View Full Version : stills: Maserati Ad

04-19-2004, 08:51 PM
software : 3dsmax
final render before i move on.
1024*768 background

and the a4 advert style.

04-19-2004, 09:13 PM
Model and render looks good. My suggestions would be to decrease the canvas width by 25 percent and decrease the white glow around the car. I would also allow more deadspace below the car - It's a bit close to the bottom right now.

04-19-2004, 09:26 PM
Ethan Martin is right, I'd also decrease the width - and not for just 25 percent. I think this ad would have a lot more style if it would look like a "filmstrip" - the width is just not necessary in this case.

But it already looks really cool, great render!

PS: I like the glow :-)

04-19-2004, 10:34 PM
update - 1st post

04-19-2004, 11:08 PM
Awesome. maybe get some side shots? :):)

04-19-2004, 11:24 PM
Awesome work!!!

04-19-2004, 11:57 PM
very nice image, but i would raise the camera a bit

04-20-2004, 12:10 AM
Excellent choice for the gar :buttrock:
Really well executed modelling and rendering :buttrock:
Classical but strong composition :buttrock:

--> :buttrock: <--

04-20-2004, 12:19 AM
another view

04-20-2004, 01:48 AM
I love the angle and color temperature in the second shot. It would be interesting to see this angle in a billboard style layout. - beautiful car

04-20-2004, 02:39 AM

the headline seem a little odd in the 3rd image 3/4 view.
could be because the area around it is too dark.
or maybe a little lack of detail in the dark area. could be because of ur lighting tho. but anyway, great job!

04-20-2004, 07:54 AM
Hey JHarford,

I really like the A4 Ad style, looks great. If you'd lend me a few bucks I'd buy a Maserati for sure... ;-))

04-20-2004, 10:01 AM
thanks guys :)

04-20-2004, 11:33 AM
looks good to me may be the first shot has a little too much glow around the car .... maybe


04-20-2004, 11:40 AM
Woow the model looks very good ! :bowdown:
The mod. & render is amazing ! Good job , i like that one...

04-20-2004, 06:11 PM
thanks guys :) - i toned down the glow a little

04-20-2004, 06:34 PM

04-21-2004, 03:04 AM
joey jo jo... this is great...
I love the first three shots.. but I kind of think that last one could use some work...
the reflections are tooo intense in the headlight cover and front of the car..
tone down the out put on that map...or raize the camera a bit..
and your textures are nice, but to low rez for the image..
however I do think that it has potental:thumbsup:

04-23-2004, 05:48 PM
A4 'version' is the best.. nicely done

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