View Full Version : Cartoon Scene: Sompin' Ain't Right Here

04 April 2004, 05:56 AM
Thanks for looking.


04 April 2004, 06:49 AM
It lock like in Finding Nemo.
God work.


04 April 2004, 07:09 AM
Ha,ha :applause: ...nice and fun

04 April 2004, 10:26 AM
Looks great.

That octopus seemed to have too much coffee for his own good. :)

04 April 2004, 11:49 AM
maybe the fish is to much colorless

in any case good:thumbsup:

04 April 2004, 11:56 AM
I'm not too much of an expert when it comes to cartoonish looks but I think the lighting could use some tweaking,right now,it makes the hooks look out of place.

Notice that you could also have stylized them and only used a flat color and it would have been as good IMO.

Great work!

04 April 2004, 12:12 PM
Yeah, I also first thought of Finding Nemo.

I like it, nice picture, although the background is a little too blurry, me thinks.

04 April 2004, 12:22 PM
Eheheheh great!

What i really like on this image is the eyes, specially the blue one's.

The shaders look really good, have a soft touch.

What i think u really could improve is the modeling. Specially on the blue one.

And yes, i also love the Finding Nemo look eheheheh.

04 April 2004, 10:07 PM
Thanks guys. All suggestions noted. I'm anticipating being more active here at cgtalk since this seems to be the place to post if you are looking for serious critiques. Beware, I usually like to tell it like it is. heh heh -- Ray

CGTalk Moderation
01 January 2006, 02:00 AM
This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.