View Full Version : Peace Minded Fighter

04 April 2004, 05:55 PM
hi everyone ! this is my first image on a WACOM! it took me a lot of time (between 15 and 20 hours of work)
sorry for the quality it's jpeg so...a bit blurry

worked on photoshop 7


give your advice plz!

04 April 2004, 07:51 PM
waiting for C and C

04 April 2004, 08:07 PM
wow, that's pretty good for a first time wacom drawing. i really like the gesture and the anatomical proportion. the hair is really cool. i like the background too, it really exentuates the character. good consistant lighting. some comments would be that the right arm (his left) needs some cleaning up on the edge. you still have some air brushinng going outside of his arm. as far as the anatomy goes, it looks like his kind of gets cut straight off at the bottom. that may have been a stylistic decision though. also, there are some problems with the clavicals (collar bones). the one on the right comes down too low and is too straight and the one on the left is not visible at all. the inner part of the clavicals should come up to the pit of the neck. also, i would take down some of the contrast on the abs. it think it would make it look less like a drawing if you did that. over all though, pretty sweet. i like it. cool style. much better than my first wacom drawing. :D :thumbsup:

04 April 2004, 08:26 PM
..nice ..but guess head too big ... ... or it's all about his hair .. don't like panth ...mmm... weird ... and highlights on gauntlets ...:shrug: ..nice anyway

04 April 2004, 07:30 AM
i liked the sketch alot better, but as for a first time wacom its not bad:)

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