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06 June 2004, 08:25 PM
This is just a window I made to create the style of my new animation project.....C&C are welcome

06 June 2004, 09:25 PM
good start. The main piece of torn wallpaper looks really good, now add a little variety to the other ripped pieces, to clean of cuts right now. I'd also add a little texture to the wall behind the wallpaper that is showing. the only other critiques I have, is out the window looks a bit flat, but that may be the style you're going for and that you may want to play with your lighting/shadows some to either make it look a bit more realistic, or stylized.

06 June 2004, 01:51 PM
and a little update...

06 June 2004, 04:32 PM
great work! the dolls hanging give it a nice touch

06 June 2004, 06:07 PM
and here is a little update

c&c are welcome

06 June 2004, 03:00 PM
OMG! That looks beautifully ugly! Really nice work with the peeling wallpaper. Only two crits. The dolls hanging from the window look too clean. Is it worth mussing them up and adding cobwebs? Also would like to see more glare on the window, especially on the broken edges. Otherwise, great concept and detail.

06 June 2004, 10:58 PM
HA! that's awesome, it has a great feel to it. i love the little dolls, i want one as a keychain :)

can't wait for more

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