View Full Version : character: my cute hobgoblin!!


EGGer
06 June 2004, 08:47 PM
maya

3 days


i am looking forward to hear your feedback!! thank you !
http://www.ttgarden.com/pic/p-001.jpg


here is my story http://www.ttgarden.com/pi/index2.html

mitlancer
06 June 2004, 09:10 PM
Aww! So Cute!!!! Good job! Very nice work.

Sister Ky
06 June 2004, 12:20 PM
Cute in deed. Perhaps work on the feet some more...?

Greetz, Ky.

LiffaMan
06 June 2004, 04:09 PM
nice work... !!
the eye need more specular and that's it...
nice ........ mm........ thing you'v Got There!!

EGGer
06 June 2004, 04:51 PM
thank you Ky

thank you LiffaMan


yeah the feet seems to be a little simple. yeah i should add a few detail on the feet .

i have changed the eye what do you think about this one? :)


http://www.ttgarden.com/pic/p-002.jpg

Zycho
06 June 2004, 06:18 PM
New eye is way better! Nice model!! But detail the feet a bit more... But great job!

THEUNFORGIVEN
06 June 2004, 12:08 AM
Cool character.

I don't think it's just the feet that need some work, in my opinion there's something wrong from the waist down.
Also, have you tried 4 fingers in stead of 5? The hands look kinda big... His left arm looks bigger than his right one too.

Could you post some wireframes from different views?

Don't take these crits in a negative way right, they're just what I think could be an improvement on this little fellow.

Keep it up!
:thumbsup:

EGGer
06 June 2004, 09:35 AM
THEUNFORGIVEN:

thank you for your reply indeed.

the different angle images are :
http://www.ttgarden.com/pic/p-003.jpg
http://www.ttgarden.com/pic/p-004.jpg
http://www.ttgarden.com/pic/wireframe.jpg
http://www.ttgarden.com/pic/wireframe2.jpg


i think the different arms seems a little Natural , isn't it ?

may be i should do some modification on the arms ,i will think about it .

en the feet looks well right now . it is the shape what i want

i will try my best to post another character soon!!


thank you

Sister Ky
06 June 2004, 10:15 AM
I prefer the black eye...

Greetz, Ky.

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