XM Magdalena 3D print, GGeorgy (3D)
LC #42 Pipers Alley

View Full Version : Character : Bloated lord

02-16-2004, 01:23 PM
This is my new pic based on a scetch of my friend.

Hope you like it, any comments will be greatly appreciated

if it doest appear click the link below

Thanks again,


02-16-2004, 01:24 PM
if that doesnt work please use the url below


02-16-2004, 01:36 PM
lol! I like the title, nice render, it seems a little washed out, so hard to see al the details, I love the ground fog, nice touch!

02-16-2004, 02:27 PM
ok, just read the rules, no links alowed, sorry rich!!!

02-17-2004, 05:51 AM
So many veiw and only 1 comment, o well thaks for looking, if the image hasnt appeared please click the link.

Would really appreciate some crits on how to improve


02-17-2004, 08:49 AM
Nice model and nice atmosphere :) :thumbsup:
I like it.

But the background is a bit too "blurry". And the skin of the character looks a bit too smooth, too clean :) Try a bump map and some dirt on the diffuse map.

Overall, nice job. Like the fluid effectes too :)

02-17-2004, 09:16 AM
pic doesnīt load, links donīt work. :shrug:

02-17-2004, 11:45 AM
Wow, good modeling, If I was you then I'd make it a litlle bit Sharper , but ehn thas his face is amazing also lighting is good :applause: :applause:

02-17-2004, 01:02 PM
Thanks for your comments,

I wanted to give it a smooth feel as i wanted it to look like streached dry dead skin over a gassy intereios, hence the word bloated, i might concider doing a second vesion with a different bump to see what it looks like.

I agree it does look a bit blurry, i'll try to sort that out too.

Thaks for your crits, ill keep you updated.


02-18-2004, 05:12 AM
i would really appreciate some mre crits on how to improve, cheers


02-19-2004, 06:10 AM
ok, sorted it out so you can see it now!!!

sorry about that guys


02-19-2004, 06:13 AM
I still cant see it unless I click the link.

I think the model is great btw. The background could use some work but I like the model and texture

02-19-2004, 06:17 AM
whats goin on, 2 secs ago it worked!!!

lets try again


if it still doesnt work i dont know what to suggest?

Any help?!?!?!


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