View Full Version : Game Character: Anubis

02 February 2004, 12:53 AM
This is a character I'm currently working on for my final project. I'm open to any tips or ideas on the texture anyone might have. Give me lots of feed back please, I would like it.

02 February 2004, 01:11 AM
At first glance, I'd say that the head could be just a tad smaller, and he's got absolutely no butt. His calves are a little ballooned compared to the rest of his legs.

On the texturing, You could probably do with a little les definition on the muscles, and I could be wrong, but it looks like a lot of dodge and burn is what you used, and while the tools have their place, if overused, can make the colors look off.

Post up a wireframe, so people can crit that, and maybe a render with a lighter background. The way it is now, it's hard to see what's what.

Having said all that, It's more than I've done, so hopefully someone else will come along with some more experience and give you some more crits.

02 February 2004, 01:39 AM
I'll second the butt thing...;)

There seems to be an anomoly at the back of the head where the cloth cuts of at a hard edge. It looks a little wierd.

His skin and cloth texture needs a little more detail and variation. At the moment it doesn't really look like skin. The red skin bits look kindof out of place as well.

Looks like a nice model though, well done!

02 February 2004, 02:29 AM
all the musles feel like they have the same shading, There aren't a lot of soft transitions and hard transitions. If you are going to texture in lighting, texture in a sharp highlight or two.

Oh and where is his butt?

03 March 2004, 07:57 PM
the model is pretty cool
tho u could tweak the textures a bit like others have suggested
overoll its pretty cool . reminds me of stargate
keep it up

03 March 2004, 03:01 AM
Hey guys thanks for all of the response. I think this is the most I've ever got back. I took a break from this for a bit so I didnt get back to it till lately but I think I have finished it. So here are some renders and the finished texture map.

Thanks for the comments about his butt. It never hit me till you guys mentioned it and then I couldnt take my eyes off of it.

Thanks again...

Here the texture map

and some renders

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