A few of my works...

[Hmura]

Hi there, Heres some comments from me :)

BedBug = I love this little guy, nice modeling and texturing. It has a lot of character and the pose is great. One thing though I see you used DOF in the render, i dont think that was necessary. Other than That great little guy. Would love to see him animated.

Elf with Worms = Again very good character, texturing is cool. I would like to see him close up. With the DOF you used here he seems a bit too sharp for the scene.

Headman = Very nice modeling Here. I like the way you modeled his mouth and nose especially. A couple of things that might need a little work on are his ears, his jaw and I think you should also fix up the eyes a bit. The eye sockets are a bit too round especially where they meet, and they also go a bit too far back.

Alice = Its a nice scene with good textures, but the thing I noticed is that their faces seem dead and lifeless and they arent facing each other.

Boy Dark = Nice character, I like the design, he looks like mischievious little guy. Nice textures as well.

Smiley = Very good modeling, Only one crit. Some of the teeth look like they are going through the lip.

Well there you go. Keep up the good work.
HMURA

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