Check this illustration!!

[jeroentje]

Hmm, interesting thing. Have no idea what I'm looking at :)

It could use a bit more tension though.
Just a suggestion: try rotate the whole thing counter-clockwise for just a few degrees except the 3 numbered boxes in the right corner. And if you do, move that blue thing in the upper right to the left and put it a bit behind the green thing on the left.
Maybe that will work, maybe not. Just see 4 yourself. Graphic design is a lot of moving around with your ingredients (hmm, odd expression maybe :hmm: ).
I think it's great to see graphic design here aswell!

Keep posting!!!
jeroentje :beer:

[Display]

hey jeroentje,

Thanks a lot for the reply!!

I'll try to do the changes as soon as possible..maybe you right about that.

I know that it look's kinda weird, and the "no idea what I'm looking at " thought may be present, but well..it's something I like to do.
It is some kind of modern expression in digital illustration...and I hope to do it good and well some day!!

Cheers

-display-

[jeroentje]

Originally posted by Display
... the "no idea what I'm looking at " thought may be present, but well..it's something I like to do ...

Exactly... and that's what I think is interesting in it.
jeroentje

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left look not well!you can use more time to amend it!

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