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01 January 2002, 12:21 AM
This is a strong man, a character from my new game. Pls give me some suggestion.
:) :) :) :) :) :)
01 January 2002, 02:16 AM
He looks quite convincing.
My critique is to some dynamic forms of human body that are missing. He looks bit too roundish everywhere to bee very fit.
The hands and arms disturb me most. The forearm/wrist muscles shoudl be very asymmetrical so that the outer part goes past the elbow joint to the beginning of the bicep. The inner side should be more bulging.
The hands look weird but in a small pic like this one can't really tell whats the problem.
The stomach muscles look quite even and weird too they are just horizontal stripes.
Look for anatomy references.
Anyway the pic works fine already as it is. These were just my perceptions.
01 January 2002, 02:51 AM
Pretty sweet. Is he going to have a big ass shotgun? Or something to that effect? It's a really nice start, although I do agree with what kerosene said. One of the reasons the hands look wierd is because of the thumb, it looks like it's backwards. And the fingers could use a bit more defenition. Also the gloves really distract my attention from the character. How bout making them go with his belt or shirt. Just a few suggestions. Look forward to see what you come up with.
01 January 2002, 12:45 PM
very good!. but I don't like his hands.
01 January 2006, 01:39 AM
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