View Full Version : The Great And Dangerous Pirate Red-beard, And_holzmeister (3D)

11-19-2003, 05:20 AM (

This is an image i did for the contest, and it also is going to be a Short Movie, that i´ll be working for in the next year. For now i plan to release it in December 2004, but time will tell. There will be a clay look in it, so fell free to reply with critics and comments, I´ll be pleased to have some feedback from you guys.

11-19-2003, 05:39 AM
I love the enviornment, the treasure chest especially. :buttrock:

11-19-2003, 06:24 AM
Hi thanx popnGEAR...

some other images of this project

11-19-2003, 06:29 AM
Great job, I like how everything looks squishy...:bounce: PROPZ dude.

11-19-2003, 08:52 AM
Great job!!!very interesting stile.Some animation?


11-19-2003, 09:34 AM
Very well done. I like the mood and the characters. Looking forward to the animation. :applause:

11-19-2003, 09:48 AM
Cool render! I really like colors and lighting.
Can't wait to see the animation!
Good work!

11-19-2003, 09:58 AM
This is rl grate. I like the lighting and the clay look.

11-19-2003, 09:57 PM
Hey guys... thanx for the feed back, and it still have no animation... but soon ill make some tests with them...

11-19-2003, 11:44 PM
This is awesome! I really like the fact that you are going for a clay look - it really suits it :) I'm sure it will look great when you start animating it.

I think it's really funny that this poor guy has not one but two hooks!! How does he dress himself? :p

Your style reminds me a lot of Lucasarts Monkey Island games - which is a style I really love!

I think this piece is fantastic - I'm putting it on the front page. Hope you get some good exposure for your film :D

11-20-2003, 12:02 AM
I agree. This is somewhat of a Monkey Islandian work, although I think the clay nature of it makes it truly stand out. Nice job on the character.

11-20-2003, 12:10 AM
Fala André blz??
Conquistando o pessoal por aqui tb, hein??
N me lembro se cheguei a postar alguma coisa no teu tópico lá do contest, mas to acompanhando ele de perto.
O meu tópico do contest eu larguei por falta de tempo, mas eu continuo fazendo ele, só naum pro contest.
Mas fico muito legal a sua cena, parabéns!

11-20-2003, 12:11 AM
I think the environment really stands out--looks really warm and friendly, with the volumetric lights shining down and all.

And yeah, that point about having 2 hooks has me confused too... how DOES he get around?

11-20-2003, 12:26 AM
You really deserves the front page my friend because this work is GREAT!!!!! :buttrock:

Será que os outros terão chance lá no contest???? hehehhe

Abração brother!

11-20-2003, 12:35 AM
No one dreads toilet paper time more than this guy :)

It's looking great so far. I too am enjoying the clay look

11-20-2003, 12:46 AM
i love it - great style, texturing, and lighting. it's freagin hilarious that he has two hooks. i was almost expecting two peg-legs...

11-20-2003, 01:31 AM
very good. A little ... too toy-like for me but well that's just me :p good work overall.

Monkey Island rocked, though I only played the first 2. CG was not what monkey island was about right, the voices were the strength and the extreme hilarious humour :D good ol' days.

11-20-2003, 03:16 AM
Wow lots of feed back, thanx Leigh!!!!:bounce:

Thanx everybody fro the comments and critics, thank you ville and Antropus, know that your work is inspiring for me my friend.

well people are talking 'bout the two hooks, well just think about the hilarious things that coud happen in a short movie to this guy, just 'couse he doesn't have a hand! And Yes, Monkey Island is my favorite adventure game, i love the art work of that game and its one of my references in the cartoon stile, and the main inspiration for this image. Now I'm gonna move to the outside of the ship!

Once again thanx everyone

11-20-2003, 03:40 AM
very nice ... nice lighting...cute characters

11-20-2003, 03:47 AM
I love the style!!!! Very Guybrush Threepwood! Cant wait to see the short.

11-20-2003, 03:55 AM
Very nicely done treasure chest looks mint

11-20-2003, 04:39 AM
I like the light !! nice job

11-20-2003, 06:00 AM
I must say that you captured the clay look. I like the lighting in your first image.

11-20-2003, 06:05 AM
wow! thats great!:thumbsup: i really like the colour usage and lighting.

great work man! go on:thumbsup:

11-20-2003, 06:14 AM
I like the clay look. It really comes across well. The lighting fits the environment nicely. But I did have a question about his right eyebrow. Did you intend for the eyepatch to go under his eyebrow? Just wondering. It's a solid piece. Nice work

11-20-2003, 06:49 AM
Nice work :)

11-20-2003, 06:55 AM
Outstanding! But I have a baised towards pirates. :thumbsup: It looks great and I love the clay look aswell. I can't wait to see the animation... if it's anything like the modeling goodness.

