base and thiner were it attaches to the head.

the spine is a ridge and some vertibre in there.

the belly buttons to hi its on the top of the stomach.

I want to see those tight wee legs!

07 July 2004, 09:04 AM
nice, clean modeling... are you gonna animate it?

07 July 2004, 03:13 AM
great character, are you going to give him elderly hair. Ears, Nose, crazy eyebrows, facial scruff, etc? I think it would really bring out his comic look.

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