ALIENWARE Challenge Entry: Paulina

[pau]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1073873044_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1073873044_large.jpg)

hi all , this is my skeching im little late,but im working as fast as i can to achive a good result, comments or crits? :)

[Fin]

Since it's only a concept sketch it may be somewhat early to comment, but those shell-like structures certainly look interesting. :)

[pau]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074147086_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074147086_large.jpg)

Hi, I´m developing my model now, I have to do it as fast as I can ´cause there´s no so much time left :)
suggestions and critics are very welcome

[Pyke]

Wow! Concept and modeling are very close-which is always a goo dthing!

Carry on good sir!

[pau]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074220858_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074220858_large.jpg)

Hi all, now I´m doing some texturing tests and also I start a little bit with my lighting process.

all your suggestions are very wellcome

thanx :)

[eska]

I like it.
It has a great feeling of space. You could use some DOF, make some kind of fresh colors, and bring in this the picture to life.
Good work, and best of the best.
:wavey:

[pau]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074406440_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074406440_large.jpg)

Hi, now I´m doing my waterfalls with particle system, and this is one test of render.

Thanx for your suggestions.

[pau]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074475138_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074475138_large.jpg)

Hi :)
finally I finished my image, I hope U like it.
Thanx for your comments.

[eska]

Good going. So now, if possible, introduce some light from the right upper corner. You will be surprised what nice and logical effect you will achive.
Best luck:bounce: :wavey:

[pau]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074476416_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074476416_large.jpg)

hi, I almost forget to show U the lights I used for my scene.
:)

[pau]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074476553_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074476553_large.jpg)

this is my basic image, before the compositing.
:)

[pau]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074476644_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/940/940_1074476644_large.jpg)

and also, this is the background I made

[high]

Great! But is better if you can put a cloud plane with the effect in the concept sketch some gradients with noise will be great. and add some lens efects in the stars for more realism.

Just my humble opnion...:p

[rattlesnake]

you miss the story

[pau]

Finally, this land I think is far, far away in another galaxy on a planet full of wather and the civilization who live there likes to make buildings on the stones and there is no sun, is allways night.

Thanx to all the people who made some suggestions.

See you later.

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