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06 June 2004, 02:36 AM
dave lynch has entered the Machineflesh 2D Challenge.

06 June 2004, 03:15 AM

the time is short, but the soul...


see the TEMPLAR project (

06 June 2004, 05:32 AM (

Egypt reimagined. Osiris has been forever locked in a pyrimid tomb in his new form of mummification.

06 June 2004, 05:42 AM
:wavey: Lovely sketches and interesting concept....

keep the WIPs coming as time is nearly over...great start and good luck with your entry:thumbsup: :)

06 June 2004, 06:10 AM (

after working on the some more ideas i finally came up with a vision i was happy with. kinda like a spider hanging down from his web.

06 June 2004, 07:09 AM (

I studied alot of Egpyptian art for color and how it should fit with the design and besides gold i thought blue would look great. at this point i'm still trying to figure out do i want to paint it loose or tight

06 June 2004, 07:22 AM
Nice idea and very nice line work! :beer:

Good luck!:thumbsup:

My machineflesh entry (

06 June 2004, 05:34 PM
cool idea! I like the choice to try out the blue on the piece too but you migt play it down a little so it doesnt look too much like a transformer toy or something. Maybe cuz the background is blue too? Its just too lue right now but it is a good idea as a break from the norm with how egyptian outfits tend to be colored all gold and brown.


06 June 2004, 07:40 PM
Great Tech!!! Lots of cool techy workings and cool shapes!:beer:

06 June 2004, 08:23 PM
Cool Tech!Machineflesh Entry-Shocktroops ( :buttrock:

06 June 2004, 09:19 PM
It's a nice start, but maybe you could decide on an area you want the viewer to look at, and intensify that section with the hi-lights you have going on already. At the moment you have hi-lights on every element of your machinery.......not allowing the eye to rest in one place.

I think this piece has real potential if you diffused the light a little.

Just a thought

I'll come back to your thread Tomorrow, to give any last crit, on the build up to final submission. I'd appreciate any last crits on mine, also.

Much appreciated, and the best of luck!


06 June 2004, 03:58 AM (

Getting close to the deadline and still working hard. just a couple of more tweaks and i'll be finished.

06 June 2004, 09:36 PM (

Done at last

06 June 2004, 11:49 PM
Thanks guys for the imput it really help me going in the right direction.:buttrock:

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