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nightmarejan
06-17-2011, 01:11 AM
hey guys. im currently in the concept stage of a graphic novel (a oneshot). i would like to show you guys what i currently have, which are some rough monochrome drafts of the characters. the setting of the plot is around post WW2, which explains some of the old attires/ fashion.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2168/5815243928_66fa9acac7.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2115/5820873575_26642f5799.jpg



http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3227/5821435720_ef7a442b26.jpg


http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2763/5834468088_900b15ff8f.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3342/5833913931_d7a418fed8.jpg

http://img57.pixiv.net/img/nightmarejan/19647942_m.jpg

http://img57.pixiv.net/img/nightmarejan/19687085_m.jpg

any feedback, comments, or suggestions are greatly appreciated!

thanks, ;-)
Scubasteve
06-17-2011, 04:14 AM
They look good but very stylized. The problem to me as far as Manga characters is that nothing really sets them apart to me. Even down to their clothing. The first girls pose looks really weird to me. Solid sketches though.
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