View Full Version : Character : Polo posing

03 March 2004, 02:08 PM
hi all, here may last attempt to character

03 March 2004, 02:10 PM
wire&rig :

03 March 2004, 03:49 PM
The ankle bone is too strong.
The knee has some very small thing to it, can't really tell what.
The upper leg muscle is a bit down.

And the pubic area ... LOL ... it's too damn strange! I mean, either he has something there or he hasn't!!! As it is, it's really strange.

Other than that, seems really great!

03 March 2004, 05:04 PM
Nice work overall....
But I do notice a few things...
The head appears long, and placed a bit too high.
Eyebrows are too high up.
Strange 'nerve' on biceps.
Pecs curve upwards too early.
Large depression on the back below the neck.
The bottoms hang a lil too much and something elses wrong there, but i m not sure.
The hips in front view, are a bit lean and straight.
oops too many crits ;)

03 March 2004, 05:08 PM
You've got a nice model there man, but please remove the 'stump' thingy in the private area, it just, looks bad and ruins the rest of the model. Make it flat, or model the extra bit (and maybe censur it :)). Otherwise it's great.

03 March 2004, 05:29 PM
Looks great! But give the man some "manhood" or put on some cloth if you think itís to much exposing the pubic area, it looks really weird the way it is now.

I like the soft light and your backdrops too.

Could need some higher or bigger tights to I think, but hey great work :thumbsup:

03 March 2004, 06:26 PM
cool model you got here, good line flow. The groin thing has been said but the legs look like they need to be longer. And Q_B mentioned the knee I think if you run the lines more horizontal arond the knee taht will help, right now they are going up at an angle also i think they are protruding outward a little to much. Overall good work keep it up. :thumbsup:

03 March 2004, 02:49 PM
hop on remonte... nan mais...

Je suis assez d'accord avec les critiques ci haut, domage cette espece de boulette.. veux, veux-pas, le regard y est porte (que veux-tu la nature humaine est ainsi faite) et ca gache un peu le reste du modele fort bien realise. (et c'est quoi le truc qui coule du nombril? :surprised )

Sinon comme il y a autant de forme de corps qu'il y a de caracteres differents, ya que l'artiste qui decide de son modele ;)

Par contre j'ai une demande speciale... une colabo de ton monsieur avec la dame de miss Anthalis :bounce:

Hein? dis dis chiche!

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