11-20-2003, 06:57 AM
i love it! great idea with the clay look and feel.

11-20-2003, 08:32 AM
thw character rocks, but light and shading uberrock:buttrock:

could you perhaps tell us abbout your lightrigg and the texturing ... would be great to share your pirate-lightning-treasure

I am allready looking forward to every still coming out of your production and when the short is ready I´ll sit in the first row ... get your popcorn ready:thumbsup:

11-20-2003, 09:12 AM
I love the use of the light!!!!:love: :love: :love:

11-20-2003, 09:12 AM
The arms look very thin, but then again, that might be what you wanted..In the first picture it's kinda hard to see the mans facial expression..

This is an outstanding piece of work, the colors and compositions are great! Keep it up:)

I almost forgot to say hey to the community. I'm new here, looking forward to interacting with you guys and gals!

11-20-2003, 09:12 AM
Hi kid , you made it . Incredible job. I loved the mood and the colours. The enviroment are great too.
E eu concordo com o Antropus, você fêz uma covardia com os outros do contest.

Eles não vão ter a menor chance contra vc!!!!! :)

Congrats !!!

11-20-2003, 09:23 AM
really like the env ! the ship is well done ! erally into comic style...

11-20-2003, 10:35 AM
Great work André! Once more, I liked most the style.

Mais um brazuca no hall da fama, valeu cara.

Guilherme Lopes

11-20-2003, 11:36 AM
Great work! love the fact that he has two hooks in the place of his hands, the clay look is also fantastic.:applause:

Muito loco, vŽio!

11-20-2003, 11:41 AM
looks very nice.


11-20-2003, 12:19 PM
AWSOME work Andre!!!!! As usual!!! :applause:

You certainly deserved this front page!!! :beer:


11-20-2003, 01:08 PM
I like the clay feel of it. My only crit would be for a different colour for the shirt.

11-20-2003, 02:34 PM
Hey Andre!!

You are the man!!!Your work just rocks!! Congratualtions for you!! You deserve it!!

Um abraço!!

11-20-2003, 03:22 PM

11-20-2003, 03:39 PM
Loving it all the way.

11-20-2003, 04:03 PM
Looks great!

One crit:

Its going to be kinda hard to get much expression out of his face when you cant see it. First thing I thought when I saw the image was, "Where's this guys face?" It was really hard to read. The parrot stood out really well, but I had to look at the second image before I understood what was going on.

11-20-2003, 04:29 PM
oh man, this is really beautifull, i like the color, the lighting expecially....congratulations

11-20-2003, 04:50 PM
bom trampo man.,,..,.
keep on going....



quero ver a animation....


11-20-2003, 09:39 PM
Hi, great clay style.
Can you tell us how do your clay material?
Sorry mine english.
Un saludo.

11-21-2003, 12:34 AM
Hi guys, tank you all for the great feedback.
Mr.Solo and Blackbean , nice to see you guys here. thanx 4 the comments!

Agreenster, well this guy is going to talk from his mustache, the lipsync will be done in most part from his mustache. since it is a clay style guy, his emotions will not be as great as Wasawsky (damn they animated him damn good!!!), but he is still going to have lots of emotions, his eyes could no deform too much, but his eyebrows will move a lot... and a lot of body expression, strong poses and strong line actions! wich me luck heheheh!:thumbsup:

11-21-2003, 02:58 AM
so in the film, will the pirate divulge how he lost his two hands?

does he have a chip on his shoulder like Captain Hook has?

I would imagine him being a happy guy with all that "booty" from the chest! :scream:

11-21-2003, 03:29 AM
Pretty good. It is a bit too colorful for my taste, and those barrels look way too clayey. The volume lighting looks good.

11-21-2003, 04:12 PM
"Face" I found that very good scene, an only style, that is that really matters!!!!

"Until more"
Maycon Chaves

11-24-2003, 12:22 PM
Hey great work! Instantly reminded me of my pirate lego i used to own so many years ago... :thumbsup:

11-26-2003, 11:13 AM
good work :thumbsup:
the power of max

11-28-2003, 01:44 AM
Excelent job!!! :bounce: :bounce:

I loved the feeling and the mood!!

Bom trabalho! It's we on the tape!

Devagar a gente chega lá!

Parabéns!!! :bowdown:

12-02-2003, 03:00 AM
Hey, that's very cool! I like how you kept the mesh so simple!

Care to expand a little on the clay texture look?

Great character! Good luck with him!


03-14-2005, 04:47 PM
This one reminds me about Monkey Island 3.
Cool one...

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