11 November 2003, 11:34 AM
First of all it's very dark, and second it is quite uninteresting. No offence! I think you could improve it by adding some small objects lying on the table. Also, now the drawing is lined up exactly with the boards of the tabletop, I would rotate it so it looks more random. I also think the hand pointing doesn't seem motivated. I mean, what is it pointing at? It would be cool if the hand held a pencil, drawing the picture!
01 January 2006, 04:00 PM
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