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02 February 2004, 12:41 PM
A Japanese temple

It was done in Cinema 4D 6 CE, its for my 3rd assignment in 3d

Any comments you have will :buttrock:

Cheers :beer:

02 February 2004, 01:54 PM
thats a really good piece, i especially like the lighting and texturing, it works very well togther. keep it up

02 February 2004, 02:21 PM
Very nice work man! Very nice!

02 February 2004, 02:29 PM
Really good, but i think the background is a little empty... Maybe some mountains?

02 February 2004, 02:35 PM

Got another picture i could't post before


02 February 2004, 03:10 PM
really good lighting and modeling. It has a really nice feel to it. Keep it up :applause:

02 February 2004, 05:02 PM
Hi Threga, I culd say in the first shot
the shadows projected by tress are not in the right direction..

The textures are nice (even if the round "cup" at the end of the roof seems a little too dull..)

The flowers of peaches on the ground seems a little bit too big, but, man, these are details! :beer:

The overall mood is nice, and well balanced
with the theme.

have a nice work!



02 February 2004, 05:51 PM
Cinema 3d? Did I missed something? ...

02 February 2004, 05:56 PM
it's a real good peace.

i have just one litle point of crit, the flowers on the ground seems a little flat to me.

but overall good JOB !!:thumbsup:

02 February 2004, 06:13 PM
Nice job. It could use a bit of a bumpmap here and there and the grass needs more work.

02 February 2004, 07:02 PM
really nice..

well a little comment here

for the last 2 image u posted, it seems u forget he light direction which didn't match with the direction at the sky.

i love the first image more :)

but all of them r really nicee :)

03 March 2004, 10:39 AM
Cheers everyone for you comments,

Yeah i ment Cinema 4D, my bad :rolleyes:

The flowers on the ground are just a texture, works in the first picture but are a bit flat in the second.
I could fix the lighting, but i'm going to just leave it as it is (as we had a time limit), and move on to something else .:D But i'll take it all into consideration for next time :beer:

03 March 2004, 09:53 PM
really nice picture ^^ and concept overall. but like my upstairs neighbour sez, some elements are still flat like the flowers and grass :D

but for real, the conception is real awesom:thumbsup:

03 March 2004, 10:50 PM
great work.
i really like the style of the house and the detail you put into it.
very nice mood.

i think you could add some detail in front of the house to increase the realsim. like some grass and stuff like that.
also a bit more bump could make it look a little more realistic.

but overall great work.:bounce:

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