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04 April 2012, 05:05 PM
here is a project that i just finished hope you guys like it.

04 April 2012, 02:25 PM
Not bad motion, but whats with the flares? they are very distracting

04 April 2012, 02:54 PM
I agree with the flares, they're kinda distracting, i know is the LMFAO style however regarding animation, the first thing that pops is the lack of silhouette work, then about weights even if it's a toon character and most of it is whip-pose to pose, the key poses are not reflecting any weight on the banana.

You can do this exercise, try to stand still with your knees bent like your banana for a while, you'll see how hard it is that your character will stay in the same pose.

Then regarding the lines of action, you can do some 2 or 3 frame holds to express a better action coming out from your pose. I think that will help the whole video.

You have smooth transitions and trajectories are not bad at all but the lack of weight i think is something you can work on.

Peanutbutter jelly time!!! :D


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