Scene: Icarus and father

[Garma]

I love this piece. Excellent use of colours and composition :thumbsup:

I don't like the legs and the feet. dunno what you want with that but it doesn't feel right imho. Also a little too much grain I think, screws up details.

[Lalie]

Thx :)

Yes, you're right for the feet, the are really ugly :rolleyes: I had short time to do that so some details need more works.

http://lalie.3dvf.net/concours/prinscreen.jpg


http://lalie.3dvf.net/concours/prinscreen2.jpg

[toce]

Lalite rules the world :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[3d41andi]

OMG....this is great...eventhough i dont like the feet....but this is a nice style.....5stars from me...:buttrock:

[maruku]

yep five stars for me too.
very nice lalie's style.
:bowdown: :bowdown:

[xtrm3d]

Hope you'll like it

hooo yes i like it ..
something i really like is the rendering..look like a french comic..
and the proportion of the carachter are symply too good !!

5 star !!!

:beer:

[xtrm3d]

i was on your web page ..
and now i know.. why i love your style so much !!!
something really fresh and original !!

haaa.. rien de mieux qu´une bonne B.D ..surtout si elle est faite en 3d !!

se serait trop cool si newtek europ pouvait faire un " profile " sur ta personne ..

:bounce: :bounce:

[Raphael-Lacoste]

c'est bein bein Joli lalie :)
belle compo, belles couleurs, tu l'envoie Pour EXPOSE2 j'espère ! ...
allez! j'en veux une autre :p

ps: demain -28°C... et pas dans le vent Asti!

a+

[chatta]

excellent work :bowdown: :bowdown:

[vlad74]

amazing compozition and colours.:applause:

[Lalie]

Hey thanks lot for the stars! :p Old post come back and get comments, heh too cool

xtrm3d > ah ben ca me touche.. vraiment :blush: Ben Vost m'a contactee pour l'interview, chui toute genee

El Rafo > Brrr je te plein, ca fait frette en maudit :D On verra pour Expose 2 si j'ai le temps d'ici la cloture

Thks all!

[dimitrios_c]

I really like the final rendering and I also like the wires. But together I don't like the way they turned out. It seems like you did all this hard work on the modeling but your hard work doesn't show in the final rendering. The final image could have been produced in 2D rather easily compared to the time you would have spent working in 3D. Perhaps try using the models and use a different rendering style that shows your work a little more..:thumbsup:

[teruchan]

Great image, though a bit hard to tell what's going on in it..

Judging from your web page, tour comic is going to be phenomenal!

Keep it up!

T

[Andrew W]

This is a very beautiful image. I think it's one of the best things I've seen on this site. My only crit would be the feet (but you fixed them already) and maybe there is a little too much grain. These are only minor complaints, overall it's a fabulous piece of work.

Do you by any chance like the work of Jeffrey Jones? The tones and colours in your work really remind me of his work, though he's a painter of course.

Brilliant! Very inspirational.

Andrew

[mikepolizos]

Excellent work, although is a bit dark (IMO)!

Keep up the good work!

:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[wallabee]

i can't help but feel like the composition of this beautiful and obviously impressive 3d still is overshadowed by the lack of difference between the father and the boy. when i first loaded the page i had no problem deciding that icarus was in the frame due to the wings, but the boy being held tends to blend into his father, and starts to take on BEING the father. perhaps this is what you want, i just find it quite confusing.

the best way would be to shift some light on the situation in a literal sense and play around with it- of course, if you're happy, it just takes a minute of pondering to really understand what's going on. quite a nice piece.

[rickycox]

Hey Lalie love your work, looking forward to the interview and the comix. Some of the best Lightwave stuff I've seen.

[Nemoid]

Ton BD sera fantastique, Lalie!! J'aime beaocoup
le rendering de ton images. :applause: et la modelisation
des personnages de la BD dans le site. :love:

IMO cette image manque d'un bon centre d'interet,
focus dans le deux heros . la face d'Icarus doit etre visible!

excusez moi , mon francais n'est pas des meilleurs!!

[doude]

:p je te le redis Lalie, chouette boulot!

la composition est très belle et la lumière aussi, j'aime beaucoup.

Si:rolleyes: juste un ptit truc qui me gène, c'est la lisibilité des personnages, on distingue pas assez les visages peut être, mais bon, on va pas chipoter...

good stuff :buttrock:


catmandu.

[pandera]

well.. very european... ;)

I'd like to see te faces of all these people who claim that CG is not creative and reqiues no skills when they are told that this is not a "hand made" image...

simply great

[firstsingle]

Hey Lalie. I understand this piece and why you added so much grain. Looks like a painting. Great work. I'd put this on my living room wall in a heartbeat. Way to use LightWave:bowdown:

[OperaFan1981]

Please, fix the feet! It looks abnorally elongated! Other than that, very artistic image.

[Lalie]

Oh thanks all for those new comments :)

I wont change this illustration at this time but i take good notes for next ones

I add here the text who inspire me when i did research about contest's subject (i did'nt find the original author :hmm:) :

...."The sun began to beat down on the wings of Icarus, and slowly they began to melt. Icarus noticed the wings coming apart, but in his joy kept on beating the wings faster and faster bringing him ever further towards the sun. Soon all the feathers had fallen from the wings of Icarus and the boy plunged down into the Aegean Sea.

Deadalus looked for his son but could see him nowhere. He then looked down at the sea and his heart broke as he saw the feathers of his son's wings floating on the sea. Deadalus dove towards the sea snatching his son's body out of the water but alas it was to late. Deadalus carried the body of his son as both their feet dragged on the sea below, as a result of the great weight now placed on his wings by the two bodies they now supported. Deadalus took the body of his son and buried it on an island called Icaria in his son's memory." ... -unknow author-

thx again all !

[Lalie]

Originally posted by Andrew W
Do you by any chance like the work of Jeffrey Jones? The tones and colours in your work really remind me of his work, though he's a painter of course.


No, i did'n know him, but i just made a research on google on his name and find his site... it's a great compliment you make to me! :) Really like his work! Thanks to make me discover...

Nemoid > heh your french il better than my english ;)

[xtrm3d]

salut :-)
nice to see that this thread is still alive :thumbsup:

alors ???? et cet interview ? il avance ?
:drool:

[gent_k]

i agree with mikepol, it's a bit dark.

But other than that and the huge feet, its great work.

[Fire_Master...]

this is such an amaysing peice, it makes you reely stop and take a look at it its just amaysing
although im not too crazy about the feet its still a verry good peice.

[iXaarii]

I can't really figure out the contents clearly .. but it's that kind of: can't figure it out but I like it ;P

[Gnomeman]

Beautiful! The best I've seen here.

I'd love to see more of your work.

[sleiron]

Salue Lalie

J'aime beacoup cette image retouche en maniere que je pensais c'etait dessinez a main.

Mes compliments aussi pour ton site avec les dragons! Surtout la page avec les techniques!

J'ai seulment commencer avec LW il y a 3 mois
maintenant e je vais surement retourner sur ton
site pour y 'respirez' de l'inspiration!

Lalie - avec un mot: you rock !! :bowdown:

cheers
sleiron de la Suisse

[wachstum]

Refreshing take of the theme, could be even more stylized.

[Perkar]

oh my .... awsome stufff... men you're a... a... a... god !

[maruku]

she is a woman ;)

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