Character : Al

[AstroSanchezz]

it looks nice so far
keep workin on it
i don't really have any crits for you right now

[Dennispls]

looks good
but make the eyes round not with a row of edges moved a bit to the inside
doesnt look good
and mayb make the face less tall
thats all
greets
dennis

[Septeven]

so the follow of this wip...
ears for the next wip

http://nt2k1.free.fr/wipforums/al/al03.jpg

[Septeven]

No comments ??? :(
So, the following part : (ears, i'm sorry for these horrible ears :D)

http://nt2k1.free.fr/wipforums/al/al05.jpg

[coCoKNIght]

wow, that's looking great! Tell us something 'bout your character please!

[tubby]

i really like your character! some things that might help improve it is maybe get rid of the vertical bump between the eyebrows where the nose meets them, maybe make that area go in instead of out. I love the nose as well as the line of the brows and the cheeks. the lips could use a little work, maybe give the lower lip a little more shape right now it had little form and is too consistent.on hte upper lip i would add a little more volume, maybe give the center of the upper lip a subtle bump in the middle, not where its indented, but below that area. The chin could use a little more detail too, it doesn't stand out as a problem right now, im just nitpicking. I personally like how tall and narrow the head is, I think its really nicely stylzed, but if your going for realistic then it should be a little less tall. Great work!

[Volcandro]

That's gonna be a very cool character.
It is Frankenstein ???

[Septeven]

Thanx for your comments guys ;)
No is not frankenstein ;)
A 360° view avi (871 ko) with a few details added ...

http://nt2k1.free.fr/wipforums/al/360_01.jpg (http://nt2k1.free.fr/wipforums/al/360_01.avi)

[Septeven]

No news comments ??
So next part, with few details added!
I will work on ear, and make teeth for the following wip...

http://nt2k1.free.fr/wipforums/al/al06.jpg

[inaktive]

the eyebrows and forehead look kinda funny now

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