View Full Version : Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: Crystal Webb

05 May 2004, 06:38 AM
Crystal Webb has entered the Machineflesh 2D Challenge.

05 May 2004, 01:53 AM (

Well, it would appear that my earlier postings were among that pool of unfortunates that were lost in the hacker incident.. As a result, I'm reposting my Line Art.. (Hopefully this'll go smoothly as the site was hassling me earlier when I tried to put up images.)

And the updates shall be fast and furious as I'm putting in what I've already done, followed by the finishing touches that I'm putting on the image ATM. Comments are /greatly/ appreciated.

05 May 2004, 02:03 AM (

Messing around with the colour scheme for the bat. I actually like the way the tongue's turning out.

05 May 2004, 02:07 AM (

It's starting to take shape in this one. The background, of course, sucks - but I'm working on that. ;)

05 May 2004, 08:39 PM (

Well, this is pretty much it. Comments are very welcome.

05 May 2004, 01:00 AM
Really nice :applause: like what you did with the coloring very cool :wavey:

05 May 2004, 01:36 AM
Good start Crystal, I would make a somoother transition from the flesh tongue and the metal tongue. that way it looks as if it's part of the body and not just attached to the end to extend the tongue. Good luck and keep up the good work

05 May 2004, 07:09 PM
Thanks guys. I appreciate the feedback. I'm going to play around with it a bit more, certainly taking your suggestion, Cliff. :) What does everyone think of the wings? Does the transparancy read?

06 June 2004, 06:36 PM
Nice angle on the bat - I wouldn't have thought the wings are transparent though. Maybe some sort of background you can see through the wings might help?

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