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sander0105
10-31-2003, 10:16 PM
Here's a WIP of a living room i'm working on. Still needs al lot of tweaking.

http://home.wanadoo.nl/mwcmulders/zooi/wip6.jpg

Moddeld with MAYA 5.0 and renderd with Mental Ray.

C&C please

gmask
11-29-2003, 06:32 PM
Overall it's pretty good but the image could use more contrast. Some of the shadows seems a bit sharp and the arms on the chairs look tesselated..maybe they are meant to look like that?

Any updates?

wgreenlee1
11-29-2003, 07:04 PM
looks like you used point light for the ouside light and thats making the shadows look funny on the floor...likeit is a point light..instead of the sun

boboroshi
11-29-2003, 07:17 PM
Are the windows translucent? if so, you wouldn't have harsh shadows. The bounce light looks good. Japanese Tea Room kind of feel.

The Phillipe Stark (?) style furniture is cool too. I'd work on the curved pieces in the foreground, they look very polygonal right now instead of a smooth bent piece of metal.

The lights sitting below the midline on the wall give it an odd effect of being either against a 3d surface or painted onto the wall (especially on the left side)

On the right side, there appeasr to be some kind of light happening. If it's from the light below, it needs to affect the wall immidiately above it. Otherwise, it needs to be taken out.

Looking good tho.

sander0105
11-30-2003, 02:09 PM
@ gmask

Here's the allmost final

http://home.wanadoo.nl/mwcmulders/zooi/final2.jpg

@ wgreenlee1

I used a spotlight as sun. The shadow problem should be solved now.

@ boboroshi
The translucent-like windows were because of the white background.
And the chair in the front should be tesselated, but it won't look nice... some work is needed there.

The light of the richt side is because there's the entrance (without a door) so some light is coming trough there too.

gmask
11-30-2003, 06:12 PM
I think the walls are glowing too miuch and the pictures need some shadowing

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