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06 June 2004, 02:43 PM

This is my first attempt at an environment and at the same time at something semi-realistic. So, critique away !
House (
3D MAX 4.2 + Photoshop for textures
Thanks in advance.

06 June 2004, 04:14 PM
No replies ? Come on guys, help me out here( please ? :) )

Sister Ky
06 June 2004, 11:57 AM
I like the house and the tree in the backround.
I find it strange that the posters are all torn into pieces. At least one or two would still be complete...
The curtain-thing behind the window looks strange. Needs more folds...
The street's too empty. Some little plants, some debris ...even a dead mouse would do to make things look more interessting...

Greetz, Ky.

06 June 2004, 04:03 PM
Aha, a reply,

Thanks for the comments, updating as we speak !

06 June 2004, 11:28 PM
Here's an update

Sister Ky
06 June 2004, 09:26 AM
Yeah, much better. But the barrels and the wheel of the cart are too shiny.

Greetz, Ky.

06 June 2004, 09:34 AM
They are indeed to shiny and clean, thanks again


4 low
06 June 2004, 12:44 AM
The colors look a bit too saturated. It kinda feels more cartooney than realistic.

06 June 2004, 03:47 AM
And here we have, another update (

06 June 2004, 09:43 AM
I think the composition lets this pic down more than anything else, If I were you I would pull out from the scene a little bit add a few more props to take the focus off the cart, desaturate the colours a little bit and work on the texturing and lighting some more..

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