View Full Version : Character: Female body (Nudity)


FerryvD
02 February 2004, 10:17 PM
This is my first serious attempt on making a human body in Lightwave.
For now in my opinion it looks quite good anatomicly but i'd like to have a second opinion from you guys, so please give me some critics and tips how to make it even better.

When i get more progress i will add more pictures.

http://www.ferryvd.nl/upload/uploads/lichaam03.jpg

thanx in advance.

FerryvD

FerryvD
02 February 2004, 10:21 PM
and a picture from the back ofcourse:

http://www.ferryvd.nl/upload/uploads/lichaam04.jpg

FerryvD
02 February 2004, 10:37 PM
oops i just noticed i put this in the wrong forums.
Can one of the moderators please move this to the WIP section?

Excuse me for the mistake

keltuzar
02 February 2004, 11:09 PM
would be great if you could post a wireframe also.
It would easier to critique your work but it does look good to me.

FerryvD
02 February 2004, 08:27 PM
http://www.ferryvd.nl/upload/uploads/lichaam05.jpg
here's a wireframe, been working a little on the arms the rest is almost the same as the images above.

Can one of the moderators move this to the WIP section please

aesir
02 February 2004, 09:50 PM
that belly button is huge...

FerryvD
02 February 2004, 10:11 PM
hmmm, i thought it was quite ok, but i'm gonna take a look at some pictures to see how it should be than.

Thanx for the critique

keltuzar
02 February 2004, 11:47 PM
Your topology generally seems good. Although you may want to work with the chest area.
I find no other problems besides that.

FerryvD
02 February 2004, 11:50 PM
could you be a bit more specific?
You mean where all the polygons meet eachother on the middle of the chest? How would you solve this, if it's that's the case?

keltuzar
02 February 2004, 02:32 AM
Ok, I did a search through cgtalk for body topology here is one that may help you out...Body Topology (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=108412&highlight=topology).

Zack
02 February 2004, 07:41 AM
Her nipples look too small to my (highly trained:beer: ) eye.

lol

Great job, other than what others have already mentioned it looks good. The modelling is great, the materials I find very distracting.

FerryvD
02 February 2004, 02:45 PM
keltuzar
Thanx for that topic, it's full of usefull information. I'll take a look at that chest to see how i can improve mine.

zero2zillion
I just made the nipples smaller before i posted the pics because i thought they where much too big, with the feedback of some collegues of mine :) so i kinde like them the way they are now.
As for the materials, i just took this to get rid of the boring grey which is the default color in lightwave.

Anyway thanx for the feedback.
I will post pictures of the hands soon, i almost got them finished.

FerryvD
02 February 2004, 04:03 PM
http://www.ferryvd.nl/upload/uploads/hand01.jpg

Here's my first ever try on a hand, I'm not totally satisfied yet but for a first try i think it's ok.

C&C?

Robhead
03 March 2004, 11:04 AM
WOA great job man

but i do think that the hole in her stommach (the belly button is to big) and i do think the fingers are to thin and a bit to long

oh and zero2zillion:

i don't think they are tho small with the right textures they look fine (and i just had an example in my hands :beer: )

FerryvD
03 March 2004, 02:48 PM
thanx for your comment Robhead
I already fixed the bellybotton after the comment of aesir
but i haven't posted a new image since the change.

And as i said before the hands aren't perfectly yet, i also noticed the size of fingers is wrong, i'm gonna fix that soon.

FerryvD
03 March 2004, 02:37 PM
been away for a week and just took a look at my model. Now i just thought it was totally messed up. So i started tweaking it to make it better. I already partially remade the breasts and did some other small tweaks but somehow i can't get it look right.

Can somebody please put me on the rightway with some good advice.

thanx in advance

http://www.ferryvd.nl/upload/uploads/lichaam06.jpg

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