I want to evolve

[Shellow]

the others view :

http://membres.lycos.fr/eultime/WIP/concept/xcab04.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/eultime/WIP/concept/xcab05.jpg

[ODoul]

Actually, I think it looks pretty good. I would definately change the anti-alias settings in the render settings to best though.

[Geespot]

I realy like this render! is it HDRI?

Its got like a toon effect on it, not photorealistic... and I really like it. It looks 'tasty' ;)

keep up the good work

[Shellow]

It isn't HDRI,there are a mixture of toon render and basic render .In fact the mesh isn't definitaly end .THX for yours helps ,and Sorry for the english fault !!

[brammelo]

Salut,

Could you post a wire - I have the impression that the back side of the door is a bit messed up. That, or your phong shading is off.

Et comme tu disais: il faut en effet bien commencer un jour.

Ciao,
BaRa.

P.S.: es-tu au courant de l'existence de http://www.frenchcinema4d.com/ ?

[Shellow]

The wire:
http://membres.lycos.fr/eultime/WIP/concept/wire01.jpg

http://membres.lycos.fr/eultime/WIP/concept/wire02.jpg

Brammelo :Oui je connais FC4D j'en fait partie mais là je viens chercher des commentaires plus "pro" pour améliorer mon travail

[flingster]

wow thats a real hybrid of a car...got detailing from all sorts of cars. nice work..the only thing that was bugging me was the AA...but someone pointed that out.
i think the indictator light on the wing mirror needs work..

just out of interest why did you hesitate posting to this forum?
and as for english its just fine no worries...i go on the ditools forum and thats mainly german but so long as people are positive i don't think its really an issue.:thumbsup:

[Shellow]

Originally posted by flingster
just out of interest why did you hesitate posting to this forum?
and as for english its just fine no worries...i go on the ditools forum and thats mainly german but so long as people are positive i don't think its really an issue.:thumbsup:

I hesitated besause i thinked that my creations didn't have level enough when i saw the Murcielago and the SL600 of ThirdEyes !!:eek:

[flingster]

ok thats enough to make anyone choke...
BUT and this is for any lurkers out there...thirdeye had to start somewhere....the beauty of this forum is that thirdeye contributes so he can crit from experience helping you develop, i would imagine he still considers himself learning also....
it can be difficult sometimes on a forum of mixed abilities but we are all always learning...and having said that you already seem to have learn't a fair bit already..:beer:

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