Some stills from my animation

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http://www.flicker-free.com/approach01.jpg
http://www.flicker-free.com/faceoff01.jpg

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http://www.flicker-free.com/slam01.jpg
http://www.flicker-free.com/down04.jpg

[samer]

:applause: :applause: :applause:

[j00st81]

hehe, nice, I really like the last one, tho theyr'e all a bit dark, could u post the animation again?:bounce:

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Thanks :)

They're dark because I pulled them right from the video, from DV tape.

I'll repost the info on my animation:

Still tightening a few things up, but pretty much done my first CG short film. It clocks in at around 14 mb, and is in the DivX 5 format.

As I'm still in a position to change minor things, I'd love any and all feedback.

Here's the link: http://www.flicker-free.com/divbot.avi

Download the DivX codec here: http://download.divx.com/divx/DivX501Bundle.exe

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Just looking for a couple more comments :)

[Wiro]

Nice cinematography (lighting, dof, etc) but the animation should still be polished. The dog did walk quite stiffly and didn't convey weight. I'm aware that it was supposed to be damaged but the motions were quite linear. Some hip/shoulder twisting during the walk would make it much more alive.

I also didn't quite understand the story but I'm said to be quite dense at times :)

Wiro

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Thanks for the comment Wiro.

Animation is definitely my weak point, I'm not very experienced with it this being my first real attempt. Don't worry about the story. I'm in the camp where I let people take what they want from it without imposing any sort of set ideas.

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