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04 April 2004, 10:36 PM
one of my first manga character done with photoshop 7 & mouse

04 April 2004, 10:47 PM
.. worst anatomy ... is this a sword behind ? .. but i like expression ..:)

04 April 2004, 10:59 PM
Your posts generally don't help much.

Personally I think its very true to the anime/manga style and love it. Great work. Only crit is that if the sword is on her back add a bit of detail so its not looking like a background element.

04 April 2004, 11:44 PM
That's pretty good with just mouse, I can't draw jack with the mouse =) Get rid of lense flare, don't ever ever touch lense flare, it's evil! If you want some metalic shine effect, draw it by hand =)

04 April 2004, 12:59 AM
ok...evil lensflare... got it... what about filters ? :blush:

@perfecti ... eh uhm thx

@MrPunkin the sword is that black coz its the evil sword of darkness and its made of shadows... :thumbsup:

04 April 2004, 07:27 AM
Ah, good, now that you explain it there is no need to make any changes:thumbsup:

04 April 2004, 09:24 AM
i think it looks really good.. and for a job done with mouse.. well its excellent..

04 April 2004, 11:57 AM
i like it a lot. but you could have pose the character a little a-smetric now it looks flat.. anyway nice piece and keep it up!!!

04 April 2004, 12:21 PM
her thighs are far to short, beside that nice picture! :thumbsup:

04 April 2004, 04:49 PM
her body looks too simmetrical
you draw a half and then mirror it?

04 April 2004, 10:01 PM
I'd agree on the lack of a pose. It makes the whole a lot less interesting. I also think even for an anime character her waist gets a bit thin.

It's an interesting piece but with a little more effort I think it could be a lot better.

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