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04 April 2004, 12:23 AM

Just finished a new photoshop painting. Took me about
5 hours.

C&C are always welcome!

04 April 2004, 12:34 AM
Very nice I love the lighting. Girl looks very comfortable and into her music. Nice job.

04 April 2004, 12:40 AM
You should spend another 5 hours, well meybe just 3 hours (:-)) painting to adjust the contrast (becouse there is to litle of it) and gradation (more gradation needed) and it will be a great picture for someones room poster,,,,

hope this helps....:thumbsup:

04 April 2004, 02:25 AM
looking great

but her mouth is a bit odd, looks a doll's mouth

nice work though:thumbsup:

04 April 2004, 02:56 AM
i love the lighting.. done very well.. and her pose is good.. :)

04 April 2004, 09:24 AM
I love it! Looks like a girl for me :)

The only minor things I've noticed are her right hand; It's looking kinda weird.
The other thing is the edge of the bed. It looks a bit too sharp, like it's not anti aliased :D

Other than that it's loooking very very good IMO!:thumbsup:

04 April 2004, 10:40 AM
Very nice.
Korekoso hikarito kage desune.
Sankouni narimasu.
Sorewa souto bokumo iPod hoshiinaa.

04 April 2004, 12:34 PM
I llike it very much. It has a very nice feel to it.

Why didn't came my iPod with a girl like that...

04 April 2004, 01:17 PM
thnx everyone! I'm glad you like it!

Thnx! This was supposed to be a speedpaint so this is
the original resolution of the pic :cry:
While I was painting I went more and more into detail.
So I don't think that I will spend more time on this.

Maybe the lips are too dark. I'll try to lighten them up.

Indeed I didn't realize that edge thing. I'll fix it!
I'll check the right hand also. Thnx for your crits!

Arigatou gozaimasu!
Konkaiwa shirokuro de charenji shimashita.

yeah:) they would sell much more iPods

04 April 2004, 02:51 PM
OK I just fixed the edge of the bed, did some work on the right hand and made the lips brighter.

04 April 2004, 02:56 PM
cool stuff man! It's original on b/w.
This was supposed to be a speedpaint so this is
the original resolution of the pic
While I was painting I went more and more into detail.
So I don't think that I will spend more time on this.

Don't worry! I have the same probleme. I'm so concentred on my work than I put more and more details...and the work and work is almost finished! :blush:

besides it is very beautiful and that gives freshness


04 April 2004, 09:47 PM
I love the way she looks relaxed, nice catched. Too bad the resolution isn't too high. Very lovely.

04 April 2004, 04:16 PM

I recently started to create daily paintings. Everyday at least
one picture. So I draw in very small resolutions. Too bad...
I'm posting them on under speedpaints btw.

04 April 2004, 08:04 PM
realy very good picture Goro :)
i like her expression. quite relaxed somehow.
there is something strange with the crossed legs.
i dont know what exactly it is but the shading looks wrong on some places. plus im not sure if the shape is all correct there.
nonenthless a very good pic :thumbsup:

04 April 2004, 08:17 PM
Sweet picture :D love the pose she is laid out in and the lighting. very good speedpaint this:D

04 April 2004, 08:32 PM
oops your right! The shape is not correct indeed....I see also
the shading problem. Maybe I'll fix it. Thnx for your crits!

Thnx! I'm glad you like it!

Polygon Origami
04 April 2004, 10:52 PM
Her right hand and looks odd to me; seems too far of an outward angle... or maybe her arm angle is too inward? Not sure. The pose itself is good; she has a nice expressive gesture. Lighting is well done too. Nice speedpaint.

04 April 2004, 10:13 AM
really nice ... and great light

04 April 2004, 08:00 PM
thnx guys!

05 May 2004, 07:43 AM
I like ur idea of showing the model half in shade and half lit with sun shine.
Did u color it latter?

05 May 2004, 05:19 PM
nice girl ... :drool: (sweet :p)

and i really like the lightning. very realistic, pal.

05 May 2004, 10:48 AM
Lovely picture.
There is maybe too much details on the face, regarding of the rest of the picture.
But it is really great.

05 May 2004, 09:02 PM
I didn't colorize it. It was just a lightvalue study.

cr0ss: thnx!

Thnx It's an honor for me to get a post form you!
I agree about the face. Thnx for your crit!

05 May 2004, 07:36 AM
Great work!
I hope someday I can make something like that in 2d or 3d!

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