Character: Human Female

[Valandar]

Outstanding work, Mod!

About the biggest thing that jumped out at me was the breasts didn't look... natural. The sternum is a bit too wide, and the slope wasn't quite smooth enough, especially when seen from the front...

[J.K.Makowka]

Great work so far, but the forehead and the ears need some work.

Edit: the the jawbone is completly wrong... almost looks like a square...or is not existant
Overall the side view of the head is what bugs me most.
But the body is really god so far (see above post about the b00bs but I am not sure about that)

[Modulok]

Faces, always the hardest part hehe.

Thanks both of you for your feedback, it's nice to have someone else look at it and point out things that need to be re-looked at. After staring at it for so many hours it becomes harder and harder to pick out the small errors.

-Modulok-

[Pillboxx]

Nice model, I like what you are doing. But now the critique... The line in the forehead at the arch of the brow is good, do loose that when you tweak it.

Now the ear, I don't know if you are making an elf or what but it is a little to pointy, but besides that it appears that you have an extra wrinkle in the ear, if that is how to say it. Oh and they are laying a little to flat against the head.

I actually like the jawbone. It is a female and a prominent jawbone would make her look masculine.

I like the lips but I think the bottom one should be a little fuller. A good bottom lip tends to have a sausage shape. Good lips check for pictures of a model named Adiana Lima. Best lips I have seen.

Great job, keep at it.

[Modulok]

Pillboxx, yeah, I agree about the ears being too flat against the head, good call. About the point and extra fold, yeah, elf ears :)


Thanks for the input so far guys...
-Modulok-

[drewantarctic]

it looks good so far, but i feel you are missing a few basic internal structures.
first is the iliac crest, her hips are not pronounced, considering how wide they are.
also her breast muscle doesnt extend into the shoulder or around the sides of her ripcage very much. unless she has breast implants, you should fix that.
her leg muscles, just above the knee is a bit too far off. those usually sag a bit more, plus connect just abov the kneecap.
i think the neck muscles that you have going behind the ear should actually be closer to the jawline. they usually have no space between them.
lastly her legs dont tuck the buttocks to the back. the but starts more toward the upper outside and works its way inwardly and tucks between the legs.
and thats all i have to say critwise. good luck!

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