Lost Adventurer, Aleks Kirilenko (3D)
LC #42 Pipers Alley

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06-07-2004, 09:09 PM
I'm currently a student at VFS and I'm just posting up my female that I'm doing for my demo reel. Anything you can say to help would be much appreciated.Thanx.

http://www.vfs.com/~3d47jason/closer shot.jpg

06-07-2004, 10:46 PM
Very good model man. But there are still quite a few things odd with it.

- Her posture seems to be a bit poor. Maybe pull the shoulders and arms a bit forward maybe.
- There's a line running down continuous to where her cheekbones end. This is also causing some awkward flatness in the chin area.
- Still a bit smudgy with the detail in some areas.
- A bit cuby with the sides of her arm and legs
- Her brow seems to be too thick, but i guess it doesn't look too bad when hair is on.

- There is a small lump on her dress tucked in between the wrinkels. And it seems to be pinching too much with the wrinkles on her breast.

Sister Ky
06-08-2004, 09:14 AM
Her nose looks a bit strange, too..

Greetz, Ky.

06-08-2004, 11:57 AM
I like the cloth topo, small small thing the nose, and the side of the boots are funky.

good job overall

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