View Full Version : Woman - Semireal - WIP

06 June 2004, 04:32 PM
I've just started making a small 10p comic novel, and wanted to model the main character, named Jericho Jive. I'll post a drawing of her sometime soon, but crit the model meanwhile..

06 June 2004, 03:41 AM
At this stage in the models developement it is hard to tell what is going on with the legs. I am kind of figuring that she has somewhat baggy pants on, if not the lower legs are far to fat.

How about posting a close up of the face, I would like to take a look at it.

What are you planning on doing with this model, is this actually going to be used for the comic? And I am excited to see the drawing I would like to know a little more about what she is supposed to be modeled after, right now it is kind of hard to crit.

06 June 2004, 02:47 PM
oooh Lord that woman is thick, just the way I like them!!! I like your style, it's very comic booky. The head might be a little square though. It's gonna be a pain in the ass getting those thick legs to deform right but there are ways to deal with that. Keep working on it, I would like to see what it will look like

06 June 2004, 09:06 PM
Hi all, I'm moving apartments, so my scanner is kind of hard to dig up at the moment, stay with me thou..

Here are two updates;

Put the upper body further back for balance, and did some tweaking to hands and arms.

Also, a textured version to give a small idea of what the finished thing is going to look like.

06 June 2004, 02:01 PM
My PC is officially dead and gone - I only just manage to get into the BIOS before it snaps again..
The project won't be finished any time soon, and I'm just hoping for a miracle and a ressurection..
If anyone out there knows what's going on with my machine, please advise! I'm thinking the heatsink or the hard drive is the problem..

06 June 2004, 02:52 PM
I had a heatsink die on me (With an AMD Chip), and the Chip went loopy :(

Replaced the Chip & Fan (Downgraded the Chip with a spair I had for now) got me up and running.

06 June 2004, 06:35 PM
Just managed to get the PC up and running, made a few tweaks the model and added some armor before it got messed up again......

07 July 2004, 11:33 PM
Hi! My PC is still dead, but managed to get a few pages of the comic sacnned for your reference.

07 July 2004, 07:15 AM
Im not totally sure what look youre going for but the breasts seem a bit to large, the style also looks a bit to chunky in comparison to drawing, give her some hair it instantly looks better.

are you going to use a toon shader?

07 July 2004, 03:12 PM
Don't think I'll use a toon shader, no. I think I'd loose too much detail in that case.

07 July 2004, 02:41 AM
hey man, I dig the concept. Couple things, I am assuming that it's a wip.

So, you can take this or leave it.
1. The boustie is missing the draw strings across the front.
2. The garter doesn't seem to have any attachments, where they meet the stockings.
3. She seems to have a wicked tan is this the look you are going for?
4. shoulder straps?
5. More definitions in the calves.
6. Definetly hair
7. The boobs do look a little big.
8. I think her jaw bone is a bit too pronounced it gives her a bit of mannish look.
That's it for me man, can't wait to see where you take it.

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