View Full Version : Character: The First Strike

03 March 2004, 03:32 AM
Looking for critique


03 March 2004, 03:52 AM
models are decent, but texture and background needs some work, maybe add some more details into the background. More shadowing might help too.

03 March 2004, 06:57 AM
you could defintely make the lighting a LOT more dynamic if you spent an hour at it. It would improve the render a lot

03 March 2004, 08:13 AM
the landline is no good:shrug:

03 March 2004, 02:45 PM
if you use poser it's better to say when you post the image rather than being torn to bits later on ( I'm not saying poser is a bad thing, but people like to know before they crit, so they know what there is to crit )

for the image though, I think the lighting needs the most work, perhaps add some flame in photosshop as well :)

03 March 2004, 10:07 PM
Yes it was done in Poser. I am currently trying to learn 3DSMax

03 March 2004, 10:55 PM
to me the problem is the lighting and the texture need more bump

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