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02 February 2012, 01:14 PM
Hello every body

In this challenge I decide to make mythical character. I get my idea as one of the interesting God of Russia; the name is ďPronĒ. He fight with devil and darkness and at the end he keep the power of sun. He used special weapon, name Thunder and Lightning. Actually I didnít see any picture of it just a word I read in book about Pron. I try to make it good as possible

Wish me lock:)

02 February 2012, 01:56 PM

02 February 2012, 02:03 PM
I started with basic body of mudbox and created my structure.

02 February 2012, 02:07 PM
Re topology and uv

02 February 2012, 02:09 PM
add some detail

03 March 2012, 07:20 AM
I finish sculpting on some cloth and now I must add more detail. such as cloth material and so on.
actually I still have more cloth, Robe and some detail on belt and the other things you will see.

03 March 2012, 08:03 AM
well! I think this is enough for cloths. now I'm going to prepare some other stuff. I mean weapon and other object.

03 March 2012, 08:40 AM
Nice job.
I think you better work more on the anatomy of the face,the eyes seems bigger than normal and the jaw seems smaller for this kind of character..
Very nice job till now,,,will keep an eye on it.
Best of luck

03 March 2012, 09:02 AM
Hi dear
Thanks to you for comment. I have more work on face, you'll see :) my friend.

03 March 2012, 05:39 PM
It's a great work totally!
I think the proportions of the head comparing to body is a little off. Also the scars of the face are a little too exaggerated.
Can't wait to see the final result!
Keep it up girl :)

03 March 2012, 07:22 AM
i wish you win on this challenge

03 March 2012, 10:20 AM
Great work ZeinabNematzade!

I've got a doubt tho, how are you going to deal with the holes on the cloths? will you render a high poly mesh?
I planned to add some to my model but I'm not confident enough of the final result when I set up normal, disp and/or bump maps over a lower resolution mesh.


03 March 2012, 11:48 AM
Hi Ali
Thanks for your comet and giving me a hope to continue :)about face and scarf actually i like exaggerate

Thanks Naser :)

Thanks my friend
You know we don't have ability to delete polygon in mudbox if you want low res mesh with disp/NB you must have a perfect re topology after your structure done in mudbox.
yes I want to render high res mesh in softimage because it has a fix frame :) .
Good luck

03 March 2012, 11:40 AM
This is some stuff as I said before without texture. after that I'm going to make Sword and maybe shield for Pron.
I want to say something funny: I have a lot a DAMN problem with uploading this pictures; because in Iran they filtering all the free web host for picture (for example tinypic). so I have to use many Proxy with just 2kb speed!

03 March 2012, 11:48 AM
full view without texture and with all stuff I show you in up.

03 March 2012, 01:23 PM
Iím still working on texture. I just want to show you a part of my work

03 March 2012, 11:06 AM
Nice , you work like boys . :)

03 March 2012, 07:30 PM
Here is my all body I show you with texture and I must going to texture another stuff.
Wish me luck:D

03 March 2012, 07:32 PM
Hi changiz
Thanks. I don't think so be a man has a good reason to be a Perfect!

03 March 2012, 10:05 AM
well, this is pron's weapon. I like it :cool: so I'm going to render.

03 March 2012, 06:56 PM
Actually, I think pron need some change in cloth and maybe I better look back and change some other stuff .I give some render and it seems not like I want first i try to reach something more satisfy me.I know the time is nearly over :( but I don't disappointed. :surprised

04 April 2012, 08:31 PM
Its going in a good direction,for one thing,i think you should work more on the sword than make it in normal maps,nothing is like a good detail model.and the other weapon reminds me of freddy Kruger in nightmare on Elm street movies.its better to change it a little more to make it more original...

Everything looks good specialty the hands and cloths.i still think you can work more on the Eyes and the shapes,the only thing that catches eye at first..

Continue the good work.I'm looking forward to it.

04 April 2012, 08:51 AM
Hi kmest
Thank you so much for tour benefit suggestion.Actually I changed a lot of stuff especially weapons and I agree with :) I hope this time is going to better.Wish me luck my friend.

04 April 2012, 09:04 AM
So, I Change a lot of stuff and I more satisfy than before. More over I want to add more detail if i have enough time. Also about this tattoo there going to lighting or something very shining and the black color don't see any more :) my pron going to something like Wizard.I waiting to your suggestion my friends :)

04 April 2012, 06:32 AM
My first render. I try to change some detail like fire. I make it in photoshop. But I want to make real fire with ICE or FumeFx. If I don't have enough time I have have to keep this one.
I feel it so better now!
every suggestion is welcome:beer:

04 April 2012, 09:51 AM
Very nice.It would be great if you put a higher resolution with Anti-Aliasing to see what is actually happening here.By what i see here ,it would be great to add some SSS to the skin (or make it more if it's already there).And put a back light to create a nicer Rim light over the character (or make it more).a more dense fill light can help too. and i think it can be better to work more with the shaders to NOT have those Burned/Saturated areas in the stick.those things normally don't happen in real world.

Over all.great art work by now :) Congrats

04 April 2012, 10:29 AM
Hi kmest
thanks to you again my friend for benefit advise.
it's already in 5000*3000 pixel! if you want to see more detail click on View Image.
I try to working more on lighting and shadow.
actually I think my work need more contrast between light and shadow. it seem nearly too my subject.
anyway I attention to your citric.

04 April 2012, 11:24 AM
Oh i see the big one and things are very different here.very nice details and textures.although i still think a Rim light,specially in lower parts can make a contrast between the character and the dark background.and make the mask brighter,nice details over there and we cant see em,
Plus,i dont know about the tatoos on the body but i think if you use a Glow effects in softwares like Fusion or after effects,they can create better results.

And love the hairs on the face ;)
keep going

04 April 2012, 12:39 PM
Great progress!
Just remember, an improper lighting destroys a great artwork. at the moment most of the good work you did and the details you added to your character is not visible. Try to take advantage of a suitable 3 point lighting system and add some more local lights to reveal subtle details you paid attention to.
Good luck!

04 April 2012, 09:19 PM
Wow , So Cool . :bowdown:

04 April 2012, 05:23 AM
Thanks dear bigquix
I agree with you and try to change lighting.:thumbsup:

Dear kmest

I actually think so about glow effect and detail so i work on it.:)

Thanks a lot changiz :thumbsup:

04 April 2012, 03:55 PM
well I change the lighting and glow effect.
This is my final image. If I have time I make a fire for stick. So I most put an another picture (3/4) with a scene. I made that scene, just put in it toghether.
please be sure you see my real size.
wish me luck:hmm:

04 April 2012, 09:00 AM
Musbox model Sheet

04 April 2012, 11:08 AM
this is some stuff with texture and sculpting I better put them sooner.

04 April 2012, 06:41 AM
Final Image2

04 April 2012, 09:03 PM
very nice job congtars....
The lighting and model details are great...and i love the final pose.
Wish you luck on the voting

04 April 2012, 08:55 AM
Hi dear kmest
I so appreciate you about fallowing my work and you help me so much.
Actually I hope so too, about win, but if not I have so fun and give a lo of experience any way :)

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