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11 November 2003, 10:32 AM

I am Nikola from Serbia. This is my first post in here. I was modelling this guy for some time and plz critiz me 2 emprove my skills(sorry for bad english :) )!

also here's my scene:



11 November 2003, 11:15 PM
looking good sofar. i like the fact he has thick lips!

11 November 2003, 07:56 AM
I like the start of the model but your file names are tasteless. Grow up.

11 November 2003, 02:36 PM
I think it's more of a misunderstanding of cultural differences.

Looks like the ears could stand to be pulled out a little more.

11 November 2003, 01:57 AM
here's a little update

I had a problems with corners of the mounth & eyes if anyone could be so kind 2 download the scene and show me on my example :))

private guy or girl: I didnt mean 2 heart anybody, honestly!
Here in serbia we dont have such sort of feelings sorry again if I heart anybody I'll change the name of file as soon as I post the new sceen


Stroker : THZ! It was misunderstanding!

11 November 2003, 01:50 PM
-Here in serbia we dont have such sort of feelings

As in Serbia the country??

I wouldn't bet on any country AFA those 'sort of feelings' are concerned.

It's not a geographic thing but rather a human one.

Anywho,I'm sure you didn't mean to hurt people,just get a bit of attention.

Good luck in the future

11 November 2003, 09:38 PM
Many things you should take care in next time:
- The main head shape it's not going ok, did you use side view reference!?
- The upper area of the eyes should be more bigger..
- You should fix the nose corner which attach with mouth loop...
- And mouth corner is not ok..
- The neck is too wide.
- The ears must be bigger a little and go out...

And could you post wires, thanks

Good Luck

12 December 2003, 03:17 AM
Maybe it's been edited but I don't find anything about what has been posted as tasteless. That said, looks like a great start.

12 December 2003, 02:00 AM

I have made some changes in a nose & mounth area, still have a problem with mounth corner!

mounth - deleted 1 edgeloop becouse I had 2 much vertecies
nose - changed flow of the edges, fixied some bad triangles in the root of the nose with edge across the chic.
eyes - fixed part above the I eyelashies and them a little bit
neck - fixed

Is it better?

eYadNesS thz for participating

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