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UncleSilas

10-27-2003, 10:31 PM

Cinema 4D
Internal Renderer

http://www.users.qwest.net/~tmark8/garden.jpg

I'm still a newbie. I've been modeling for 2 months. This work was done as a class assignment in a beginning 3d modeling class. It's my 3rd assignment.

Some detail was lost when I cropped the render for size so here's the full size image:

(600k)
http://www.users.qwest.net/~tmark8/gardenFull.jpg

Also, thanks to CGTalk.com for showing all these beautiful images which give me something to live up to.

:)

mirror

10-27-2003, 11:15 PM

Didn't know if you wanted crits. Nice image. Good Composition and the lighting is definitely early morning blue. I also like the way you have avoided making the hose perfectly circular.

UncleSilas

10-27-2003, 11:39 PM

Thanks mirror! And yes, Criticism is accepted and very welcome.

Bytehawk

10-28-2003, 12:18 AM

great image
good lighting

some crits (minor ones though)
- the leaves seem to be too thick, maybe make them a little tranlucent and add a crumple bumpmap to them?
- the hook for the garden hose needs a slight bevel. It looks too sharp.
- the grass needs a little toned down green. and a little variation in colour (by the leaves I suppose it's fall, the grass should reflect that time of year no?)

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